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PLAYBOYBLAZE
10-10-2003, 12:50 AM
Two hearts, caring daily for one another,
relying on one another, praising one another

Two hearts, gradually becoming isolated, one
will never return, the other could never be
repaired

Two hearts, one leaving without a choice,
one many hearts have loved, but never as
much as the other

Two hearts, one broken, mending not an
option, replacing not an alternative.

Two hearts, filled with sorrow, exchanging
their farewells, saddened by the departure

Two hearts, one day will reunite, emotional
scars will be healed, until then, they will
long for each other

Two hearts

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Cynikal_Gonz
10-17-2003, 10:39 PM
yo that was a very good poem, i liked ya word-play and how u put the stucture 2gether props man

free2rhyme
10-18-2003, 10:24 AM
hey dawg i really liked that poem n my fav. part wus tha last paragraph...n that poem is jus like touchin me cuz it reminds me of my gurl...