:FINISHED: TOPICAL TOURNAMENT VERSES

[Logikal]

All participants should drop their verses in here. Do not post anything in here except for your verse. DO NOT POST more than once under any circumstance. If you messed up you can always edit your post by clicking the edit button in the upper right corner of you post. DO NOT FREEPOST please. Thank you.

[MiC ReApEr]

----no beef, jus bring it all----p.s. DONT TAKE IT OUT ALL ON ME JUST CKUZ I WENT FIRST.....LOL....SOMEONE HAD TO............aight here we go!

yo forget this waitin till its friday jus to drop one sick verse
ckuz ima forge this hate note, filled with a santeria death curse

tape ya faces to the stove, turn the nob and watch that shyt glow
staple ya hands to batter gloves, to see you burn like "hell's" snow

spread aids throughout cinemas, stickin infested needles in the seating
watch you place down up into them, diseases spawn with your bleedin

lock yo kid up in a chamber, tell him that he could grow gills if he wished
then flood that shyt up and scream, DROWN YOU SON OF A B!!TCH!!!!!

cut DANNY'S balls off and let them rot with his gimmick, crawled on by crickets, ROACHES, and leeches
GREEN MACHINE is oxidating, no one ckan help him, not muhamed or JESUS

Siductive STYLES getting sudused, bombarted and raped while we "love" play
ima kill her fetus slowly, and send it back to her in a jar on valentines day!!!!!

Dev dollaz lookin for food stamps while i murder his children
a clothe hanger the weapon of which im choosin while his wife im abusing

and Ju JU couldnt be sick if he spit wit a lethal fast spreading kill flu
holocaust plus genocide only im hitler new and improoved, kall me version 9.2

a digital epedimc ckomes to all those who oppose on my infinite wrath
i pop in through ya modem and computer screen to infinetly kick ya-ass!!!!!!!


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Logikal proclaims this verse is dope. Edited by Logikal. LOL

[Jingle]

ayo....this is the one and only.....klown king of hell.....faceless puppet...bringing death2all.....J-I-N-G-L-E!!!!!

intro: three blind kids/ three blind kids
watch as i cut/ watch all the blood
severing their bodies/ none of you can harm me
eat their guts/ all at once...

YO.....i spit like a dragon with gasoline breath
i bend all my enemies like havin japanese sex
but inside of my soul its just plain sick and twisted
klown korpse is my group, and we're cannibalistic
take a nun and rape the c.unt until she says AMEN!
stuff your mouth full of feces, so you can literally say shit
i cut myself with razors like a fuckin DJ
my mind's split in 3 ways/comitt suicide on the freeway
have you ever seen a child beat with a dead puppy?
take your baby, disembowel it, and fill it with stuffing
its lovely. oh my god, homie did you just touch me?
take your body and chop it up....i need some more lunchmeat
so corrupted and fucked, that its hard to get up
not cuz i feel bad....... my wrist's always cut
light candles and utter shit i never knew existed
reg tirra chicka ninco....looks like the devil spit this
im finished. my madness is flowing inside of me
never living up to what is supposed to be right for me
take a bite from this bitch i kidnapped a while back
and as i smile at her dying face, she better smile back

outro: maggots maggots in my skin
eating pain from deep within
bones exposed that rip thru flesh
i decay till nothings left

....there's my shit......peace.....

[JD (vintage)]

Let me get in this tournament.

[s-stylez]

intro:1,2 S-stylez is comin for u
3,4 i'll meet ya at the door
5,6 post ya to a crucifix
7,8 you aint gonna live late
9,10 then start my spree ova again


this chick S-stylez mind is sick and demented
i'll gruesomely but happily cut u open in a minute
tear out ya liver,squeeze the blood out, then place it back in twisted
as ya heart is still pumpin ya blood through ya veins
i'll take my knife and penetrate it through one of ya lungs
then reach for the other and stomp that shit like a sponge
to finish ya ass off i'll squeeze the shit out ya heart
then rip it apart and carve my name in ya skin 2 show my work of art
drag ya ass up to ya own doorstep and ring the bell
as i watch from afar and listen to ya fams bitch ass yells

