.::FINISHED::. Gopha (W) vs Bishtang (L)

[Logikal]

Roach will lay down the rules, etc....

[bishtang]

checkin in.roach,put the rules on then and tell us how long we got 2 spit

[_RoAcH_]

ok sorry bout the confusion .... but rules are as followed...

2 bars... thats not 2 lines 2 bars...
all battles will be judged by me,Logikal and Jkeith
all punchlines due by the 19th (this month lol)


peace

[Gopha]

cheggi-chekk....

-payce

[Gopha]

uughh i thought dis wuz due tma..... can i drop tma plz....??!!! itz mad late n im bout to go to sleep....

-payce

[Gopha]

aite im not even sure dis kid iz gonna show......

but w/e.....

kid asked who had his back, n it wuz lyke 'DEBATEZ AT MUTE HOMEZ' cuz 'NUTTIN-SOUNDED/
homie ya gurly'z mine, cuz in da bedroom i treat dat shit 'HOW I GREET MAH HOMIEZ' cuz i 'FUCKIN-POUND-IT'/

itz lyke 'SEX IN AIRPLANEZ' cuz i dont give a 'FLYING FUCK' wut 'YOU-THINK'/
so watch me 'BLOW MAH GAT' n leave 'TANG ZIPPED UP IN A POUCH' lyke da fuckin 'FRUIT-DRINK'/(<<ya done rookie..!!!)

[bishtang]

in his profile he claims he like shootin hoops and lies bout pullin hoes/
the only hoop you shoot is your boyfrends mouth wen he goes down and blows/

i cant beleive i only got 4 lines to work~this/in 4 lines your rhymes are worth~less/
now gopha(go for) a walk back 2 where you belong,the bozton rap freak cir~cus/

dont call me a rookie bitch

[bishtang]

oh yeah, the stuff bout him likin to shoot hoops and bout hoes,thats all in his profile.
his location is bozton

[_RoAcH_]

..... not so hard to see a winner it hink...


kid asked who had his back, n it wuz lyke 'DEBATEZ AT MUTE HOMEZ' cuz 'NUTTIN-SOUNDED/
homie ya gurly'z mine, cuz in da bedroom i treat dat shit 'HOW I GREET MAH HOMIEZ' cuz i 'FUCKIN-POUND-IT'/

itz lyke 'SEX IN AIRPLANEZ' cuz i dont give a 'FLYING FUCK' wut 'YOU-THINK'/
so watch me 'BLOW MAH GAT' n leave 'TANG ZIPPED UP IN A POUCH' lyke da fuckin 'FRUIT-DRINK'/(<<ya done rookie..!!!)

really tite good shit as i expected from u Gopha



in his profile he claims he like shootin hoops and lies bout pullin hoes/
the only hoop you shoot is your boyfrends mouth wen he goes down and blows/

i cant beleive i only got 4 lines to work~this/in 4 lines your rhymes are worth~less/
now gopha(go for) a walk back 2 where you belong,the bozton rap freak cir~cus/


Good stuff u did research on ur opponent but i dont think it was enuff...


Vote: Gopha

Uppin for votes from Jkeith and Logikal

peace

[Gopha]

^^^^propz fo votin.... uppin fo otha judgez to vote.....

-payce

[Logikal]

I will vote on all of these tonight. I have to go to work right now.

[Logikal]

kid asked who had his back, n it wuz lyke 'DEBATEZ AT MUTE HOMEZ' cuz 'NUTTIN-SOUNDED/
homie ya gurly'z mine, cuz in da bedroom i treat dat shit 'HOW I GREET MAH HOMIEZ' cuz i 'FUCKIN-POUND-IT'/

The first line was cool and it had originality but it didn't hit hard. I think the "NUTTING-SOUNDED" could have been something different to get a better reaction. The second line was nice, but in relation to greeting your friends what exactlyd o you "fucking pound"? Maybe I am too white to understand. LMAO I'm so not funny. Anyway.......


itz lyke 'SEX IN AIRPLANEZ' cuz i dont give a 'FLYING FUCK' wut 'YOU-THINK'/
so watch me 'BLOW MAH GAT' n leave 'TANG ZIPPED UP IN A POUCH' lyke da fuckin 'FRUIT-DRINK'/(<<ya done rookie..!!!)

I like the first line. It's a bit obvious with the wordplay though. The second line here I think was your best. The best originality in this battle. You win it with that line.


in his profile he claims he like shootin hoops and lies bout pullin hoes/
the only hoop you shoot is your boyfrends mouth wen he goes down and blows/

This is OK as a whole. Seperately you waste the first line to set up for the punch in the second line though. This is a punchline contest and you only get four lines. You should use every one for a punch.

i cant beleive i only got 4 lines to work~this/in 4 lines your rhymes are worth~less/
now gopha(go for) a walk back 2 where you belong,the bozton rap freak cir~cus/

The first line is half of a punch. It rolls off the tongue well though. The second line here I think was YOUR best, but not enough to top Gopha's best.


Vote = Gopha


peace

[~*Jkeith*~]

Do I need to vote or is 2-0 a K.O.?

[bishtang]

na hes won.i wernt expectin 2 beat gopha 2 be honest but i dint do 2 badly in my opinion

[ILLESTMYND]

Yo Bishtang you did good son...

[Gopha]

but in relation to greeting your friends what exactlyd o you "fucking pound"?

^^^lmao... da fistz homie da fistz lol...... i still cant believe yu aint neva heard sum1 say "pound it" bfo..... thx fo votin ne way doe.....

gud battle bish... stay up homie it wuznt bad.... just work on ya complexity n try throwin punchez wid clever metaz n youll be knockin off vetz bfo yu know it....

-payce

[undissable]

that second punch Goph dropped was murda..

[Gopha]

^^^^thx dawg.... your talkin bout da tang n fruit drink line rite..???

-payce