ROUND 2:: Antic (0) vs Venomous (3)

[-Green Machine-]

8 Bars this time..


Due Sunday!


G'Luck!

[Venomous]

..../
.\/ <------- Check

[Antic]

Checkin

[Venomous]

dis battle like da alphabet cause U aint gettin past V...

Lets Begin

Drop ‘some-antic/semantic’ an display da ‘means’ a winnin,‘jack’ cats hard ta leave ‘bean’s a spinnin’, asked dis f@g bout his gay tendencies n all he said was “means a livin”// Biotch

Spits ‘retarded kid’ ya ‘lack tha mental’, ‘crack ya dental’ cause I ‘rack mean punches’,u can try ya ‘bag a tricks’ a wack potential but da ‘sacks to light’ like ya ‘packed lean lunches’//

No need fo ‘skill insinuations’, when Antic spits dawgs see why youz ina ‘drought a fame’ ya over worked, n I aint talking bout ‘nintendo’ when I make dis foo ‘Punch out’ da game(the rap game)//

Round 3 who im I beatin-on next cause dis guy seen more ‘losses’ then ‘Viet-nam Vets’, fuck it, ‘drop’ dis foo wit sick con-text n leave em ‘hittin the ground hard’ like he ‘havin lawn sex’//LOLZ lawn sex…

Im ‘finishin quick fam’, ya ‘text cums up short’ a wins like a ‘spittin minute man’, jus ‘throw ya ish in da garbage’ cause last I checked dis sites tryna ta ‘limit-spam’// (shit noone wants to read LOLZ)

Enough wit ya ‘anitics’ dis aint no ‘fun n games’, Ven gun an blaze, ya done n dazed, so watch me as I ‘hand-Ls/handles’ ta dis dude like ‘cb names’// (name you go by on a cb radio is called a handle)

Scripts set ‘fire ta ya monitor’ so hit the ‘Screen Saver’, I kill ‘catz’ when ma ‘nine’s live’, Be careful when reading my veres cause dis ish il ‘Burn through ya eyes’ like ‘CD ROM drives’/(CD Roms burn cd’s through a lazer eye)

Ven don’t ‘beat around da bush’, dis aint ‘innuendo games’,ill fuckin ‘close dis one up’ leavin Antic ‘shuttered behind me’ like the back a ‘window panes’// <------ where do I get this ish??!!
Semantic- Of or relating to meaning
Bean- informal terms for a human head

DONE!
ROUND THREE ANYONE??

[Venomous]

*EDIT*
ish posted twice lolz

[Antic]

Venemous...

Here's an idea: How 'bout you make it easy??

Just kiddin'. That shit was awesome, I'll come as hard as I can tomorrow.

[Venomous]

LOLZ

Much respect for the good sportsmanship dawg

V

[Antic]

aiight, I might be out-gunned but I'm come out swingin'!

Yeeeeeeeuh!! (oh, i edited once to fix a paragraph format, it was fucked!)

Send-in’-this out like news my mess-age-is-thus to this kid they call Ven-e-mous/
Like it’s tel-e-vised I’ll tell-this-guy ta “fight tha powers that be” or receive my
Public En-e-mas//

I’m like a Duke-of-Hazzard got this chump pushin’ up ‘Daisies’ when I move-up-ladders/
This Jessica Simpson ass bitch gettin’ welcomed to ‘Knox-ville’ his venom’s not-ill cuz I
chew-up-rappers//

It’s like I’m play-in’-the-lute I got this rap cobra in a trance now I got his ass trans-fixed/
I’m mak-in’-the-news my style like praying man-tis these repeated fast-hits leavin’ him wit sets of
fat-lips//

I’m com-in’ after this snake-in-the-grass with the full intentions of shank-in’-his-ass/
Place-this-bitch-last like a sud-den tra-gic accident the an-tics of round 2 got his
game-whip-lashed//

It makes me ev-il that I wanna yank his fangs-out and in-ject them up into his pee-hole/
In-fect his House-of-Pain my amounts-of-game got him doused-in-flames like played-out DJ
leth-al//

You out of place here like a perv mackin’ to tha dead bitches sayin’ “Kiss-me-lov-er”/
I’m drop-pin’ this-bitch-kid this sick-mis-fit I got him locked-in a coff-in on ‘Six-feet-Und-er’//

Not ex-pect-in’ this brilliant display of test-weap-ons on vets yo my style’s-a-may-ham/
I’ll tell-this el-vis I hurt-mus-cles and murk-hus-tles to keep this Kurt-Russ-ell 3000
miles-from-grace-land//

I’m fun-ny cuz I’ve cho-sen-to-stay-high you lamer than six chicks into tot-in’-a-gay-guy/
But these last luc-ky 7 bars make me just like his avatar I got his ass roll-in’-a-snake-eyes//

[Young Ru]

FlOw- VeN
MuLtiEs- TiEd
MeTa'S- VeN
PuNcHeS- VeN
EnJoYmEnT- VeN
OvErAlL- VeN

good drop from both...Antic u gettin sicker son keep doin ya thing boy..-1-

[Venomous]

I must admit that thats is prob the best drop ive seen from antic yet, keep elevating homie

1-0

[baklikecookdcrack]

