a poem i think

[scrapa]

step into my mind where time doesn't exist
warning signs where passing's hard to resist
step through the mist
out into the depth of all darkness
where evil thoughts lie in all there harshness
i must harness
the power of wisdom
simple know how to make my mind my kingdom
look in to other peoples minds and whats going on in them
are there complex thoughts the some as mine
or is it filled with empty thought wasting space and time
im on a mental journey and i've just started the climb


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[PLAYBOYBLAZE]

i like that....lil short....but still it was good....I felt the mental journey at the end....keep it up

[lower_case]

wasnt the greatest, wasnt the worst though.. multi's and shit were in there, just better structuring, shit'll be pretty decient

[troublemaker42069]

that was good and i really liked it nd everything. i think it was the perfict length and everything.
kepp up the good work adn stay active and keep writing.

peace out

[LyricalIllusion]

nice I really got in2 it
keep it up

[free2rhyme]

it wuz tight... but u could of use a lil more vocab in there but overall i felt it n liked it

[DatNutyNut]

nice short one u got there,really liked it cuz the meths but as free2rhyme said a lil' mo' vocab..but still nice one

PEACE