.::TOPICAL TOURNY FINAL::. CHAMPION .::ANESTHETIC WINS::.

[-Green Machine-]

Okay the finalists are:

Anesthetic
BigT
Instinx

The topic is..GOD...30 Lines this time..

Due in 2 weeks starting today...


SO GET YOUR VERSES IN YOU 3!!!

[instinx]

yo is our topic enemy or god???

[-Green Machine-]

Enemy

[BigT]

I like to write about god a lil more but thats just me

[-Green Machine-]

Fine its god!

[BigT]

lol

[instinx]

well i had already started about enemy.....



...lol jp

[Anesthetic]

Due the 28th, right?

[-Green Machine-]

Yup!

[instinx]

yeaaa... seein as how BigT's gunna be banned.. its just tween me n anesthetic

[BigT]

correct

[Anesthetic]

Quick Key Up. Got Things To Do.
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Seraphims, Cherubs Disposing At The Notariety Of~His~Will, On~The~Real, With Lucifer, My Soul
Was About To~Make~A~Deal, Ethe~Real Entity, Sufficing My Thirst For~The~Kill, Sanguine Seals,
Broken By Men, Taken Into~My~Sins, Creator Beckoning To Come~And~Reside~Within, But
Alas~Therein, Lies NO Sanctity~For~Him, Many~Men, Strived For Glory, But Fell In~The~End
::Alone In~My~Room, Praying That I Won't Meet~A~Doom; I Want To Meet~The~Womb,
And Not Be Damned Forever To A~Tomb, Of Brimstone, For My Constant Puffing~The~Shrooms,
~Flumes, Of Flames, But I Want~Room, To Fly High With One~Whom, Looms~Overhead, And Can
Bring My Soul~Abloom::
Expectations~Are~High, Sometimes The Mere Thoughts Can~Terrify; But Can You Blame Me?
How The Hell Can I~Simplify, The Thoughts That The Supreme Can~Nullify, And if I Don't~Satisfy,
His Will, There Can Never Be A Great~Enough~Alibi, To~Qualify For That Eternal Salvation,
And Have My Name~Glorified, And~Dignified In The Eternal~Book~Of~Life::
But My Soul Can~Beautify, So I Can Become An~Alumni, And Not Have To Witness~The~Crucify~Ing::
Of My Lord Be~In~Vain, In~My~Brain, There's Always The Thought Of Him~Being~Slain, So I
Could~Refrain, From His Wrath, And My Life Not Be~Abstained, Yet I~Remain, Blissfully Ignorant
Of~His~Reign, Just How Long Can These Demonic Ways~Sustain?
The~Bane, Of My Existence Is Purely~Mundane, So It's~Insane, To Think My Will Is A Lament Of
My Own~Brain; I'm~Just~A~Stain, On The White Linen Of A Higher~Power::
A Fragile~Flower, That Hides And~Cowers, When Faced With The Wrath From The~High~Towers,
But Twelve Gates Of Revelation, Get Closer To Me By The~Hour, So I~Shower, Myself In His Blood,
As To Not Let Satan~Devour, Me. My Spit Turns~Sour, When I Think "My Actions Empower"::
::But I~Station Myslef In A Position, To Try And Deliver~My~Nation,
With These Lyrical~Rations, Leading My Niggas Away~From~Temptation,
Laying~Complacent, Many Of His Thoughts Are Lost~In~Translation; My~Congregation,
Suffering The Harsh~Dictation, But He's Still Waiting, For You To OPen Up To His Libration,
Stand Up, And Give Your Bad Ways An~Amputation, Sedation, Can Lead To Your
Ultimate~Salvation, Still, Niggas~Hating, When Someone Comes Up, Not Wanting An Evil~Relation
Cuz' In The End For Souls, With Him, There Won't Be Any~Negotiation

[instinx]

worst possible time to write this up.. i got skoo startin tomarow.. n i gotta nother tourney.. but i did it




'why' do i find myself praying-in-church~saying-it-hurts to know why-he-'died'
'lies' 'inside' blazing-my-worth~'staying'-his-first priority to protect all of-these-lives
'tries' raising-the-herd~craving-the-earth hopin people find-thE-stride

its funny how hard-~i~try to hear~the~calling, n when ppl start~to~cry n fear~him~falling
lookin up at the stars~n~sky-to-clear~their~emotions, n it sparks~in-side alotta tears-that-flow-like-an-ocean.... AMEN BROTHER!!

hes sendin down lights~of~inspiration sum cant see because their caught up in their fights~for~syndication
sell-outs, forgot-their-roots, fell-down in his eyes, and stopped-their-routes

i bin 'gittin' it all the 'while' its bin 'written' in the 'bible'
its like 'quittin' all Godz 'filez' the way people 'spittin' anti-religious 'stylez'

