Excrutiating

[PLAYBOYBLAZE]

Walk the road; burning bushes burn of coal,
red sands, can't you see? The
appetite for fire in the land, I can, I see,
even though beads of pain slide
from my hair into my eyes and cries of
anguish burns my soul inside I still see but
I don't know why, why the pain is so severe
or why it rings so loud inside my
ears, Stop! Go! Go ahead I can't stop it
anyway the burning pain feeding then
drains making me insane as it gets hotter
and hotter day after day the pain the
same pain I still feel I still see relative
to negativity the pain in front of me.

[FlawlesS]

good shit dog....maybe its just me, but i feel like maybe my Pain poem..sort of 'inspired' u to write this...u kno what im sayin...but i definetly felt it...keep doin ya thing...

peace

[PLAYBOYBLAZE]

that was exaclty what happened dog....i think we can feed off of each others inspirations to compile our own visions....i thought yours was tight.....keep em up

[Divine Write]

you know the rules so contact me in some way to let me know you want to edit your post for the links/ I will then unlock it but if I don't see links the next day I will lock it agian/

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