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Franklin
09-18-2003, 06:44 AM
An innocent child, always smiled never cried,
tried all the time, eyes shined but then they lied,
she was used, abused, touched too rough too much, so confused,
raped, could no longer take-it so escaped just scraped and bruised,
what kind of mind numbin pain could drain,
a kind woman's mind of shame? whos to blame?
oh no,so now drugs rule fucks fule drug the circles cast,
sucks and tugs for cash evil looks so cums splaterin fast,
jerkin the hips, workin her pussy lips to get them fixed quick,
needin a hit of the shit so shes feedin her habit with dick,
smack or crack smacks her back to her lack of fact life, its dark fiction,
addiction's a bitch switchin and diggin a ditch for this black track mission,
bent over back pussy hole is slack living in a lust shack, emptyin sacks,
children wonderin why their sibling's skins white, light brown to black,
theyre beaten and tired, havent eaten and the foods expired,
not sleepin always cryin seein mum's heart and mind are diein,
they call her a working girl, a lady of the night,
is she a dirty pearl coz theres no sight of light in her life?
this girl was bright, what shes lost just doesnt seem right!

Rocco Malice
09-18-2003, 06:50 AM
It was abit explicit for poetry, but it was nice and showed talent i give it about 7 out of ten. And yes she still a hoe lost or not.

Rocco Malice
09-18-2003, 06:52 AM
WAIT actully maybe 8 out of ten or seven and a half....... Yeah seven and a half. Keep writing and improvement will follow.

FlawlesS
09-18-2003, 08:21 AM
i agree with roc, it was very explicit but i liked it...it had feelin and emotion
keep writin

Divine Write
09-19-2003, 06:33 AM
Sorry, reply to 2 until then it's locked

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