ORIGINAL POEMS OF THE MONTH

[Divine Write]

these poems where chosen by Divine Write, the previous moderator, for being the poem of the month...

[Divine Write]

POEM OF THE MONTH
SEPTEMBER 2003

FLAWLESS

THE INTRODUCTION

this is my life which has been known as a struggle
its been shattered before, and popped like a bubble
i cant hold on to anything, i got these balls that i fumble
ive been constructed and demolished--crumbled into rubble
its hard to hold on..so i picked up the pen and started writin these songs
its so hard to hold on..since the age of 8 my pops has been gone
its so hard to hold on..ive felt like i dont even want to go on
i dont even want to hold on...
ive been addicted to bud, and it has just been fuckin me up
cause now, more than ever im the farthest away from the woman i love
and ive been hassled for what ive done, and what i havent
but its too late--whats been done has been established
and what is going to be done is for me to manage
just thinkin of the situation causes the panic
im not a star gazer and i have no idea what future will hold
ive gone from the new to the old, and from the sewer to gold
but i do kno one thing ive always been-and that is tru and thus bold
so lets see jus where i will go.........

LINK HERE
http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=2614

[FlawlesS]

goodlookin out divine
i appreciate it

peace

[Rocco Malice]

Yeah that was a nice poem i gave my feed back for that already. It deserves poem of the month. :D

[PLAYBOYBLAZE]

yo flaw that poem definitely was the shizzi....you put those linez together excellent......I want to hear another

[troublemaker42069]

that was good and i liked it. it had a lot of emotion in it and i enjoid reading it.
keep up the good work and kepp writing

[Divine Write]

POEM OF THE MONTH
OCTOBER 2003

PLAYBOYBLAZE

AUTUMN EXCHANGE

As fall rolls upon us, trees attempt to
persuade the soil to accept the dried
leaves that soon will faint during the
seasonal change. As they perform their
final slow dance to the ground, the new
fertilizer generates a body heap that
disguises the true surface. Over time, the
foliage sinks and begins to mask the grade
it has positioned itself upon. Decaying
life becomes food for the surrounding
yearlings that received their life in a
similar fashion. A silent relief encompasses
the trees enabling them to relax knowing
they have let go with no need to look back.
The attire they once wore diminishes
equivalent to an acquired outfit going out
of style. After a while the trees begin to dress
in completely new apparel. The recent changes
finally finish depicting a modified forest
of refreshing variety.


LINK HERE
http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=3149

[PLAYBOYBLAZE]

Good looking out Devine....I thought I would write about a different subject than the norm. Thanks for the recognition. 8)