.::FINISHED::. Green Machine (W) vs BLCC (L)-- Round 2

[Logikal]

Round two of the punchline tournamnet.

[-Green Machine-]

checkin in

[baklikecookdcrack]

checkin in - whens the deadline?

[_RoAcH_]

ok... 2 bars like b4
same votin and shit...

2nd july deadline

[_RoAcH_]

got til midnight

[baklikecookdcrack]

aight kl, am out today so i'll post somethin up now...

[baklikecookdcrack]

i'm cruxifying your style so you betta get your point 'a-cross'/
this battle i'll desert/dessert, an leave you like moses "real-lost"/

your a back-door bandit, so i'll be 'lockin' this battle up tight/
incest in your area, so you REALLY enjoy 'family night'/

the first ones- hes in g.a.m.e- their whole thing is gods an shit...i think its
moses that got lost.... :?

[-Green Machine-]

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My 2 Bars
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I Rock-The-Mic and *Handle-This-Rookie*....Too bad you Soft-And-White like an *Animal-Cookie* /

I'll eat him like a Bu-Fay/Buffet cause homie You-Gay....Your skill is your location cuase barely U-Kay/UK

For you this didn't *Start-Well* cause you 'Dead Weight' like *Bar-Bells*....Mess-Wit-Me, I'll most Definitely piss all over you like *R-Kels* /

I'm Scortchin-You cause you act like *Bein-Straight*....You lost cause i'm Forcin-You like you *Bein-Raped* /

Uppin For Votes...Roach, Logikal, and JKeith

[battery]

OH MY GOD,GM killed that shit,thats some sick as shit,no wonder you beat me.

[baklikecookdcrack]

^freepost :? , neway uppin for votes...tight shit GM

[_RoAcH_]

Vote: GM

i thought GM took this one all hands down althought some of the stuff blcc was inventive and funny GM's was just off da hook

peace

[Logikal]

I have to point something out before I vote. Although it is typically called a bar when you have two lines, that is only considered a bar when they rhyme. GM put one bar per line and therefore he has 4 bars instead of 2 as the rules stipulate. I am going to vote based on Green Machine's first two lines and exclude his last two to keep it fair.

BLCC your bars were kind of simplistic. Nothing to fancy. This is a 2 bar punchline tournament. The point being to make the best punch. Those aren't too original. Your first one was kind of original. I liked it, but your second bar was something I would expect in a regular battle to make the line limit.

GM your first bar was cool, but it doesn't make sense unless BLCC is white, which I have no knowledge of. Your second bar is OK. I see where you were trying to take it but I think you missed it. Let's take a minute to break it apart shall we?

I'll eat him like a Bu-Fay/Buffet cause homie You-Gay

First don't speak to the audience and then finish by speaking to your opponent. That didn't detract from your verse because it would have worked either way. But if you think about it..............if he's gay................ and you are going to "EAT" him BECAUSE he is gay...................I mean.............that's kind of gay.........and therefore you appear to be gay as well.

Your skill is your location cuase barely U-Kay/UK

This was kind of a good concept. Mainly because it doesn't sound right or make sense the way it is worded.

Either way you look at it you second bar could have been much better if it wasn't worded the way it is. You should've worded it that way in the first place though.

I have to vote for BLCC on this based pretty much on his first bar. I think GM would have taken it with his first bar if it had a better theme though it and BLCC was in fact white.

peace

[-Green Machine-]

Even thought I disagree with the 4 bar thing...uppin for Jkeiths vote...

[baklikecookdcrack]

Upppin for keith's vote...

[~*Jkeith*~]

I gotta give it to GM......Idk..his verse just overwhelmed and destroyed BLCC's verse.....But it was kinda shaky...and some of the wordplay barely connected......

But it is...what it is...

Overall Vote: Green Machine

[baklikecookdcrack]

aight kl, i didn't think mine was anythin neway...props to GM, gd luck
for that 3-way...

[-Green Machine-]

thanks man...nice battle man