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crazy
04-27-2005, 12:52 PM
just rate what you like about the emcee such as flow or lyrics and how they could perhaps improve starting with me

-Green Machine-
04-27-2005, 07:47 PM
i think your pretty good you just need to elevate and make it more complex, maybe add multis or somethin but keep spittin it will come to ya

IllDeal90
06-07-2005, 01:57 PM
yo you nice as hell. i cant really see any flaws. keep your punchlines simple but effective and your good

BigT
06-07-2005, 04:51 PM
I don't no any thing about u but i'm going 2 say work on multies cause a lot of people need work on that

Reclipse
06-07-2005, 09:11 PM
i went and read some of ya verses and the dope but u should take ya own advise and work on that flow

CDub
06-07-2005, 11:43 PM
i just got done readin your post in the murder scenario topic, shit was good. You got good skills with multi's. You could work on stayin on the topic

dascyple
06-08-2005, 12:50 AM
yo u prety good dawg. i read ur murder scenario post. shit was good, work on ur multis, errybodys got to

Cynikal_Gonz
06-09-2005, 10:10 AM
You're good. Although suggest working on more complex ish, using multies, start 'em off with like 3-5 syllables then slowly work your way up. Flow is there. Punches look good, but when you're battling, try making them more direct and personal when possible. Come hard, bring heat on every line, hard/funny disses are good too.

-Green Machine-
06-09-2005, 01:26 PM
I've seen some of your just 2 liners...they are pretty sick...nice flow, multi was there, and nice hard punches each time

_RoAcH_
06-09-2005, 01:46 PM
eveyrthing ur wack in every way... lol just messin wit ya.... hmmm... coem hard in every battle not jsut against me ( i thought ur verse against me was 100 times sika than nethin u eva posted against anyone else but u were aginst the best heh lol) use more wordplay in ur personals so the role off the toung abit beta... o and dnt know if u do bt lots of ppl do... dont shove ne old shit in just cus it fits make u look like an amateur


pz

daOG
06-09-2005, 03:28 PM
roach, yor alright but need to elevate a bit, I peeped o battle against toxn, keep rappin and you'll improve, the major sugg I would have is you workin on multis, other than that you 7/10 peace

dacrazylunatic21
06-11-2005, 09:05 AM
haha you in my crew so obviously ima show you love, i think your multis are nice but you just need to work on your punches and wordplay. just elevate with that and you'll be sick wit it.


yo to whoevers gonna rate me: make sure you check out my "father forgive me" in the freestyle section. thankz

KMA
06-11-2005, 01:24 PM
the freestyle was damn good homie...could have used some wordplay but the multis were sick...very good...

dev dollaz
06-12-2005, 10:00 PM
u aight....step up the vocab

s-stylez
06-13-2005, 12:44 PM
basically from what ive seen from you you're pretty good only thing you need to do is add more wordplay and more complexity into your battles. Elevation is always a good thing

-Green Machine-
06-13-2005, 12:47 PM
Your Alright...You Were My First Battle...And First Loss...

1-G_MC
06-13-2005, 01:49 PM
you're alright.....I've never read any battles from you but you seem to be in the top tier of the newer rapdogs.....









~Rice~

zxcvbnm
06-13-2005, 02:27 PM
i like your older battles more the last few i think were weak for you... especially multis, keep it up tho

daOG
06-15-2005, 12:55 PM
Z I think you beat me in the battle but it wasnt that fiar, your alright keep up the elevating and youll be dope

MANE
06-15-2005, 01:08 PM
think you were caught cheating..keep stong an make a new rep for yourself.

peace

-Green Machine-
06-15-2005, 01:51 PM
your pretty good...nice flow...maybe work on punches and multis

Anesthetic
06-15-2005, 05:02 PM
Nice with the punches. :( 9/10 ...And my lover... 10/10 for the sex.

-Green Machine-
06-15-2005, 05:52 PM
wow...10/10 in everything...but the sex...ehhhh 9/10 you dont give enough

MANE
06-15-2005, 10:17 PM
8.5/10.. nice mc overall

Jingle
06-23-2005, 09:31 PM
...havent really seen any of your new shit, but from the old stuff ive seen id say bout 8/10

instinx
06-23-2005, 09:34 PM
jingle you aiight.. stop smokin that ish tho, n work on that audio more

1-G_MC
06-23-2005, 09:39 PM
when was the last time u had a battle....lol


currently: 1.5/10 cause I like you.... :D

instinx
06-23-2005, 09:42 PM
:wink:




against bak like a week ago.. i could be like bitch thang n battle 4 times a week but thats not me

but young rice mm... you need to elevate.. i wouldnt think to much bout the h.o.f. cuz its kinda outta reach for u

1-G_MC
06-23-2005, 09:44 PM
well it's definately outta reach for u cause U'LL NEVER BEAT ME!!



:twisted:

instinx
06-23-2005, 09:46 PM
is that a threat?

1-G_MC
06-23-2005, 09:47 PM
it's the truth.... :D

instinx
06-23-2005, 09:48 PM
quick battle?

1-G_MC
06-23-2005, 09:48 PM
lol...ok post up ya rulez in the vetz arena.... :lol:

-Green Machine-
06-23-2005, 10:03 PM
Well your pretty good...instinx is retarded cause i KO'd him so you should have no problems

1-G_MC
06-23-2005, 10:40 PM
you're not too bad yaself.... :D

Jingle
06-24-2005, 03:16 PM
^^^^^^^^^

a kick ass rapper lol

oh and instinx, no i will not stop smokin the ish hahahahaha

Eyeronic
06-24-2005, 04:36 PM
Jingle what can i say, he's a veteran, good rapper, bbut he needs to be more active. :D

Jingle
06-24-2005, 08:33 PM
yeah i do hahaha

hmmm.....well i saw some of your very first battles when you came here and i was suprised....you got skills......

glad to have ya in the crew by the way.....stay sick

1-G_MC
06-24-2005, 08:40 PM
extremely amusing, but weird, and confused, rapper.... :D

instinx
06-24-2005, 09:20 PM
ey green.. both our verses sucked.. it was amazin anyone won that battle

IllDeal90
12-19-2005, 02:30 PM
your a 9/10 just up your multis and wordplay

mobsta
12-20-2005, 08:15 AM
7.5/10................use more metas i guess......n' multis

Da Bedlam
12-20-2005, 08:31 AM
Altho I'm new, I'm taking tha time to read most of the Rap-Dog's rhymes. Dawg u great, Flo-wise u's a 9.2.

Leto
12-20-2005, 03:20 PM
your on tha comeup... get more personal towards opponent and use more multis and metaz

mobsta
12-20-2005, 03:54 PM
8/10..............just add harder punches

BrickCityMike
12-29-2005, 05:36 AM
8/10 get more complex

Shoalin
12-29-2005, 07:15 AM
At his peek,
Few more months and he ll be Unstoppable.
9.1/10

mobsta
12-29-2005, 08:49 AM
8/10....................only seen u battle one time

DeeRip123
12-29-2005, 11:45 AM
Good 9/10 Need Better Wordplays Pretty Basic

Notorou$-Loc
03-16-2006, 12:39 AM
yea man ur aiight ahh maybe improve multis??