'he' gave power to moses to split-the-sea, took away 'pac' n he missed-a-beat

Godlike 'splendor' represented in the female 'gender'
rejected devils 'tender' like a message returned to 'sender'

the bars of 'heavens gates' open up to those whose holiness 'demonstrates'

like 'feminine states,' moods are forced-by-power, like 'lemon n grapes' ya faith can be sweet-n-sour

but the holy one 'wrote this'/'knows this'/'my hope is'/'he copes wit'
all that life brings, the 'sad lives'/the 'bad guys'/the 'mad wives' it stems from emotions
the vengeant 'mad fists'/ sufferin 'sad lips'/envious 'caddy whips' it revolves round malevolence
that God created/instated into our souls, into mans-mind, into mankind..............18
can we 'stand time?'/'ban crimes' cuz its destroyin us like 'land mines'

threatenin-deathenin situations dealin-with-feelins you-bin-hatin

reach~out~n~touch~faith, re-count~such~fate, and determine ya future
take back-ya-faith n make the rite-decision, track-ya-way and follow the life-ya-livin..22

seein how this world-is-fulla-distortion, a guy n a girl-can-have-n-abortion without apportion

you get the shit-im-sayin? the spit-im-sprayin, not for my enjoyment the way-im-playin

somethins gotta happen, 'oughta-b-distraction' to the 'action' this world has 'backed-in'
'facts-is' the 'past-shit' has happened n the f'utures-dyin', the 'hooch-is-thrivin'

you 'think-how' 'people talkin', 'think-now'.. 'steeples callin'

[Anesthetic]

Upping for votes.

[The Next Kanye West]

:shock: :D

that was ill

for real

both verses

but imma have to give this to anesthetic

i dunno how imma put this in cats...so i'll explain more

anesthetic's verse was perfect to the T, wit all his multies and his descriptions

the only prob wit instinx's was sometimes his flow was iffy(maybe its juss me)...but it was a perfect verse also

'why' do i find myself praying-in-church~saying-it-hurts to know why-he-'died'
'lies' 'inside' blazing-my-worth~'staying'-his-first priority to protect all of-these-lives
'tries' raising-the-herd~craving-the-earth hopin people find-thE-stride

escpecially that opener

but yeah...yall should collab and add a hook

that be an ill song

so 1-0 anesthetic

[instinx]

haha thas probly bin the first vote for sum1 else i didnt take offense too..

but yo that opener gotta rhyme scheme that i tried to stick to.. a-b-b-a, a-b-b-a

..but yeah aiight 0-1 uppin votes

[Anesthetic]

Upping for more votes.

[bishtang]

rhyme scheme-an-both were hot and after intinx 1st 3 lines i thought he wud take it but it wernt persistent
flow-anesthetic-had ta read twice ta feel it but wen i was feelin tha flow it was sick.instinx ya flow was goin well but wen ya changed the lenght of bars and jus mixed it all up it lost alot of flow
creativity-tie-both ahd creative lines but it comes with the nature of the battle i guess
best expressed-tie-this was close and i thought this was gonna go ta anesthetic cos he was real deep wiv it but while instinx wernt as deep he had alot more ideas ta put in
enjoyment-anesthetic-wen i was feelin the flow and it was runnin smoothly i had ta give this to an cos his was so much deeper it was gud ta read

VOTE
>>>ANESTHETIC<<<

[Anesthetic]

Two - Love, for me.

[baklikecookdcrack]

Eh cats cood but tricky but i'll try it

Flow: Anes just sneaks this one, just the way it read the whole way thru man it was sick

Rhyme Scheme: Anes, nice idea from In, but you didn't carry it all the wat thru, nice shit all round tho

Creativity: Shit, this is where Anes takes it, :shock: man you've got an incredible skill for expressin shit, must have some imagination

Vocab: Anes again, just that bit more complex and original, nice form In tho

Enjoyment: Anes in case you couldn't guess, this was a sick verse man, In's was tight, but Anes had that bit more man

Vote: Anesthetic

Sick battle/showdown boys, might get myself into the next one of these, try and express different shit, rather than jst battle, so sum up, sick verses, keep it up :D peace

[instinx]

aiight congrats anesthetic.. tough way fuh me ta go out but ya earned it..
g'job


..0-3 k-o anesthetic..

[-Green Machine-]

ANESTHETIC IS THE 2ND TOPICAL TOURNY CHAMPION.!


G'JOB MAN.!

AND THANKS FOR TRYING TO INSTINX AND ALL THE OTHER CONTESTANTS.!