View Full Version : IN-FA-ME vs Artifact -- Round 2
Logikal
06-26-2005, 01:07 AM
Round two of the punchline tournament.
Artifact
06-26-2005, 11:40 AM
Check... whens the due date?
IN-FA-ME
06-27-2005, 07:40 AM
checking in
Artifact
06-28-2005, 03:07 PM
You need some rap lessons and im willin-to-help, ignore your pic, you aint 'phat', not even fillin-your-belt
If im bein truthful, i dont need to carry on coz the way this bitch rhymes, she'll be killin-herself
Ive got 'IN covered' like 'houses-with-roofs' coz she just "crams junk in" her lines like "clutterin-lockers"
You look up to me like wolves howlin-at-moons, so ive got 'IN in the bag' like 'stutterin-shoppers' (in in)
gd luck
_RoAcH_
06-29-2005, 01:20 PM
ok... 2 bars like b4
same votin and shit...
2nd july deadline
IN-FA-ME
06-30-2005, 12:21 PM
Artifact ur bio's degradeable ("D" gradeable), environmentalist promote recyclin' while lyrical purist pro-test//
dem "last keys"(zxcvbnm) proved twice bitten spit-up was a hard swallow to a Reader's Digest//
"I am above u", diggin' for ya relics but all my bones to pick are fossil//
Bitin' off more than u can chew got me findin "wisdoms" seein ur mistake wuz colossal//
Artifact
06-30-2005, 02:19 PM
Nice drop... lets get the votes in
_RoAcH_
07-03-2005, 10:27 AM
closer than the last one i voted on... but i thought Artifact came harder in this one... compared to ur 1st round verse this was some week shit IN-FA-ME wel i thought that neway u tryed t hard to make it sound like u were smart...
Vote: ARtifact
peace
Logikal
07-03-2005, 09:51 PM
I wasn't very fond of most of what I read in this battle. I think Artifact had the better lines, but it was mainly his first two that took it for him. IN-FA-ME, most of your lines were very original, but they weren't very well worded and didn't hit hard. Artifact your second bar was off. I like the idea, but I don't find much of a punch in stuttering shoppers. I like the idea behind it but not the execution. I think both of you showed talent lyrically but these lines could have used a bit of work.
Vote = Artifact
Artifact
07-04-2005, 02:22 AM
Thanks for the votes & the feedback...
Good battle IN-FA-ME
Gopha
07-08-2005, 04:27 PM
how r da finalz gone work out since we have 3 catz...??? r we gonna have a 3 way....???
-payce
-Green Machine-
07-08-2005, 07:27 PM
Yeah we are...
Logikal
07-09-2005, 04:37 AM
Y'all can but I ain't gay. LOL
~*Jkeith*~
07-09-2005, 01:23 PM
I wasn't very fond of most of what I read in this battle. I think Artifact had the better lines, but it was mainly his first two that took it for him. IN-FA-ME, most of your lines were very original, but they weren't very well worded and didn't hit hard. Artifact your second bar was off. I like the idea, but I don't find much of a punch in stuttering shoppers. I like the idea behind it but not the execution. I think both of you showed talent lyrically but these lines could have used a bit of work.
Vote = Artifact
I agree with what Logikal......
Good Job by both...but both need to put more complexity into your lines so they can connect...
Vote: Artifact.