now it's been ten minutes tyme for my next victim
but i'll go threw ya loved onez just to get to em
first on my list is ya damn kidz
im a set a fire to their face and burn that shit
then penetrate through they ribs
and throw they ass in my basement damn worthless pieces of shit
and finally it's tyme for ya ass to be caught and buried
but first i gotta show u ya kidz mighty fury
and u i'll take my time to torture before ya murder
im a lock ya ass up in a room with ya burnt childrens bodies
and listen to ya cries all night as i await with the shotty
but fuck that u aint worth none of my shells
im a cut off ya handz and send it to ya family in the mail
in case u didnt know i got ya coffin ready and posted
across the room but dont u want ya children thats toasted
fuck what u want i locked ya ass in the coffin still breathin
as i take ya children and leave em at ya house for ya husbands meetin

lmao i neva do nuttin like this so it aint that good but i hope there wasnt a line limit cuz i aint see one

[-Green Machine-]

Im came to this tourny to let the demented part~of~me~spit
Ill slice your face till blood squirts like an arterie~split
Dig a whole in your chest wit a shovel, look at the inside
Leave you out in the sun, then just wait till the skin dries
Take your kid and stuff them in it, just to watch the men cry
Pull the veins out wit a fork, then i can let them die
Decapitate you, then go out front and play catch
Maybe take out a kidney or two and sell them on the net
Ill slice you but wont let you die, so you can see that silly~scar
Take out your brain, finally find out how 'LOGIKAL' you really~are.

prolly not enough but o well, didn;t expect to make it to far anyways

[MeTaPhOr]

yo i thought ima drop a verse too...lol

Meta checkin in

I'm not crazy,just abnormally sane,
Now it's normally plain,to see when it's comedy lane,
Or when you be serious,the distinction is fairly distinct,
But I am very mischevious,and sicker than you could possibly think,
So when I'm walking by,and you wonder on the cause of the stink,
While thanking me for stopping by,I throw a match in your sink,
And run as fast I can,'coz I left your gas open,
So now you gasp and you paint,try to get the windows smashed open,
But the doors they be locked,wonder who'd be so inconsiderate,
Now it's smoky and hot,the paramedic team comes in late,
You die with your family,your wife and your baby,
Now who could laugh at this tragedy,only if you were demented and crazy,
I can't help it,I got a special sense of humour,
I know people who felt sick 'coz I laughed when they said they were dying of tumour,
Push kids in front of buses,and laugh till my stomach gets bursting,
Till my intestinal fluid just gushes,this is indeed a cursed thing,

[_RoAcH_]

Psychotic and demented then.... check it....

Fuck killin ova people ill slit my own throat and hit the floor with a thud//
laid infront of a mirror laughing at myself while i choke on my own blood//
metaphor wants everyone to spit a real psychotic and crazy verse//
so ill tell you all about the time i raped a sixty year old nurse//
she came into my cell only trying to give me all of my medication//
what she wasn't prepared for was that nine inch cock penetration//
i fu(ked her so hard up the ass it was bleeding like i fu(ked her with a blade of glass//
you see i really am one demented emcee thats not a monster under ur bed its me//
hidin in ur bathroom so i can watch all ur little kids wee this is wat satisfys me//
watch out parents roach is cumming out to play quik grab ur kids and hide them away//
i dont care boys or gurls but dont worry i aint gay i just like kids wat can i say//
big ones small ones fat ones skinny ones i just like to stick it between there buns/
shove it up them so they get the runs then lick it up and lay on top of them i weight 2 tons//
did i tell you i got HIV spreedin it round the world threw my ho's cus im a P.I.M.P//
so watch out cus u probably got aids thank me when it hits u its like bein blown up by hand grenades//
i stand at a funeral and start to make jokes till i have to kill these hard lookin blokes//
go to there funerals and piss on there graves dress there bodys up in suites and carry them into raves//
you see this is just a description of my normal day or nite so you can decide if this shit is gay or tite//

k if tht aint psychotic enuff to get me into next round u r all seriously deranged!!!

peace

[JesusChrist]

Yo I'll post sometime this weekend, been HELLA busy.


