ROUND 1:: Young Rice (4) vs KingBrown (5)

[-Green Machine-]

Round 1 of the rapdogs title tourny

RULES:

5 Bars each

Each Verse Due Sunday!


G'Luck to both emcees

[1-G_MC]

check...good luck fam...

[kingbrown]

damn...intereesting match ups g..:roll:

i'll try an make it interesting mayne...gl 2u2...lol

KB

[1-G_MC]

lezz go...

Ya girl don't wanna see me murk u, so Imma cup-er-face, devour KB n see how supper-taste....when I "KILL YOU WIT CAPS" it'll be like 'elevated snoop songs' the way 'MURDA-WUZ-THE-UPPER-CASE'!!

Funny-how-Im-gonna-eat-through shyt bit by bit and smoke ya bags of green like money-that-I-put-on-heat-to...and when ya chick tellz u she chose me, your response'll be like 'Winnie the Pooh refusin diets', 'Hunny-I-don't-wanna-leave-u'!!

What u droppin crap-for? cause all that talkin'll get you melted like stacked-smores....ya career? lacked-sore, 'havin sex with ancient reptiles' is the only time you'll come on 'rap-tors'(tours)!!

Head-on-rape all up in ya text and this'll make me shoot to Kill Bill like Uma wit the lead-on-tape...dotz red-on-face, cause you'll be like the 'murdered heterosexual creations of hell' when you allow me to be 'kill n a demon-straight'!!(demonstrate)



You stallin-cuz, tower you wit the lyrics, ain't know how tall-it-wuz?....when the 'votes' come, it'll be like a 'tennis oriented dating service', so for once you'll end up wit 'all-the-love'!!(think about it)




ezzy shyt....

[kingbrown]

damn rice...

i just saw this mayne- site has been up and down for me all day. shit was laggin and i couldn't even open the thread. i'll try and key sumthin now and post before i crash tho. at least u went easy... :cry: ....damn...

[kingbrown]

for Young Rice

aight...here we go...

KING VEXED KID but won’t sweat this, jus spit stones like petrified vengence then text it,
deep message,this sultan of ‘shit’l rip ‘capped-in’(captain) like king emphasize entrance and EXITS.*

Ya stressed bitch, I can tell by ya pers-pir-at-ion, cuz king heat ‘deflatin rice’ ta send his ego grazin.
Make cash engagements...I’m ‘servin rice’ in all nations to get a phat ‘purse- per-asian’

Ya time wastin leave king in confusion but still abusin, rice MUST be disillusioned,
Fuck it, I’ll just call it sum text prostitution, cuz yo ‘ass’ gots more ‘sigs’ than the whole constitution...lol**

Jus blazin…rice can’t ‘match’ me wit tree tops.***
This whole ‘deal’ is rigged like we met in an alley and peeped cops,
cuz king show ya over-raided(rated) like these cali weed shops. ****

Young hype, ma text guns nice leavin parts on the walls like I flung ‘rice’,
but ya not hung right...so I’ll spray twice ta watch rice up n peel-off/pilaf* like king ‘munch’ fright….*****

KB

*the start and end are in caps, capped in....wg captain called me sultan of shit against ju in lev 2 rnd 2...
**new sig like every hour...too much damn free time...lol...sigs on his ass implies peeps been up in there..
**u know, like match on a blunt. tree tops means a lot of green.
***shops are coo, but not the best. u can git ish better from local growers. also, bush regime is pushin back on legal weed iniatives so they gettin raided every other week these days.
****peel off as in peel off the wall, and as in take off scared or in fright. like i eat fright....

[SiNiS]

Good battle Fella's... UPPIN VOTES ON THIS SHIT..




bump bump





-peace out-

[1-G_MC]

uppin for votes..........

[1-G_MC]

vote up niggaz!!

[-Green Machine-]

Uhm...Close


Flow: Tie
Punches: Young Rice
Multis: KB
Personals: KB
Wordplay: KB
Enjoyment: Young Rice

Overall Vote: King Brown


Best Lines/Bars:

You stallin-cuz, tower you wit the lyrics, ain't know how tall-it-wuz?....when the 'votes' come, it'll be like a 'tennis oriented dating service', so for once you'll end up wit 'all-the-love'!!(think about it)

Young hype, ma text guns nice leavin parts on the walls like I flung ‘rice’,
but ya not hung right...so I’ll spray twice ta watch rice up n peel-off/pilaf* like king ‘munch’ fright….*****

[1-G_MC]

thanx for votin...1-0(KB)uppin for more votez...

