ROUND 1:: AZNation (0) vs Artifact (3)

[-Green Machine-]

Round 1 of the rapdogs title tourny

RULES:

5 bars each

Verses due by Sunday!


G'Luck to both emcees!

[AZNation]

Checkity check..

Hot damn im bout to spit fuck blue fire in dis shit.. Fuck why i gotta go up against Artifact... Errr oh well nicca get ready..

[Artifact]

Check... i might drop later tonight... if not, itll be some time saturday.

[AZNation]

Mechanically incline My lines are known to split Bones...
switch poems, Nigga workin on wheel's the only time u Lift Chrome...
in fact my bullets are lightening and the gun I use thunder...
go ahead and play basketball wit ya life, I'm known to Shoot Jumpers...
creating bars to match leave you wit scares and scratch...
names Artifact, but that shit you call writing can't be describe as Art if that...
artifact your wack, in fact dont even record rhymes...
ur raps present no opportunity in rap, Ur spittin Unemployed lines...
so nigga keep ya weapon straight cuz I'm perfecting great...
by sending you welfare Bullet's that'll make ya Section's Ache ( 8 )...

[Artifact]

I forgot bout this & im goin out so i gotta do this quick coz i wont have a chance tomorrow...




Happy wit ya verse? I guess what they say is right, ignorance-is-bliss
Coz your just a 'useless pussy' like a 'nuns clitoris'-is-bitch

AZN couldnt flow-with-pride, and face it, you know-inside
That 'bein on dicks' is the only way you could claim 'homo-side' (homicide)

Now dont go thinkin they were great-hits, your lyrics are a waste-kid
Face-it, all your punches were 'barely strikes' like 'baseballers naked'

Like crap skaters without pads, your down so much you must have sore-knees
Ill make this whore-bleed, 'nations bein destroyed' like this was 'world war-3'

This aint a fight with a carpenter, but your gettin sawn-from-the-offset *
We all know the truth is youve 'bitten more kids' then a 'jaws-movie-boxset' **



* Saw is a carpenters tool…
** He got caught bitin (hes clean now though lol)




Gd luck man
Lets get some votes

[1-G_MC]

Flow:both
Punches:Art
Personals:Art
Rhyme Scheme:Art
Metaz:Art
Wordplay:Art
Overall:Artifact...



good battle....AZ you cam harder than I expected, but Artifact came wit some good shyt as far as punches and metaz....

[-Green Machine-]

Uhm..Easy

Flow: AZN
Punches: Art
Multis: Art
Personals: Art
Wordplay: Art
Enjoyment: Art

Overall Vote: Artifact

[baklikecookdcrack]

Flow: Tie

Punches: Artifact

Personals: Artifact

Rhyme: Artifact

Creativity: Artifact

Vote: Artifact

[kingbrown]

[Artifact]

Happy wit ya verse? I guess what they say is right, ignorance-is-bliss
Coz your just a 'useless pussy' like a 'nuns clitoris'-is-bitch
lol...punch is comedy. coulda used more multies tho.
AZN couldnt flow-with-pride, and face it, you know-inside
That 'bein on dicks' is the only way you could claim 'homo-side' (homicide)
decent wordplay, nice flow and multies were better.
Now dont go thinkin they were great-hits, your lyrics are a waste-kid
Face-it, all your punches were 'barely strikes' like 'baseballers naked'
hot flow here and multies hit, but punch concept is a lil forced
Like crap skaters without pads, your down so much you must have sore-knees
Ill make this whore-bleed, 'nations bein destroyed' like this was 'world war-3'
pretty solid bar. both punches were aight, and nameplay was clean on second too..
This aint a fight with a carpenter, but your gettin sawn-from-the-offset *
We all know the truth is youve 'bitten more kids' then a 'jaws-movie-boxset' **
yep...ish never leaves u, bitin is not cool. metas worked. solid closer.

[AZ]
Mechanically incline My lines are known to split Bones...
switch poems, Nigga workin on wheel's the only time u Lift Chrome...
i jus don't git the first line. i think it was the word choice. u can't say mechanically incline. u can say inclined, but incline is a noun. it just don't make sense...but coo on second line.
in fact my bullets are lightening and the gun I use thunder...
go ahead and play basketball wit ya life, I'm known to Shoot Jumpers...
interesting flip. creative. just not too direct a hit.
creating bars to match leave you wit scares and scratch...
names Artifact, but that shit you call writing can't be describe as Art if that...
not bad with flow and multies, but wording is forcedf or rhyme scheme. it would be scratches, right? but that dont rhyme with artifact. punch was decent tho. simple but pretty clean.
artifact your wack, in fact dont even record rhymes...
ur raps present no opportunity in rap, Ur spittin Unemployed lines...
ya shoulda used a diff word like "on tracks" where u used rap the second time. esp since it was part of rhyme scheme. but concept is a lil off tho. unemployed lines are created to provide potential opportunity or to pick up paychecks. u say no opportunity. i dunno.
so nigga keep ya weapon straight cuz I'm perfecting great...
by sending you welfare Bullet's that'll make ya Section's Ache ( 8 )...
lol...that is pretty good with section 8. i haven't heard this flipped before. nice flow-solid closer.

Punches: Art-az missed on a few concepts
Wordplay: tie-homo-side/section 8. not much else...
Personals: Art
Multies: tie-close
Flow: AZ

my vote= Art

Close battle, but art had fewer slips with punch concepts. az's verse coulda been really good if the ideas were thought out more. the concepts were fresh in most cases but just not flipped right or had poor wordchoice. art was just more consistent overall...nice job guys.

kb