ROUND 1:: -Green Machine- (4) vs Baby_Uzi (5)

[-Green Machine-]

Round 1 of the rapdogs title tourny

RULES:

5 bars each

Verses due by Sunday!


G'Luck to both emcees!

[Young Ru]

chek in...good luck homie

[-Green Machine-]

Check in...G'luck fam!

[Young Ru]

ight chek it...here i go...


Green, i'll 'bobby pin ya tupay' and put a clip-in-ya-wig, catch a tantrum and den flipp-on-dis-kid...Cassidy and Saigon? the Quote dont match the PIC-IN-YA-SIG/

Btich-my-barz-sick, And you dont wanna be there wen i my clip-start-sparkin, den i'll rip-you-apart-kid, and leave ya 'feces wit trash' cause ya SHYT-IS-GARBAGE/

GM, so wen im done wit ya, you gone die-dwell, couldnt fire if ya mouth had gasoline for saliva and you were spittin by-hell...now u treatin dis Battle like 'lacin up them James' on the 'kitchen floor' cause you TIE-L's(tiles)/

Dis wack nigga, plus his flow-is-so-lame, you da wackest nigga dat roll-wit-the-game, and now you gonna get ya soul-filled-wit-pain, i'll leave ya 'mind like the center of a donut' now theres a hole-in-ya-brain/

GM, its plain and simple you's a over-grown-big-bitch, and wen votes up in dis battle yours is gonna be low like Africans OWNIN'-A-BUSINESS/

[-Green Machine-]

All these GM disses-the-same...but O E/oh he lost like vowels missin-in-name.! (A, I, U are in his name)


My rhymes is like braces wit spaces-they-hurt, I’m erasin-ya-work
But I’ll treat this kid like an Ostrich and stick his face-in-the-dirt

You the only one on the site the rest-dead, you locked down like being arrested
But you wanna be part of the Gods(game) after this you gon be his Best-friend.!!

I don’t need 5(bars) you can get knocked-in-a-few its sad that im even talking-to-you
You got athletes feet that’s why no one wants to walk-in-ya-shoes!(He had a freestyle called “Walk in My Shoes”)

You comin up short, quit actin-tall 'fore I’ll leave you in a casket-dog
Your raps-is-off, cause you only get W’s playin girls basketball.! (Wnba)


VOTE TIME!

[1-G_MC]

Flow:GM
Punches:Uzi
Personals:GM
Rhyme Scheme:Uzi
Metaz:Uzi
Wordplay:GM
Overall:Baby_Uzi



it wasn't a very good battle, Uzi had some punches I liked and Green came wit some shyt I thought wuz played or weak in concept...Uzi was a lil more creative to me which won him the battle..

[baklikecookdcrack]

Flow: UZI

Punches: UZI

Personals: GM

Creativity: Tie

Rhyme: UZI

Vote: Baby_Uzi

[Young Ru]

2-0(uzi) more votes

[Young Ru]

votes we need some votes...2-0(uzi)

[The Next Kanye West]

it was a 6.5/10 battle

cuz yall coulda came wit harder shit

anyways

Flow:GM

Punches:Uzi

Personals:GM

Rhyme Scheme:Uzi

Metaz:Uzi

Wordplay:GM

Overall:Baby_Uzi

[Venomous]

No offence but i dont think they will count your vote... only 37 posts...

[Young Ru]

yea i think Venom is right...but wateva...Lez get some more votes
2-0(uzi)

[Venomous]

Green, i'll 'bobby pin ya tupay' and put a clip-in-ya-wig, catch a tantrum and den flipp-on-dis-kid...Cassidy and Saigon? the Quote dont match the PIC-IN-YA-SIG/
Decnt line wit da mulites, bobby pin ish coulda ben flipped better, not a hard punch

Btich-my-barz-sick, And you dont wanna be there wen i my clip-start-sparkin, den i'll rip-you-apart-kid, and leave ya 'feces wit trash' cause ya SHYT-IS-GARBAGE/
good attempt at mulites but the y didn’t really rhyme well last line shoulda been flipped better more like “ ya raps like feces in trash cans cause ya shit is garbage. Try to sway away from to much gun talk

GM, so wen im done wit ya, you gone die-dwell, couldnt fire if ya mouth had gasoline for saliva and you were spittin by-hell...now u treatin dis Battle like 'lacin up them James' on the 'kitchen floor' cause you TIE-L's(tiles)/
Tie L?? how do you tie for a loss? That mean you’ll lose to? Again good attempt wit mulites, first lin was good