[baklikecookdcrack]

Flow: Tie

Punches: KB

Personals: KB

Rhyme: Tie

Creativity: KB

Vote: Kingbrown

nice battle

[Young Ru]

What u droppin crap-for? cause all that talkin'll get you melted like stacked-smores....ya career? lacked-sore, 'havin sex with ancient reptiles' is the only time you'll come on 'rap-tors'(tours)!!


You stallin-cuz, tower you wit the lyrics, ain't know how tall-it-wuz?....when the 'votes' come, it'll be like a 'tennis oriented dating service', so for once you'll end up wit 'all-the-love'!!(think about it)

^^^sick but lett me get ot da votes

Flow: Tie
Punches: Young Rice
Multis: Tie
Personals: KB
Wordplay: KB
Enjoyment: Young Rice
Overall Vote: Young Rice

[_RoAcH_]

i love readin decent battles... thanks for this gurls lol nah im jestin...


Flow: Rice
Multis: KB
Punches: Rice
Personals: KB
Wordplay: KB
Enjoyment: Rice

Vote: Rice

shit i edited this cus i voted for KB but re-read this shit and Rice's verse cracked me up wit that last line... shit i felt slow readin that twice b4 i got it lol


peace

[1-G_MC]

2-2(tie)keep them votes comin and thanx to all who voted...

[kingbrown]

wow- this is a good battle...

thanks for votin you'll...

still uppin 2-2

[instinx]

yo this was a damn close battle
Fuck it, I’ll just call it sum text prostitution, cuz yo ‘ass’ gots more ‘sigs’ than the whole constitution
haha good one..

'havin sex with ancient reptiles' is the only time you'll come on 'rap-tors'(tours)!!
nice...

i felt those were best punches from both emcees..

flow: KingBrown
punches: Young Rice.. it was close.. rice jus had couple more
multies: tie
personals: KingBrown.. he had sum good ones
creativity: tie
enjoyment: tie

overall: TIE.. had to do it..
i did what roach did.. except at first i thot kb won, but then i re-read it and couldnt decide

[kingbrown]

thx in.

some are tough to call...i hear ya...

still uppin this 3-3....

[BigT]

lezz go...


Funny-how-Im-gonna-eat-through shyt bit by bit and smoke ya bags of green like money-that-I-put-on-heat-to...and when ya chick tellz u she chose me, your response'll be like 'Winnie the Pooh refusin diets', 'Hunny-I-don't-wanna-leave-u'!!


ezzy shyt....
^^^NO OFFENSE BUT THAT WAS KINDA WACK


Flow: Tie
Multis: KB
Punches: Rice
Personals: KB
Wordplay: KB
Enjoyment: Rice

Vote-KB

I'm sorry Rice but u just came to easy.

[pushingtheboundary]

Flow: tie
Multis: tie
Punches: yr
Personals: kb
Wordplay: kb
Enjoyment: yr

this is so close man.. i dunno..i enjoyed rices that little bit more. i think haha..

overall -young rice-

[...yOuNg jU...]

wow iz up to me to decide the winner... well to make it fair i'll give both a line break down n categories...


first up RICE

Ya girl don't wanna see me murk u, so Imma cup-er-face, devour KB n see how supper-taste....when I "KILL YOU WIT CAPS" it'll be like 'elevated snoop songs' the way 'MURDA-WUZ-THE-UPPER-CASE'!!

..... devour KB n see how supper-taste< that was a filler juss to get a multi... caps/snoop punch was hot


Funny-how-Im-gonna-eat-through shyt bit by bit and smoke ya bags of green like money-that-I-put-on-heat-to...and when ya chick tellz u she chose me, your response'll be like 'Winnie the Pooh refusin diets', 'Hunny-I-don't-wanna-leave-u'!!

first line was not only filler, but wack... second line wit punch was hillarious...


What u droppin crap-for? cause all that talkin'll get you melted like stacked-smores....ya career? lacked-sore, 'havin sex with ancient reptiles' is the only time you'll come on 'rap-tors'(tours)!!

nice line... decent all the way through...


