ROUND 1:: Antic (3) vs AllEyesOnMe (0)

[-Green Machine-]

Round 1 of the rapdogs title tourny

RULES:

5 bars each

Verses due by Sunday!


G'Luck to both emcees!

[Antic]

Checkin' in...I'ma drop on Saturday...

[Antic]

Aiight check this,

"I Get Around" this Pac like politicians duck-tha-thick-red-tape
Like my lil’ Lewinsky make you suck-ma’-dick-head-straight/

I know just what ya like I’ll fuck ya asshole wit this mic-and-lines
Rip out tha "Heartz of Men" eat you up in battles like mike’s-and-ike’s/

Your style only half-hard/ like a man poppin’ vi-ag-ra cuz you-limp
Two-pimps a fly-ass-bra and Black-Star’s minds won’t get you-wins/

I dance cir-cles ‘round this mix of Pac and Steve Urk-le yo he’s-weak/
Punches makin’ his eyez bleed The Color Pur-ple cuz he "Can’t See-Me"/

Shorty wanna be a thug/but he’s just another punk that’s tryin’ stop-one/
My bop-gun fired five bars at this Pac-son/hit’um good and dropped-‘um/

[AllEyezOnMe]

Yo, I got matched up with a weak ass sounds like *An-Tick*(Antic), this kid throws punches but it feels like a young *Man's-Kick*//
The only way this kid's goin' to win is if he's a *Syco-Phantic*(Sway Votes), ya he spits fire, his shits hott like the fuckin' *At-lantic*//
Since when the fuck do straight and tape *Rhyme*?, this kid needs to not talk, and be more like *Mimes*//
Knew you'd spit a Pac diss, used that shit so much it should be a *Crime*, that shit don't work, and never will, so why and try to use it this *Time*?//
Rap battlin' me is like havin' an *Our(Hour)-Existance*, so like Mr Deeds, but your goin' to need a lot *Nicer-Inheritance*//
I'm sorry you can't rap, maybe you should start lookin' up to me for a *Better-Influence*, you beat a few newbs, but battlin' someone like me goin' to leave you dead usin' *Heavier-Violence*//
You poor, so you can't afford a *Decent-Vehicle*, when you die, no one's goin' to show up it'll be an *Absent-Funeral*//
If you were to win this battle, you might see that shit on T.V. as a *Recent-Miracle*, your shit aren't hit me, like a *Distant-Personal*//
Your throw punches *Like-A-Pussy*, but isntead of bitin' my ear off, suck my dick off like, so *Your-Not-Exactly* like *Mike-The-Wussy*//
So, don't act like a bitch, and run away like that *Dyke-Named-Lassy*, I aint even sorry I had to do this, and fuccin' *Strike-This-Pansy*

[-Green Machine-]

uhm..easy

Flow: Antic
Punches: Antic
Multis: Antic
Personals: None
Wordplay: None
Enjoyment: Antic

Overall Vote: Antic

[Young Ru]

Flow: Antic
Punches: Antic
Multis: Antic
Personals: None
Wordplay: None
Overall Vote: Antic

[instinx]

flow: antic..
punches: antic.. weak punches from all i's
personals: 0.. none
multies: antic.. not very good tho
creativity: tie
enjoyment: antic

overall: antic.. not great battle.. step up next round