Dis wack nigga, plus his flow-is-so-lame, you da wackest nigga dat roll-wit-the-game, and now you gonna get ya soul-filled-wit-pain, i'll leave ya 'mind like the center of a donut' now theres a hole-in-ya-brain/
to much wack/nigga in first line, second line was a decent punch one thing you need to work on wit multies is if you are using more then 2 words you want to try an have them all rhyme only part that reall rhymes in ya mulites is the last word. Decent second line

GM, its plain and simple you's a over-grown-big-bitch, and wen votes up in dis battle yours is gonna be low like Africans OWNIN'-A-BUSINESS/
These lines don’t rhyme big-bitch and business don’t rhyme, remember that ish when spit verbaly can sound more like a rhyme depending on the tone and ish you say it in, but in text its got to read out rhyming naw mean. You got good concepts but need to work on flipin em better and work on cleaner mulites.
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All these GM disses-the-same...but O E/oh he lost like vowels missin-in-name.! (A, I, U are in his name)
not hard hittin decent mulites

My rhymes is like braces wit spaces-they-hurt, I’m erasin-ya-work
But I’ll treat this kid like an Ostrich and stick his face-in-the-dirt
good concept not to hard hitting work and dirt a little strech as a rhyme

You the only one on the site the rest-dead, you locked down like being arrested
But you wanna be part of the Gods(game) after this you gon be his Best-friend.!!
like second line a lot gods best friend cause u dead

I don’t need 5(bars) you can get knocked-in-a-few its sad that im even talking-to-you
You got athletes feet that’s why no one wants to walk-in-ya-shoes!(He had a freestyle called “Walk in My Shoes”)
good mulites second line coulda been flip better, good concept but not to hard hitting

You comin up short, quit actin-tall 'fore I’ll leave you in a casket-dog
Your raps-is-off, cause you only get W’s playin girls basketball.! (Wnba)
Again the end words are stretched for a rhyme, actin tall and BB rhyme but doesn’t seem like actin tall Is the end of the first line, casket dogs is I think, I woulda fliped something in the first like; ya shit always cums short like midget sex, add a lil complexity so sum’n

Not the best battle from either, I know GM can bring it harder then that

Flow TIE
Multies: GM not as many as uzi but jus a lil cleaner
Punches: UZI
Personal: GM
Metas: TIE not really any complex ones
Wordplay: UZI, only wordplay I saw was tiles TIE-Ls not much from either but I have to give it to uzi green had W’s in there wit WNBA but didn’t really come out as much of a wordplay.

I know you guys hate this ish but ima have to drop a TIE vote, Both lacked fresh concepts and complexity and were pretty much dead even in catz

[Young Ru]

3-1(uzi)...lez get some more votes

[Young Ru]

3-1(uzi)...lez get some more votes

[_RoAcH_]

Flow: GM
Multis: GM
PunchsH BABY
Peronals: GM
Wordplay: BABY
Metas: GM

Vote : GM

didnt feal it was a particular gud effort from eitha... but not bad... Uzi some of ur lines remind me alot of ones ive heard/read just wanted to say that no accusin or shit just sayin.. and GM im sure i've sin u coem ALOT harder than that!!!


peace

[-Green Machine-]

3-2 Uzi..

[Young Ru]

lez get some more votes...3-2(uzi)

[kingbrown]

shit...i thought i already dropped a vote on this..

hold this spot...i'll gotta finish sumthin real quick and i'll redo my breakdown...

