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PLAYBOYBLAZE
09-19-2003, 08:32 AM
Elapse in time, it's a whole new day
yet the stars in the sky still form an array.
The moon alone makes a move for a position
soon the sun encapsulates a whole new rendition.
Disappearing into space, instantly it's been replaced,
has the sun completely dried or will it reappear with grace?
Like it has always done or has it left us in the cold?
Has the planet concluded reaching the limit age of old?
Has time taken its toll? Is the end finally here?
Has god returned to the role of a solar system engineer?
Resolved with response, when light penetrated our eyes,
every day's a new day in each and everyone's lives.

-peace

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FlawlesS
09-19-2003, 12:47 PM
yo son, im givin u mad props on that...it flowed really well in my mind and it seemed like everything just fell into the right spot at the right time, u kno?
keep doin ya thang
peace