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M.E & D.O
10-12-2003, 03:03 PM
Im a son of liberty, freedom of speech i inherited
Since i was born like a family heritage
this is the right that allows me to rip the mics, start up a flow, feel what its like, start strife and beef between us.
we cuss and diss each other, hurt ourselves in the process
one man becomes the victor, the one wit the sinister rhymes
commits crimes in his lines
true definition is only true in its define
defiance to accept your defeat turns into a beat down
when we meet in the streets.
Com-plete ass-whoopin, the cans get recyled
Smashin a glass bottle, fragments in ur pupil.
I cypher words that can no longer be deciphered.
Follow me down this road as my disciple.

LYRICS
10-09-2006, 10:54 AM
good first start 6/10 rhymin can be better
liked ur first rhyme//wanna battle sometime//either email me if u accept or decline

Gemcee
10-09-2006, 11:03 AM
not bad at all--nice to see ya back since your join date.

flow is a little off...some lines are a little stretched but I'm diggin the content and style.

hope to see ya doin more.

YouNgWuN
10-09-2006, 03:30 PM
i liked ya flow nd how u used yo vocab. dat waz tight .. keep dat good shit up aiight ma nukka ~WuN~