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9milli
10-09-2003, 12:21 PM
Bout quarter to three chillin up in the crib wit my girl
phone started ringin calmly got up it was my dog earl
earl - yo milli i'm hurt n in a world of shit it was an organized hit
milli - slow down ur speakin too quick take a breath n tell me all that shit
earl - i was seein this bitch gettin some puss when the door just-bust
earl - this dude looked at me in disgust wit a real mean look-in-his-eye
earl - started screamin "how u be fuckin-my-wife ur gonna fuckin-die"
earl - i said i thought she was single n i ain't seen no ring son
earl- but he still went off the hinge-n-lunged , went for my throat
earl - realizin i was startin to choke i started swingin punches
earl - but it was hopeless the action darkened his senses like night-time
earl - reached out to the side of me n grabbed sumthin from the cabinet at the bedside
earl - a 4 inch letter openin knife so i decide to let that shit slide
earl - strate into the side of his guts he fell n i got the fuck-up
earl - backhand the puss whooped his ass for luck, got dressed n started-to-leave
earl - that dude started-to-breathe n started to look-to-get-up
milli - u must be fed-up told u that ho was a setup
earl - word but this shit still-ain't-over i need help soldier
earl - i'm on the run from this dude n hes like 10 yrs older
earl - wit a crew in his roller n all i gots is this shitty six-shooter
milli - where u at dog i'll be thru in 5 mins wit 3 dudes n 6-rugers
milli - i'll school-those fags not to ever fuck wit u homie
earl - i'm on the corner near the drink store ran by that dude goldie
milli - aight one min *hangs up*, so i phones-me my crew on a conference-call
milli - yo i need to bounce-wit-y'all, flaw n ex meet me round the way
milli - rice we'll pick u up on the way gonna make these fools decay
milli - they'll be runnin like relay i'm gonna reinact D-Day
milli - *hangs up* *rings earl* yo hang in the back of the store
milli - i'm comin wit me plus three n that equals those men dyin by .44
earl - man u be comin raw-n-hardcore i'mmah chill n have some li-quor
milli - aight so its bout 4pm i'll be there in say bout 10
so i jumps in my ride n stars the EN-gine n hit the acceleration
heart exhilirating i drove n picked up my dogs losin my patience
i got to the store bout four fifteen in the back i said are y'all listening
we'll creep up on these fools i heard they askin questions to my peeps
close is how we gotta keep make this hit real sweet leave 'em dead in tha street
no traces for the police so i strapped on my vest n picked up my two desert eags
gave flaw, ex n rice an uzi-each and a teflon vest a-piece
my man earl said thats what he needs so i gave him a deuce to sit in tha-car
so yo this is the plan lets split, the main hit will come from me-n-flaw
rice be round the corner to handle the escapers n u need to blast-em-quick
expo u go to that ho's house n handle-the-biz n off that-bitch
cos we can't have any leaks from anyone but fuck it lets-get-on
n we'll meet back at the-store expo u need the car so homie drop us-off
got there checked the safety's-off and that my weapons cocked
saw these bitches interrogatin so me n flaw kept low n crept along the ave
rice was hidin at the end of the path so me n my started to blast
caught the 1st in the leg and the 2nd in the chest when they pulled from tha-strap
we was blastin-gats when these ignorant bastards started poppin caps
so we ducked behind some garbage cans n continued to spray
after 5 mins of firin 2 of these muthafuckas were as good as in they grave
1 tried to flee and escape but rice was irate and unloaded in his dome
the last of these fags was lyin on the stone clutchin his leg
it was the first one i shot and that fool that tried to choke my man on the bed
without hesistation i squeezed and put that lead in his head until he spilled red
job done so we made our way back and expo was already waitin-there
he killed that bitch on sight and another dude she was fuckin wit-no-care
that other man just wanted the puss wasn't ready to die he didn't prepare
so once again we hopped in the ride and proceeded to my house
so we could chill out, ended up been a smooth job ain't no-one gonna find-out
we then kicked back n smoked a few blunts n crashed out[/u]

