tips for punchlines plz pt2

[pistol-pistol]

here are some punchlines:

im like a thundercloud i bring u rainy days and spark at u and your mother/
ur like a raindrop ur going down and always end up in the gutter/

like R Kelly ya trapped in the closet/
you scared of comin out so u just locked it/

after this u must admit that im better than u see/
and if u cant see it and deny it/ than i guess you got some cream on ya eyelid/
u prolly think, wow did he made this mad shit/
yea, u can spit later after i put on my safety glasses/
cuz i dont want cum in my eye or a whole facial mask bitch/

ur smilin and laughin till my guncock/
then i shoot u full of holes like spongebob/
my lines a like mike tyson they punch hard/
first they hit you but then the fun starts/
they so hot they burn you like marilyn manson did with his lunchbox/


now how can i make better punchlines?

[explicitcon]

how do you do it thats my question

[explicitcon]

my question is how do you make punches

[pistol-pistol]

bump 4 tips

[aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE]

im like a thundercloud i bring u rainy days and spark at u and your mother/
ur like a raindrop ur going down and always end up in the gutter/

^^^ That was aight

That was the only punch at all in your verse.

[aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE]

Punches are dissing your opponent or personals; that is, dissing their family or their name.