-Dope Dago

[dannyruxspin]

dick

(Just testing trying to find out why everyone rights Baloney Pop (hey, isn't there a "G", like, Bolonga (or are multiple spellings recognized?))

anyways

Empty Medicine Chest
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/closetemceeproductionsmusic.htm


However, I lay my vote to Roach LOL

[_RoAcH_]

if no one spits by then end of 2nite can i take that as a vote..?? think my verse was best anyway not meanin to be full of myself!!
just wanna say don't think anyone should be let to spit afta 2nite they ad a week!!!

peace

[dannyruxspin]

dawg....


that was the rules. Tonite is the deadline

[JesusChrist]

It's cool then fellas, I'm going to drop out of this thing. Not really into the psycho killer shit, just thought the topic would be something different. That twisted shit reminds me of ICP and shit and it isn't really my favorite shit.


-Dope Dago

[MeTaPhOr]

Holla thn x for yo verses guys ill b closin the thread within 2 hours from now any free posters are free to post if they are willin...iight...~PEACE~

[-Green Machine-]

can anybody and everybody vote on the verses?

[MeTaPhOr]

ya...every one but...the participants cant vote on their own verses...

[_RoAcH_]

yo metaphor u mite wanna just pick a mod to vote on his 2 fav verses then do a final from that.... or just get a mod to vote on a winner cus this is goin nowhere!!!!

[MeTaPhOr]

XPLAINED VOTES PLEASE>>>THE FRST 2 VOTES WONT COUNT VOTING A SELF CREATION WOULD LEAD TO DISQUALIFICATION N PERIODICAL BAN FROM RAP DOGS>>>>> 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8)

[MiC ReApEr]

yo LOGIKAL thanx for that little post on the bottom of my verse....... GOOD LOOKIN OUT........ i thought this tourney had died...... but n0e wayz lets finish this...........~1~

[_RoAcH_]

yo mic_reaper u know im down wit u nd dnt wanna be h8in but wsn't ur verse abit off the point from the original topic???

peace

[MiC ReApEr]

honestly ROACH i dnt think i slipped of topic ckuz killin kids wit close hangers and drowning and tapin faces to stove and rapin gurls is pretty sick to me LOL....... dnt worry im not gonna trip we SD man lol.... thats our thing ~1~

[Logikal]

If you guys want more votes for this than make people aware of it in the shoutbox and shit. Or if you drop a verse in a battle put a link to this tournament at the end of your verses. Most people don't know about this forum so they don't check it. But don't go spamming the site about it either.

And Metaphor, what the hell does this mean?:

"THE FRST 2 VOTES WONT COUNT VOTING A SELF CREATION WOULD LEAD TO DISQUALIFICATION N PERIODICAL BAN FROM RAP DOGS"

What is "voting a self creation"? Did you mean to say "VOTING FOR YOURSELF"? And what is going to get people banned from Rapdogs? Voting to create ones self? I don't understand your English here. Also as you can see as of this writing there are only three votes. If you want this go anywhere then explaining votes is commiting tournament suicide. Nobody wants to go through all of these verses and then have to explain why they liked the one they liked. In a case of this many people it makes sense that people vote by poll for whatever verse they just liked more without having to break it down into categories or reasons. It took me a while just to read all of the verses and then I went back and reread my two favorites before voting.

[_RoAcH_]

how long it gonna be b4 u declare a winner??? or who goes to the next round...

bin a while now since verses were spat.......

[s-stylez]

are the people that got votes gonna advance or what because this thread is dead

[-Green Machine-]

Yo Man This Tourny Aint Goin NO WHERE...Do Something Please.

[_RoAcH_]

Declare a winner or 2 finalists or sumit so we can get this shit done with u started tyhis time ago!!

peace

[Logikal]

Nope. There's 3 finalists. I'm calling this.

Mic Reaper
S-Stylez
_Roach_

They will have to duke it out for the title.

I will start a new thread and PM the contenders. They will have 4 days to write and post up a verse about the topic of my choosing (if anyone has a problem with me choosing a topic then let me know within the next 5 seconds LOL). If two of the three no show then the one who did post up wins. But if nobody shows then nobody wins and everyone is a loser. LOL

Don't wait until the last minute to post up either. You will all have 4 days exactly from the time the start of thread was posted to drop a verse. You can check to see what time I posted it because the board goes by your time zone.