PLAYBOYBLAZE
10-09-2003, 02:51 PM
yo, it wusnt but a quarter to nine pacific standard
got a call from 9milli who wuz spittin all hammered
9milli-yo blaze whats today? n tomorrow wuts goin on?
blaze-yo 9 the day's not over better yet the nights young
blaze-check it, will hit the club, act a thug, get hoochie luv
blaze-and yo, i know u got a buzz, but dog, share that bud
9milli-i need to go see my hook up give me bout 10 minutes
blaze-i gotta c-note on that purchase ticket, 2night,~~no-limits~~
9milli-coo, coo i got a story for u, yo im bringin rice flaw n ex
blaze-wuteverscleva bring some cheddar n dont dress all suspect
9milli-haha, i gotchu, ill catch u soon, click...
10 minutes later 9milli shows up with a chronic brick
he steps into my crib followed by three
got ripped quickly now we lookin to party
they told me bout the drama, but i dont know a thang
5 minutes later, my fuckin telephone rang
it wuz endo jay already at the night spot
told us to get down there because tonights hot
they asked who's driving so i took recognition
thats when we all piled into my black expedition
made it hazy conditions as we puff puff give
shit got murky like the ink from a squid
i had one hand on the fatty the other on the tuner
no sooner than 9:30 saw lights from a state trooper
tension filled the air, gats slipped under seats
blood stains on millis shoes being wipped from his feet
Unanimous decision, so i hit the fucking gas
based strickly on the precision of us with our gats
flaw said unlock the back window, i did, he push it open
yall didnt know but in this story flaws a coke pen
he set his product to the side grabbed his tech-9
aimed it at behind and unleashed a grip of crimes
gaurding his company n money the clip kept dumping
i tried to drive and blast my gat but couldnt hit nothing
i passed it to rice, he looked at it, turn and shot
first fuckin bullet hit the passenger cop
but they didnt back off, it was my lucky day
my car wuz still new, no license plates!
it wuz us and them, by now its damn near ten
i looked over at rice, again nigga! again!
ex said fvckit, yo, his gat had infrared-red
looked in my rear view, red dot on drivers head
ex pulled the trigger, hit the driver
watched our worries dart away like a sidewinder
we made it to the club, wat a fucking day
got to the bar with a round of drinks on endo jay

9milli
10-09-2003, 03:34 PM
aight nice shit son lets get some feedback in this muhfucka

1-G_MC
10-09-2003, 03:42 PM
that shit was hot y'all....deep......

Lyricaly Inclined
10-09-2003, 04:10 PM
holy shit...took me ferever to read...nice tho moss def!

9milli
10-09-2003, 06:34 PM
yeah i was like dayum when i saw how long it was but thats tellin a story u can lay a battle down in ten bars but a story gotta be told and have the details n shit but shit takes longer. Thanks for the feedback y'all n lets have some more.

Peace

Endo Jay
10-09-2003, 06:37 PM
I was feelin' that

PLAYBOYBLAZE
10-09-2003, 08:13 PM
gracias homies....that wuz some story tellin she-it right there....tight flow 9......more feedback fellas

free2rhyme
10-10-2003, 09:47 AM
yo milli n blaze dat some hotttt shyt wuz long n it wuz tight, istarted readin it n i couldin stop cuz it caught my eye in i got really into it....n blaze shyt man that story wuz tha shyt like hydro....i gotta go but i'll make one n post it...aight...peace ....

L.E.E
10-10-2003, 09:54 AM
yea dere was some hot shit dere dwag i was likin it all keep it goin

PEACE

EternalUnderdog
10-10-2003, 09:30 PM
Good stuff fellas. I'm feelin' this storytellin' shit man...

-Dope Dago

free2rhyme
10-12-2003, 03:41 PM
I wuz sleepin it wuz bout 3 n tha morning /
Got a call from my home boy Roberto crying/
I said whats wrong homie/
He started talkin too fast sumtin bout his lil bro tony/
Whats wrong homie… they hit him wit a chromie/
They hit him wit a chromie…calm down whodi/
Who hit tony wit a chromie/
A couple of wankstaz who claimed to be gangstaz/
Aight aight…don’t worry every than bout to be tight/
But is tony still alive?/……
Yah he still is but they almost took his life/
Aight let me get my home boyz/
N bring some chromies n toyz/
Go meet me by tha donut store loidz/
Aight I’ll bring tha bulletproof vests/
Good good …tight..we gone put them pussys to rest../
We meet up bout 5 o clocks/
There they go,..there they go…aight get them glocks..
They were juss there chilln wit jimmyz n henny/
Aight we close up to our enemies/
We bust out at least 17 shots off our chromez/
Off to there domez/
We got tha payback/
Now we juss chilln watchin “don’t be a menace” wit pounds of sacks/
N we bustin out ttracks of raps…

aight sumtin little cuz aint got no time but holla back

alphabet
03-07-2004, 08:20 PM
9 milli that story pretty tight must of took u a some time typing,well just wanna say that ur rap was ight.holla back