Just Met You

[Lyricaly Inclined]

::Chorus: ---> x2 beat Kick's::
I 'Just Met You'..Already I Feel You Girl/
Me And You Faever'..Toughter,Could Rule The World..--
Ya Special..That's Why Im Writin This About You/
My Pride?Please..Ur What My Bliss Amount To..
Smart,Sweet,Kind..All Those Elements Surround You..
Your My Breath..I Couldnt (::chuckles::) Jus Couldnt Live Witout You..

I Knew That It Would Be From The Start/
Was With U In The Past Life...No 1 Could Keep Us Apart/
Reap What u Start..Jus Lemme Get The Key To Ur Heart..
Girl's Cute..With A Mind So "bright" That She Could See In The Dark..
Met Through Tony And Trees And In Between Was A 'Spark'..--
I Dream Of Ur Thought's~Ones For Me I Wish To Hurry & Grow..
2 See Ur Face Ide Swim Across Sea's That Are 30 Below..Even If During It Snow'd..
Girl U Got My Mind 'Spinnin' So Fast U Bout 2 Make A Bearing Explode..--
Almost As Scarry As Ghost's~U Need Someone 2 Talk 2 Im Here 4 It/
Need Some 1 2 Hold..Baby Im Near For It/
Got U On My Mind All The Time...There Aint No Cure For It...

::Chorus: ---> x2 beat Kick's::
I 'Just Met You'..Already I Feel You Girl/
Me And You Faever'..Toughter,Could Rule The World..--
Ya Special..That's Why Im Writin This About You/
My Pride? Girl Please..Ur What My Bliss Amount To..
Smart,Sweet,Kind..All Those Elements Surround You..
Your My Breath..I Couldnt (::chuckles::) Jus Couldnt Live Witout You..


ehhh its ok

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[Divine Write]

reply to 2 until then it's locked/

http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=2261

[Rocco Malice]

dont take this the wrong way cos its jus my opinon an i aint beefin but...................

It sounds like some b2k stuff, You use the same lines as every one does when talking about a girl ( i love you, me and you together blah blah blah)
Its nice but not original, and its not poetry its just like a R.kelly song or sumting. If you wanna do a poem about girls try uses metaphors that arnt common and try make it seem deeper.

P.s look at the other poems in here especally Playboyblazes, Divines and Flawlesses and see what they are doing.

Just my opinion.

[LyricalIllusion]

rocco malice i agree i couldnt really get in2 it but no beef

[PLAYBOYBLAZE]

i guess i got to jump on the band wagon here....that was more like a song than a poem....gut it and give it another shot...