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free2rhyme
10-05-2003, 06:34 PM
this is my first poem i ever posted some pleaz pple give me some feedback.......

if u don’t like watch u see
then get the steppin away from me
if u don’t like watch u hear
then i got no way to make this clear
if u cant handle who i am
no matta watch u say, i will still stand
if u cant handle how i roll
to make me fall, no wind can blow
there aint no waves strong enuff to push me down
and don’t exist no words to make me frown
everywhere i go hateration is found
people try to bring me low till my knees touch the ground
but if sum how i ever do fall
ill bounce right back jus lik a basketball
and if sum how i shall ever cry
Don’t worry cuz i wont kiss the world good bye
ill still be walkin down the street alone
searchin for sum place where i can call home
but like i said - everywhere i go
there will always be sum hate to show

http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=3035

http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?p=19320#19320



holla back ....

free2rhyme
10-06-2003, 07:23 PM
feedback pplz

PLAYBOYBLAZE
10-10-2003, 12:28 AM
yo...not bad for the first.....next one throw a lil more vocab...itll all come together...keep it up....

free2rhyme
10-10-2003, 09:49 AM
aight thnx blaze