Two Battle Raps (I hope you enjoy)

[Big-D]

These battle raps are against 9milli, DNN, INHUMAN and SLEEPY (They are members on this Web Site)

Apparently, They dont have the skilz to respond in audio!

Shock & Aww

MOAB (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/tritherealistindividualsmusic.htm)

Feel free to cratique, all you want... Peace

[bLaDe]

Hold up, is there only one person rapping on these songs, or a bunch of people?

Anywayz,..
MOAB - Get a better beat homie, I wasn't feeling this at all, sounds like sumting put together in fruity loops in a matter of minutes. Decent lyrics, flow could use some work, its quite off at sum parts, but at others its good. Ya'll should focus a bit more on charisma as the vocals sound a bit too monotone sometimes...

Shock and Awww - Better beat, but still aint feeling it much. Basic lyrics,you seem to repeat shit a lot. You'r vocals are a bit too loud and dont blend in well with the beat. You sound hella monotone here with your flow, a lotta times its just like your reading something or just talking. Work on your charisma though.

Overall, cool songs, props for the effort, but try getting better instrumentals, and work on your charisma and flow; also pay attention to the mixing of the songs, I noticed they wern't mixed to well and the volumes needed to be equalized. Peace

-{bLaDe}

[Scope]

Well I'm going to give these audios a listen. However it's an act of cowardice to hide behind excuses such as....
Apparently, They dont have the skilz to respond in audio!

For one, I have not ever posted anything audio. Nor have I claimed to do audio. I have never done audio. I came in posting TEXT. IF I battle I post TEXT. The people I call out....it's for a TEXT battle. Now because you up and did a audio...what is that suppose to mean? That your taking this more serious than other! That's about it. Chill out, Grow up, and Learn to live your life. Right now it's like your life is a car and everyone else is steering it.

[Scope]

One of your lyrics in your audio is...
"They don;t understand they'll be impeached"
So we are the Presidents? We run s*hit?

O and there was no mention of me or refrence. Guess I got left out! :cry:

[Big-D]

bLaDe,

Thanks for your positive critism (straight up). I truly appreciate it. To answer your question, MOAB is my partner and I, Shock & Aww is just me.

I've noticed that people are reluctant to post "positive critism" to help eachother build. Appearently, people would rather say something is "wack" and as opposed to helping eachother develop their art. Why do you think that is?

[bLaDe]

bLaDe,

Thanks for your positive critism (straight up). I truly appreciate it. To answer your question, MOAB is my partner and I, Shock & Aww is just me.


Np. I think you have potential, just get better beats (try mp3.com) and expand your mixing skills (look for tutorials on the net), what program do you use to mix anyway? And just try diffrent styles/voices/accents, like if you analyze some rap songs, you'll notice how the rappers somethings change the tone, go high pitch, then low, alongate somewords, etc, It's to make it more interesting, because it is extreamly easy to sound monotone in rap.

I've noticed that people are reluctant to post "positive critism" to help eachother build. Appearently, people would rather say something is "wack" and as opposed to helping eachother develop their art. Why do you think that is?

I think it's to build up their ego, the fact that we all use the internet as a medium of communication and never really meet up etc, gives them a sense of secuirty; Ergo, they express their inner, negative thoughts a little too freely, as they don't feel they are bound by politeness or morals imposed by society. Peace

-{bLaDe}

[Analytical]

Yo Blade, well said dog.

[Sleepy]

Apparently, They dont have the skilz to respond in audio!

Muda Fukka.. In my site, If you'd look I had two songs vs you, just never got around to finishin' em, and with just that I smoked tha shit outta' you. Take a chill pill....