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1-G_MC
09-19-2003, 08:04 PM
Poetry-my version of its meaning

Poetry

It discriminates against no one
every culture expresses it originaly
From the haiku to the iambic pentameter of Shakespeare
It's all caused by an abundancy of motives
From expression to self-insuffciency and the list goes on
I do it as a way to retain my thoughts and to understand my surroundings
To be one dimensional is not in my resume
But who endulges in versetility these days anyway
Poetry is seen as a weakness towards masculinity in it's raw form in this age
It makes you wonder what the future holds for the true avid fans of this artform
It may evetually become second rate
But the poets who do it now should enlighten the youths emerging now on this realm of words
That's what I think of when I hear that word
Poetry

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this is my first piece in this forum...feedback please

PLAYBOYBLAZE
09-19-2003, 08:19 PM
nice piece rice....you can write deep.....keep throwin more

1-G_MC
09-19-2003, 08:28 PM
thanx man...more feedback on this........

LyricalIllusion
10-04-2003, 08:19 AM
It aint feedback bt nice work blud keep it up

free2rhyme
10-05-2003, 06:18 PM
I liked it .. alot... i really felt tha last 6 n 5 lines...

young_fresh
12-18-2003, 09:45 PM
Damn young rice that was killer bruh keep it up keep doin yo thang

~Lady N~
12-18-2003, 10:17 PM
u kinna sound like onea my old english teachers the way u wrote that, lol, very intellectual :D . i was feelin it, an interesting way of lookin at things. i liked the concpet of explainin wat poetrys all about, nice job showin love for it. Stay up n Much love