In My Mind

[FlawlesS]

"In My Mind"

in my mind im known to be explicit and raw
something like me only comes once in a lifetime
somewhat like the existence of all
my mind is filled with resistance and brawn
the 2 sides of my brain communicate in the form of whispers and calls
i wanna let lose but i feel barred in prisons
LET ME FREE it screams and i try to listen
the bars get tighter and it feels like hell
and i smoke the marijuana to destroy the cells
i cant decide why i smoke lye then try to fly
but i get the urge when the two hemispheres collide
east and west, and i release the stress
just getting myself closer to meet my death

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http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=2638
http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=2635

[Rocco Malice]

Short, fairly simple but sweet and with meaning. I like it.

[FlawlesS]

thanx roc...
more feedback please..

[Expo]

this was cool, deep . . lol . . length dont really matter in a poem unless you have somethin specific in mind, so yours is chill . . liked the use of multis, good vocab . . again, ya format is weird to me, but its ya style . . i see it as a verse to a song or somethin though . . keep doin ya thing . .


Peace

[Divine Write]

http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=2261

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[DeadlyAssassin]

Nice shit Flaw, I likes

[PLAYBOYBLAZE]

you threw some deep words there....I liked that '2 sides of my brain communicate in the form of whispers and calls '..........I had something similiar in mind....like 'the left and right sides of my brain are having a pow wow'......tight shit flawless as usual......