Pain

[FlawlesS]

Pain

what is pain? and why is it here? is it complying with fear?
does it originate from the devil, when he whispers inside of your ear?
does it have anything to do with hate, and does it imply that its near?
From my point of view, i'll try to explain it here
Pain is losing a loved one,
being with your best friend, and becoming confused to trust one
Pain is getting hit by a man
feeling like the world is against u, cause everyone sits there like fans
Pain is that feeling of hate u get
when u do something u kno u shouldnt've, and u go back trying to retrace your steps
Pain is not being loved
and when u scream at the top of your lungs
and noone even stops for you cause..
everyone is into their own drama and pain
and u feel pissed, and u find out everyones drama's the same
and everyone wants to vent their drama in vain
'this, that and the other thing' complaining that their drama's insane
u hear everything and its all so demeaning
im shouting and shouting and my core is steaming
but noone hears me!..then i look around for the meanings
and discover that everyone else..is also screaming......
dam

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[1-G_MC]

yo...this was a hot peace!!!....I really felt this.....

[PLAYBOYBLAZE]

I like that flow about 'pain'.....you pieced it together nicely.....I thought the ending was exceptionally well written when you say you look around and everyone else is screaming....way to finalize that flawless keep up the good work.....

[FlawlesS]

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[Expo]

nice flaw . . . i liked how you had a subject and were able to dig deeper into it, by giving different kinds of views on the subject . . . over all a good piece . . props . .


Peace

[FlawlesS]

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[Lyricaly Inclined]

this was an ok piece.......alot more could have been done with this.....all it all i guess it was cool....work on ur multi usage and wordplay