OK

Uzi
Green, i'll 'bobby pin ya tupay' and put a clip-in-ya-wig, catch a tantrum and den flipp-on-dis-kid...Cassidy and Saigon? the Quote dont match the PIC-IN-YA-SIG/
[color=brown]first concept is coo, but was flipped strangely. Why not say ‘and I’m not talking bout bobby pinning ya tupay…” that way the emphasis is on the clip/wig part as a punch…might have come across harder that way…personal attempt was coo, but just not that hard…multies nice tho as well as flow.
Btich-my-barz-sick, And you dont wanna be there wen i my clip-start-sparkin, den i'll rip-you-apart-kid, and leave ya 'feces wit trash' cause ya SHYT-IS-GARBAGE/
nice multies and flow, but wp attempt is pretty straight forward... needed better setup then rip apart I think
GM, so wen im done wit ya, you gone die-dwell, couldnt fire if ya mouth had gasoline for saliva and you were spittin by-hell...now u treatin dis Battle like 'lacin up them James' on the 'kitchen floor' cause you TIE-L's(tiles)/
flow change here…a lil stretched cuz the concepts needed so much setup. Not bad word play on the last punch, but the concept doesn’t really play out the way it prob should…I dunno…
Dis wack nigga, plus his flow-is-so-lame, you da wackest nigga dat roll-wit-the-game, and now you gonna get ya soul-filled-wit-pain, i'll leave ya 'mind like the center of a donut' now theres a hole-in-ya-brain/
not bad with the donut, and punches pretty hard. Could been flipped more complex tho..i dunno.
GM, its plain and simple you's a over-grown-big-bitch, and wen votes up in dis battle yours is gonna be low like Africans OWNIN'-A-BUSINESS/
I disagree with ven here…big bitch and business does rhyme. I like it. biz-niss is how its pronounced, right? The spelling is irrelevant. Decent concept, but the start was a little juvenile soundin with the overgrownstuff. Not bad for closer…

GM
these GM disses-the-same...but O E/oh he lost like vowels missin-in-name.! (A, I, U are in his name)
lost? Need more context man for punch. Nice concept and multies, but not setup well enough
My rhymes is like braces wit spaces-they-hurt, I’m erasin-ya-work
But I’ll treat this kid like an Ostrich and stick his face-in-the-dirt
this coulda been tite if the first line setup the second. Braces doesn’t have much to do with erasin, and then the concept is clean on the second, but seemed random. Nice flow and multies tho.
You the only one on the site the rest-dead, you locked down like being arrested
But you wanna be part of the Gods(game) after this you gon be his Best-friend.!!
ooh, this was nice…subtle.. I didn’t catch it at first. Nice multies and punch concept is very clean.
I don’t need 5(bars) you can get knocked-in-a-few its sad that im even talking-to-you
You got athletes feet that’s why no one wants to walk-in-ya-shoes!(He had a freestyle called “Walk in My Shoes”)
decent personal. Flow/mutlies consistent.
You comin up short, quit actin-tall 'fore I’ll leave you in a casket-dog
Your raps-is-off, cause you only get W’s playin girls basketball.! (Wnba)
mutlies ok here, but not as clean as others. Punch works, but is a little too simple. Playin wnba doesn’t give u W’s –concept is a lil forced. Between comin up short and raps is off u coulda flipped sumthin pretty tite. Ok for closer.

aight..

Punches: Green-not as many misses but still pretty simple. Uzi lost this seeming to be obsessing over gunz…its just a matter of taste here…I woulda called it a tie, but green's was a lil fresher in concepts...
Wordplay: Uzi
Personals: Green
Multies: tie
Flow: uzi- more complex ini structure…

Vote= tie

Sorry guys, I thought I could call this… but when I changed the punch cat to green on my second read through this it balanced everything out. As I have said before with close matches- if you’ll agree on more cats to evaluate I can add to it and see if it makes a difference. I think the issue is that both textees seemed a little off of their game, so it was hard to say who really did a better job.

KB

[Young Ru]

alright ^^

[kingbrown]

sry bout that... at you each have one more vote...and got some feed too..

what is it now? 4-3 UZI?

KB

[instinx]

yo i dunno what the rulin is but green machine emself said to make 5 bars.. n he only made 4.5 emself??

but it shudnt be decided like dat so..
flow: GM..uzi's was off on that whole 'tiles' punch..
punches: Tie..Uzi had more.. but only one of em hit hard.. the doughnut.. but gm had his finisher which pretty much evened up the count
personals: GM
multies: UZi
enjoyment: nietha

overall: i gotta agree wit kingbrown ..tie..

so i guess its 5-4?

battle over.. better come harder next round uzi

[SpitFire212]

Flow - Green
Punches - Tie
Personals - Green
Multies - Uzi
Enjoyment - Green

Vote - Green Machine

[Young Ru]

so i won...^^^spitfire ya vote doesnt count...its who gets to five wins first and wit does last two votes made it 5-4(uzi)...so i won...good shyt Green...-1-

[SiNiS]

Wow.. nice win uzi...

Lets see wut Green says about this..

[-Green Machine-]

i'll say you freeposted??

good battle uzi...


Baby_Uzi advances!