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JaQuwine
07-25-2005, 04:55 AM
u say um so seductive i say um so productive
on tha block makin money n yo tha bitchez luv it
cant no1 touch me knock me or disrespect me
on tha street datz a sin ill bring yo lyfe to n end
niggaz will talk shyt but they aint bout shyt
datz why niggaz spit dissez dat dont make sense
i had dis locked had tha block hot n tha gatzz cocked
since tha "g" Will got knocked
datz 5 yearz, so tell me who tha king of tha block be, datz me
hatin ratzz get killed wit maczz see
if itz yo mama cryin kno i wasnt lyin
u talk shyt fuck yo lyfe it'll end see
i make movez um tha one dat makezz tha block rock
i got boyzz dat got spotz
n tha spotz got dead bodiez dis iz ma point exactly
dont fuck wit a "g" n u'll be perfectly happy

rap_ethics
07-25-2005, 07:34 AM
make your lines longer and starting using multis and more vocabulary...try to be more creative, funny, and original...

explicitcon
08-16-2005, 02:24 PM
i like it but hes right