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PLAYBOYBLAZE
09-12-2003, 01:01 AM
everyday with you has always been a virtue,
commence to take me out if i attempt to hurt you,
take my car take my jeep take all my toys,
if i keep acting a creep take everything you need,
so you can finally sleep,
dont give me any breaks,
dont let me make mistakes,
i dont want you to leave because of something i create,
understand baby i want to be your soul-mate,
and tie the knot give you that rock,
take you away from the world we can live on a yacht,
we can sail the sea's just please dont leave,
give me one more chance and you soon will see,
that i've changed, ive done it, i'll present what you've wanted,
i'll quit all those stunts ill give you exactly what you want,
i promise you now that this is not a front,
as it currently stands, baby, im a new man,
ill take you around the world so we can visit every land,
we can see all the sights, we just might,
end up in the bahama's on the beach late at night,
and hit the highest hieghts, baby, does that sound alright?

it just so happens my blood boils for your perfume,
engulfed with your smell is how i spend my afternoons,
wondering when i can finally get close,
the love thats built up is what i want to expose,
because im drowning, i cant breath, i need a release,
just put me in the same room so it can slowly decrease,
and it can come to an ease, just do this one thing please,
i cant present you with the list when every line is a tease,
because the list is long while i've longed for you so,
everyday that goes by the list continues to grow,
just give me one opportunity to put on a show,
just one shot baby, i know i know...

i got you roses and im bringing them by,
just do me one favor and please dont mention that guy,
i know its hard to let go but i will do my best,
to keep you occupied and take him right off your chest,
i know i make it sound easy and youre trying to change,
you two were once really tight now you cant blow out the flame,
when you go to sleep at night youre use to giving him a kiss,
now you have accept that he'll cease to exist,
but i got you, thats right, im not going to leave you,
the things that i say i promise ill do,
he never was there, he's never been by your side,
unlike him i will cause i got nothing to hide,
i love your cute smile and how you always act shy,
so please put the roses in water and forget that other guy....


-peace

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Rocco Malice
09-12-2003, 06:56 AM
That was beautiful man, i think i got tears in my eyes...........


Nah seriously you should get sum shit published cos you got skills, that was deep like a nice story of emotions and feelings. :D

Thats gotta win nxt poem of the month.

FlawlesS
09-12-2003, 08:15 AM
forreal dog...that shit was deep and dope...
an array of different emotions...very nice piece
keep it up
peace