Drop ‘some-antic/semantic’ an display da ‘means’ a winnin,‘jack’ cats hard ta leave ‘bean’s a spinnin’, asked dis f@g bout his gay tendencies n all he said was “means a livin”//

nice shit here, flows tight, nice wp an ideas

Spits ‘retarded kid’ ya ‘lack tha mental’, ‘crack ya dental’ cause I ‘rack mean punches’,u can try ya ‘bag a tricks’ a wack potential but da ‘sacks to light’ like ya ‘packed lean lunches’//

again nice shit here, feelin the mutlies, and the idea follows thru well

No need fo ‘skill insinuations’, when Antic spits dawgs see why youz ina ‘drought a fame’ ya over worked, n I aint talking bout ‘nintendo’ when I make dis foo ‘Punch out’ da game(the rap game)//

decent bar, not as good as the last 2 tho i'd say man

Round 3 who im I beatin-on next cause dis guy seen more ‘losses’ then ‘Viet-nam Vets’, fuck it, ‘drop’ dis foo wit sick con-text n leave em ‘hittin the ground hard’ like he ‘havin lawn sex’//

lol tight bar right there, the wp is sick, and the punch is on target

Im ‘finishin quick fam’, ya ‘text cums up short’ a wins like a ‘spittin minute man’, jus ‘throw ya ish in da garbage’ cause last I checked dis sites tryna ta ‘limit-spam’//

yep, nice bar again, have herd tht garbage line flipped before tho

Enough wit ya ‘anitics’ dis aint no ‘fun n games’, Ven gun an blaze, ya done n dazed, so watch me as I ‘hand-Ls/handles’ ta dis dude like ‘cb names’// (name you go by on a cb radio is called a handle)

that play on his name must be gettin old now lol, nice idea on the radio shit, its that kinda ish that makes real vets stand out from wannabes

Scripts set ‘fire ta ya monitor’ so hit the ‘Screen Saver’, I kill ‘catz’ when ma ‘nine’s live’, Be careful when reading my veres cause dis ish il ‘Burn through ya eyes’ like ‘CD ROM drives’/

probably your best bar there, sick wp all teh way thru, and the cat thing was nice, the burn idea kept goin, tight ish man

Ven don’t ‘beat around da bush’, dis aint ‘innuendo games’,ill fuckin ‘close dis one up’ leavin Antic ‘shuttered behind me’ like the back a ‘window panes’//

tight bar, nice way to finish off a tight battle verse



Send-in’-this out like news my mess-age-is-thus to this kid they call Ven-e-mous/
Like it’s tel-e-vised I’ll tell-this-guy ta “fight tha powers that be” or receive my Public En-e-mas//

first line is basically set-up, lackin wp man, niec second line tho, more of this

I’m like a Duke-of-Hazzard got this chump pushin’ up ‘Daisies’ when I move-up-ladders/
This Jessica Simpson ass bitch gettin’ welcomed to ‘Knox-ville’ his venom’s not-ill cuz I chew-up-rappers//

nice idea thru this, you kept to it pretty well

It’s like I’m play-in’-the-lute I got this rap cobra in a trance now I got his ass trans-fixed/
I’m mak-in’-the-news my style like praying man-tis these repeated fast-hits leavin’ him wit sets of fat-lips//

nice personal at the start, and nice follow up punch, rhyme is a bit off tho

I’m com-in’ after this snake-in-the-grass with the full intentions of shank-in’-his-ass/
Place-this-bitch-last like a sud-den tra-gic accident the an-tics of round 2 got his game-whip-lashed//

alright bar here, nothing special

It makes me ev-il that I wanna yank his fangs-out and in-ject them up into his pee-hole/
In-fect his House-of-Pain my amounts-of-game got him doused-in-flames like played-out DJ leth-al//

decent bar, again lackin a bit in wp

You out of place here like a perv mackin’ to tha dead bitches sayin’ “Kiss-me-lov-er”/
I’m drop-pin’ this-bitch-kid this sick-mis-fit I got him locked-in a coff-in on ‘Six-feet-Und-er’//

the six feet idea is kinda played, even on the tv show, but its not too bad here, the rest is ok, needs some work man

Not ex-pect-in’ this brilliant display of test-weap-ons on vets yo my style’s-a-may-ham/
I’ll tell-this el-vis I hurt-mus-cles and murk-hus-tles to keep this Kurt-Russ-ell 3000 miles-from-grace-land//

decent bar right here, just not of ven's quality

I’m fun-ny cuz I’ve cho-sen-to-stay-high you lamer than six chicks into tot-in’-a-gay-guy/
But these last luc-ky 7 bars make me just like his avatar I got his ass roll-in’-a-snake-eyes//

nice personal on the dice idea

so..

Flow: Tie
Punches: Ven
Personals: Antic
Creativity: Ven
Rhyme:Ven

Vote: Venomous

[BigT]

Flow: Ven
Punches: Ven
Personals: Antic
Creativity: Ven
Rhyme: Ven
Enjoyment: Ven

Vote: Venomous

[The Next Kanye West]

ILL BATTLE!

Flow: Antic...like his flow a TINY bit better

Punches: Ven

Personals: Antic

Creativity: Ven

Rhyme:Ven

Vote: Venomous

[Antic]

well, atleast I went down in a blaze of glory...thanks fo' that battle, thanks to tha voterz..

One.

[Venomous]

No doubt man props on ya drop homie.

V

[-Green Machine-]

VENOMOUS WINS 3-0 KO

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