Diss to a skinny bitch I know...feedback please!!!!!

[G-Dogg]

You ugly mothafucka, structure only made outta bones//
I'd rather see you covered in a sheet and have people throwin' stones//
Couldn't make one normal person outta yo ass even if we made a hundred clones//
I cum ya in tha face and bring a verbal apocalypse//
have it drippin from ya vertebras and replace ya discs//
It looks like you stole that face from one of them horror flicks//
No tits or booty so you don't even qualifie to be a hootchie, a straight skeleton//
So you've always been seen a ya parents favourite and only son//
A bitch in lack of so much oestrogen she's a shemale//
people would of even pay yo ass to get tha fuck outta tha auction sale//
And if yo ass went to jail ya own mama wouldn't try to pay the bail//
ya'll know what they say 'bout Polish quality//that it's garabage...and she's polish...lol
If I accedentely caught you on a foto id erase you from the picture, thank god for modern technology!//
like an enzyme I split you into smaller pieces for only minor reasons//
If you were in a movie I'd look away in all possible sequences//
Soon it's summer time but dayme tahat body in a bikini//
Makes me wanna rip my fucking eyez out and place em in my martini//
Bitch I love violence I'm worse than Benito Mussolini//

yep yep that's what's up...gimme some feedback aight!

[illogikaal]

yo it aint bad aint bad son but i been rappin for like 8 years so u can take notice of my opinion or not ok so...

first off lets get the critical shit out the way

i dunno if its just ur accent but the flow and the rhymes didnt sometimes connect i mean it probably wud work if the beat changed half way thru

uh if ur dissin a girl then its probably for a reason and its hard to hit like 30 bars just cuz shes skinny

if it were me id do summit like

the way u seem to act gets me angry im serious//
ur so anorexic that u cant even blame shit on ya period//(think about it)
what u think that ud ever leave me emotionally scarred//
when i can see more bones in u than in an award winnin porn star//

or summit like that i dunno play around with a few ideas that piss off the opposite sex or whatever i dunno keep elevatin

illogikaal

[G-Dogg]

aight I feel ya!
though it was only 9 bars...but yeah I feel ya I feel ya...

more opinions plz

[Miss-C]

personally i got a kick outta that, but seriously....shemale?! yikesss
i thought the first six-eight lines had flow, but then you lost alittle of it in Anger

sounds ISP / easy

[BLizz Holla]

ay fam dat was aight..... but i think dat bitch probably deserve worse.. LOL

[d-clipz]

i agree wit dem boyz. but the other thing is, spend less time on her weight and more time on the fucked up shit she does. like masturbate with pickles or some shit.

[~*Jkeith*~]

This thread is OLD...Imma lock this..