Some thing 4 da laydeez

[Rocco Malice]

Ghetto luving

Girl sum times i feel your to much
Your silk touch
Your smooth skin
The way you move, you jus glide like an eygptian queen
into and out of my dreams
close but far like a distant glowing star
more precious then my ice you are
u understand me and how i am
tatto's and scars troublesome me and u
K.i.ss.i.n.g like Nas
You never leave me and even when you know im lieing you wanna believe me
and when i say fuck the world who comes and frees me?
you boo cos all the dumb shit i been through
with out you girl i wouldnt have a clue what 2 do
it true i need you
the type of lady i can wine and dine
not like these hoodrats im used to
ur a jewel in my life the only girl i consider t be my wife.

links:
http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=2179
http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=2179
http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=2472

[Divine Write]

sorry check the rules

http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=2261

til then it's locked

[Divine Write]

I saw that you replyed so just edit your post and post up the links to what you replyed to/


thank you for following the rules

[Rocco Malice]

Not sure how to post up links, i so good wit computers

[Divine Write]

I know you replyed to 3 poems so don't worry to much about it/ I already took care of it for you


but for future posts/ to posts links you do this

1)at the top of your screen there should be an adress for the page you are on/ it should say adress on the side/

2)you go up to that adress that if to the right of the word adress/ it should read something like http://www.rapdogs etc etc/ you highlite the adress/
you do thins by moving your mouse up to it and left clicking your mouse while the arrow is on it/ or if it's a cursur (blinking line) you left click with your mouse on the adress and the either move it to the right or left depending on which side you have it on/ when it's highlited the adress will be blue

3) with it highlited you will right click and a menu should appear/ you look for copy on that menu then left click on it/ this will copy that adress for you

4)last you move your mouse to the box provided for you to type your posts in and right click again/ the menu will appear agian and then you look for paste on the menu and left click on it/ this will paste your link/



I know it's alot of instructions for something easy but I made it as descriptive as I could for no confusion/ and no I do not think you are stupid in any way/ again did it for confusion/ I would rather have to much detail then be vague

[Rocco Malice]

Ne more feed back people?

[Tagg3r]

yea man....
FOund some diamonds in your ruff - but stay to the hard core shit I think It's more you. I took the best lines and re-wrote a bit, maybe run from this and you would get something a lil more worth giving to your chick.

close but far like a distant star glowing
The way you move, glidin' and flowing
it's no question your the jewel in my life,
With out a doubt the only girl i could consider my wife.

[Rocco Malice]

Thanx

[FlawlesS]

im feelin u kid...on that love tip this time lol...but i hear where ur comin from..ive had that type of chick in my life...bringin back some memories dog lol...
stay up..keep doin ya thing

[Rocco Malice]

Thax for the feed back people. :D

[PLAYBOYBLAZE]

like that rocco....silk touches.....tight shit keep up the good work...you know what they say...behind every good man, is a great lady....I feel ya