Tryin this rap shit out...

[newb]

if it wasn't for luck kid I'd catch you on the flipside
Let my devil heat take your punk ass for the long ride

bloody heart-take your lungs on a slipslide--Riptide
flow sick rip right through yo insides...ohhhh

Watch yo clip slip you the switch and switch sides
Join mine at my waist and leave yo brains hangin on the outside

I'm the hot young One--wit a hot young one
kill old ladies sons leave KoolAid in yo lungs...whoo!

So sick my flow'll reach in yo head
turn yo brain around and pronounce you dead


Lemme know what u think...

[baklikecookdcrack]

yo newb this is the wrong place man, post it up in the freestyle forum if u want sum feedback, peace

[LyricalG]

Ohhh.... why put that?

It didn't have that good of a flow or any decent multi's, keep it up.

[rgb333]

its ok

[VocalZ]

I tought it was pretty good ,but im also a newb...
Do you have anything recent?