Help wit Delivery...and hooks

[Va's best kept secret]

i got tha lyrics down pact...multies and tha whole flow...basically everything i need...but still my delivery seems off to me..idk wut it is...any tips on delivery????

also...my only weakness in writing is hooks..i jus dont like writtn them...any tips ??? thanks

[explicitcon]

you could record yourself if your that into

[VocalZ]

Yeah record yourself...listen to what you recorded ...and youll be able 2 see more what you need to work on....