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-Green Machine-
08-17-2005, 07:09 PM
Round 1 of the rapdogs title tourny

RULES:

5 bars each

Verses due by Sunday!


G'Luck to both emcees!
bishtang
08-18-2005, 01:27 AM
checkin in
jayhood
08-18-2005, 06:34 AM
oh shit i did not see that.......checking in....
bishtang
08-19-2005, 04:09 AM
by the way is this upto 5 bars or 5 bars exactly
Eyeronic
08-19-2005, 06:26 AM
dont mean to freepost but make sure u guys do 5barz, and 1 bar means 2 lines
or it might mess up other peoples battles

good luck y'all peace
jayhood
08-19-2005, 01:14 PM
ayo...

Lean-back creep-back I'm in the zone nicca peep-that, long-done when I-prone wreck your-dome I just break-that...champ? where the wins-at? a chump he just lame-wack..like-phone that ring and-tone in his-home you'll get HANG-flat/

BITCHtang is a weak-dude like female dog(bitch) that get ass-screw(fuck),he gets PLUGED on in the ass like OUTLETS walls with two holes-cue...shit I'm a blast-you like bomb f@g you get BUSS-through, even EM (Eminem) have read your rhyme he look at-you and say fuck-you<<peep his sig

Bishtang? more like BITCH-STAND you ROLL DICE? you aint street-fam you know you out of LUCK cant roll SEVEN with one DICE-man :roll:...so hit the gym you'll UPgrade-then, cant MATCH(Matches)this I've been LIT-man, I'll give this bum blood clot (BUMBOCLOT) when I stick the JAM IN HIS-CAN(Jamaican)/

WATFORD(where he live) cant-afFORD to push a-FORD down-abroad...you fly? nicca please like addict near a edge you cant FLY with no HERO IN (heroin)down your-blood...this battle is a brawl.... cause you know JAY'S the SON (JASON) that'll FUCK this BITCH (BITCH/BISHstand) like a-broad/<<his sig look like JASON SAYING FUCK YOU
jayhood
08-19-2005, 01:59 PM
ok im gone for the day because all the time i spent on rapdog im actually at work :shock:....so on the weekend im not gonna be around.......so when i get back on monday that's when i'll see the result......one
bishtang
08-20-2005, 12:17 PM
ya rhymes have holes in from where im hammerin and nailin em,ya do av sum lyrical shots ya mus be savin-em, but they only there cos im packin lyrical shells in ya cranium

ya took away ya sig so i cant get personal rap or is it cos your names next on murder cap.* ...mowin ya down wiv a burst of a gat next time you seen's in a hearse after that

the only fing 'hood' bout 'jay' is the end of his name, you out in round one so u gonna end this wiv shame,if you fink you got word'play' then you mus be bendin the 'game'*

you callin that rap but its more like quier,beat me?ya mus be jokin mayne,if i went 1st you'd be chokin crazed but now it looks like ya 'hoods on fire' the way im 'smokin' jays



*=he took his sig away to avoid personals.in his sig there was summin called murder cap wiv emcees that got murked
*=if you bendin the game you changin how it works
1-G_MC
08-20-2005, 10:08 PM
Flow:Bish
Punches:Jay
Personals:Jay
Rhyme Scheme:Bish
Metaz:Jay
Wordplay:Jay
Overall:Jayhood..


good battle...Bish I felt some of your punches were weak and Jay you need to focus on ya syllables cuz some of those shytz weren't multis....
-Green Machine-
08-21-2005, 10:50 AM
Uhm...Close.?

Flow: Bish
Punches: Jay
Multis: Tie (J's were weird)
Personals: Jay
Wordplay: -
Enjoyment: Jay

Overall Vote: JayHood
instinx
08-21-2005, 11:30 AM
flow: b..
punches: j..
personals: j..
multies: b..
creativity: j..
enjoyment: tie..

overall: jayhood.. a better verse from my seat
he had more punches n creativeness

not bad battle