View Full Version : PlayboyBlaze V Lyrical Illusion = Blaze Wins
9milli
10-17-2003, 03:20 PM
blaze drops first time to check in
for rules and that sorta crap see the sticky's
LI just drop against Playboy now since hes done his side
PLAYBOYBLAZE
10-17-2003, 08:20 PM
chickiddy check
Divine Write
10-18-2003, 12:35 AM
checking in....let's do this....
PLAYBOYBLAZE
10-19-2003, 07:24 PM
-PAYBACK-
In a small suburb outside of a larger city/ the outcome of Divines life couldnt get more shitty/
He hung with the popular crowd/ played sports/ made his family proud/ to allow full support/
Football player, 12th grade star vet/ in the evenings he stocked groceries at the local market/
Was an ace with his grades/ even the teachers pet/ lead a celibate life no need for safe sex/
Whats next?/ let me tell you/ spell out the whole night/ homecoming football game and
his teams ready to fight/ But they held their guns tight until last play/ final minute/
tie score/ their ball/ the QB was going to send it!/ Divines the go to receiver/
some say hes the best/ his minds eye drawing designs counting off exact footsteps/
The ball went into play/ Divine ran a bootleg/ repeatedly praying against making any mistakes/
Low and behold/ Divines shoe was untied/ stepped on his own lace and hit the ground into a slide/
He watched the ball pass by; the air escaped the audience/ not long after silence lost its ambiance/
Brawls began to sprout between rivaling parents/ hostility that rang out at Divine became apparent/
As he left the field/ comments lashed out/ he felt assed out got to his house and crashed out/
The dreams were even worse/ sweat turned into blood/ replays of missing the pass marching thru mud/
A few days passed by/ he witnessed the towns disapproval/ every place he went citizens asked for his removal/
He kept to himself/ how his life has changed/ pressures from the school and part time job drove him insane/
At school he was treated as an outcast/new clown in class/the town trash, his level of importance? Down to last/
His friends acted different/ in the hallways he got elbowed/ they would always say -u should have worn Velcro-/
But Divine said -hell no, I cant take this no more!-/ later that evening he devised a plan working at the store/
Payback time/ wondering what he would do/ pacing back and forth surrounded by canned goods n food/
Amused with the palette of -brown sugar- to hit the shelf/ in football he wore that nickname but now he wears -welts-/
Plagued with anger/ the answer finally hit/ he decided the unimaginable is how he will attempt to play this/
He went over to the brown sugar bags/ opened each one care-full-y/ got so good started doing it in pairs then threes/
In the janitors closet stood a can of powdered rat poison/ he started filling the bags of sugar with -this- to destroy them/
what looked like saw-dust/caused unexplained deaths every hour/they tried to pin the product/but kept removing the flour!
LyricalIllusion
10-21-2003, 11:49 AM
Check in Ill spit l8er!
LyricalIllusion
10-21-2003, 01:26 PM
Unlucky for you Im the new 'recruit' LETS GO
Ye me and my Mafia coming to get you aiight lets go
BRR BRR BRR BRR 'Telephone rings'
LyricalIllusion:Hello
UNAMED:Ye I heard you clear people?
LyricalIllusion:Ye for the right amount $hitting um up £2,000 killing £!0,000
UNAMED:Okay were can we meet?
LyricalIllusion:Be round at 'Denny's in thirty munites
Payed got the adress all good to go
Walking down the street with my 'AK' finding some cat called PBB going to clear him out of the 'WAY' PBB damn Ive heard of this 'GUY' Ill admit he's got a tight maffia that ain't no 'LIE' but who gives a fvck Ive been paid now he has to 'DIE' I don't care
Rolling out of my limo looking for the 'DUDE' jumped on him when he came out of a club screaming Im sorry to 'INTRUDE~DON'T~MEAN~TO~BE~RUDE' took him round to Denny's so I can finish 'HIM OFF' bang bang my AK blood all over me 'WERE'S MY CLOTH'
Brr brr
UNAMED:HELLO
LyricalIllusion:The deed is done
Unamed:cool cool thanks alot damn feeling sorry for the guy
LyricalIllusion:Yo G The kid is dead accept 'FATE' not like the police is going to be bothered of some maffia nothings at 'STAKE' they ain't got no proof no screams of him on 'TAPE' if you so worried leave the country 'ESCAPE'
Ending:
If I ever got caught was just another murder 'CASE' so I ripped of PBB's 'FACE' so they won't recognize him but Im to fast for the cops my lifes like a 'RACE' my hearts always going 'FAST' but N*ggaz trying to fvck with me they should no they gonna get a 'BLAST'
damn PBB ures woz tight lol
LyricalIllusion
10-21-2003, 01:27 PM
Unlucky for you Im the new 'recruit' LETS GO
Ye me and my Mafia coming to get you aiight lets go
BRR BRR BRR BRR 'Telephone rings'
LyricalIllusion:Hello
UNAMED:Ye I heard you clear people?
LyricalIllusion:Ye for the right amount $hitting um up £2,000 killing £!0,000
UNAMED:Okay were can we meet?
LyricalIllusion:Be round at 'Denny's in thirty munites
Payed got the adress all good to go
Walking down the street with my 'AK' finding some cat called PBB going to clear him out of the 'WAY' PBB damn Ive heard of this 'GUY' Ill admit he's got a tight maffia that ain't no 'LIE' but who gives a fvck Ive been paid now he has to 'DIE' I don't care
Rolling out of my limo looking for the 'DUDE' jumped on him when he came out of a club screaming Im sorry to 'INTRUDE~DON'T~MEAN~TO~BE~RUDE' took him round to Denny's so I can finish 'HIM OFF' bang bang my AK blood all over me 'WERE'S MY CLOTH'
Brr brr
UNAMED:HELLO
LyricalIllusion:The deed is done
Unamed:cool cool thanks alot damn feeling sorry for the guy
LyricalIllusion:Yo G The kid is dead accept 'FATE' not like the police is going to be bothered of some maffia nothings at 'STAKE' they ain't got no proof no screams of him on 'TAPE' if you so worried leave the country 'ESCAPE'
Ending:
If I ever got caught was just another murder 'CASE' so I ripped of PBB's 'FACE' so they won't recognize him but Im to fast for the cops my lifes like a 'RACE' my hearts always going 'FAST' but N*ggaz trying to fvck with me they should no they gonna get a 'BLAST'
damn PBB ures woz tight lol
Creativity: pbb
Plot: pbb
Consistency: LI(only cuz it was so simplistic)
Flow: pbb
Multi's: pbb
VOTE = pbb
PLAYBOYBLAZE
10-22-2003, 09:46 AM
^^uppin 4 votes^^
PLAYBOYBLAZE
10-23-2003, 02:50 PM
pbb 1-0 ^^^uppin 4 votes plz^^^
LyricalIllusion
10-23-2003, 03:38 PM
come on dnt sleep
9milli
10-30-2003, 06:14 PM
1-0 PBB
Blaze takes it