Head-on-rape all up in ya text and this'll make me shoot to Kill Bill like Uma wit the lead-on-tape...dotz red-on-face, cause you'll be like the 'murdered heterosexual creations of hell' when you allow me to be 'kill n a demon-straight'!!(demonstrate)

first line and flow was bananas, the punch was extremely forced though ya feel me?... could of been the best bar u had, but it fell of at the end


You stallin-cuz, tower you wit the lyrics, ain't know how tall-it-wuz?....when the 'votes' come, it'll be like a 'tennis oriented dating service', so for once you'll end up wit 'all-the-love'!!(think about it)

wooord... thaz classic young rice right thur... for real, best bar by far in your verse...



now KING BROWN

KING VEXED KID but won’t sweat this, jus spit stones like petrified vengence then text it,
deep message,this sultan of ‘shit’l rip ‘capped-in’(captain) like king emphasize entrance and EXITS.*

sick wit flow n multies... got a lil personal in the second line... no punch here though


Ya stressed bitch, I can tell by ya pers-pir-at-ion, cuz king heat ‘deflatin rice’ ta send his ego grazin.
Make cash engagements...I’m ‘servin rice’ in all nations to get a phat ‘purse- per-asian’

lmao funny ass punch... first line was filler n weak


Ya time wastin leave king in confusion but still abusin, rice MUST be disillusioned,
Fuck it, I’ll just call it sum text prostitution, cuz yo ‘ass’ gots more ‘sigs’ than the whole constitution...lol**

haha... ok lil bar...


Jus blazin…rice can’t ‘match’ me wit tree tops.***
This whole ‘deal’ is rigged like we met in an alley and peeped cops,
cuz king show ya over-raided(rated) like these cali weed shops. ****

nice, was feelin it, guess cuz i'm a weed head... first line i didn't like


Young hype, ma text guns nice leavin parts on the walls like I flung ‘rice’,
but ya not hung right...so I’ll spray twice ta watch rice up n peel-off/pilaf* like king ‘munch’ fright….*****

sik wit them multies kid... overall pretty decent




CATS...

Flow... KB

Multies... KB

Punches... RICE... had very weak ones... but the winnie the pooh n the love punches were bananas... KB ur's were funny but u didn't throw so much

Wordplay... KB, it was all ova

Personals... KB, only one rice had was that kill bill line, n it was type weak...

Delivery... KB

Overall... KB


VOTE>>>>> KB


damn rice... u been slackin lately... waz hood?... i know u could of came harder... i mean i lost to kb too... i underestimatd him.. i dunno if it was the same way wit u...

[SiNiS]

5-4 KB wins.. good battle fella'z

[kingbrown]

wow...thanks for votin all and the breakdowns...

nice battle rice. i know u didn't come as hard as you can...

and ju- i didn't intend for that line to be filler like



Ya stressed bitch, I can tell by ya pers-pir-at-ion, cuz king heat ‘deflatin rice’ ta send his ego grazin.
Make cash engagements...I’m ‘servin rice’ in all nations to get a phat ‘purse- per-asian’

lmao funny ass punch... first line was filler n weak

if someone is stressin, they sweat right? when rice loses water, it deflates... deflate someone is like brusin their ego...

maybe it was a stretch, but i didn't drop an explanation cuz i thought it was an obvious play off 'rice,' but i think i coulda worded it better...

KB

[...yOuNg jU...]

ohhh worrd... i see it now... but yo, having to explain ur rhymes is wack... cuz les say u make a track.. u cant explain urself at the end... if ppl caught it they caught it, if they didn't, then they might think u wack u feel me????... i neva read explenations n e wayz.. n i dnt give em, cuz it's like ur boosting ur verse.... juss my 2 cents

[kingbrown]

normally i agree with u man, but peeps often skim lookin for surface level ish they don't need to think about. i miss shit too. i have had to even change my feed on battles i voted on because i missed something. sometimes sin or ven will tell me a punch 3x before i see it, but that does not mean its was horrible concept to start with. everyone comes from diff mindstates to and backgrounds and ish so rather than change styles, why not explain your own till peeps learn how read yer stuff?... just another way too look at it..

and i only asked u cuz i wanted your opinion on the flip...

if its wack, its wack...lol-but it wasn't filler, was my only point...

the feed is appreciated tho...

KB