View Full Version : just caught my eye.
NOTE, i dont think logikal bit AT ALL. but it caught my eye. just take a look at it..
what do you think?
Gopha: kieth could ‘LITE MY CREDIT CARD ON FIRE’ and still not ‘SPARK-MY-INTREST’/
Logical: You'd have to take a lighter to my bank just to 'spark' my 'interest'
Links:
http://rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=20032
http://rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=19923
Logikal
06-12-2005, 11:34 PM
I sent this to maneone in a PM. Just thought I would put it here too.
LMAO I just now saw that. That's crazy as shit. I wish I had read that battle between Gopha and Jkeith before I dropped. I was just talking to JKeith on AIM about two hours ago and I showed him my verse minus two lines. I decided that I needed two more lines because I only had 14 and the max was 16. So I went into a text file of some old ass shit I wrote and saw this:
"My rhymes are great, greater, and greatest, your rhymes are simplest
you'd have to take a lighter to my bank, just to spark my interest"
I decided the first line sucked and it needed to be changed. LOL And Jkeith had just asked me if I had read his batle yet. Fuck. That sucks. i thought that line was really original. I mean "spark my interest" isn't original but I thought my line was. LOL And if JKeith hadn't logged off of AIM I would have let him see that line before I posted it and he cuold have told me it was similar to Gopha's. Oh well. I'll just take it out of my verse and go with 14 lines because I have no time to write two new ones.
Logikal
06-12-2005, 11:43 PM
Oh by the way, I just wanted to point out that the text file is a bunch of old shit I was writing for audio songs before I actually thought about doing audio. LOL I don't keep a text file of battle verses prewritten or cool punchilnes. Although I do have several pieces of paper with punchlines on them that I wrote at work. But if I had anything that I thought was good it was usually written for use in a battle that somebody no showed in and I never used it. Honestly this line was the only good one in that whole text file. LMAO The only reason I used it was because I wanted to do the max number of lines but the battle was started so long ago that I didn't want to delay posting my verse another whole day because of two lines. Oh well. Thread closed.