Endo Jay V Sleepy = Sleepy Wins

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Jay drops first time to check in

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[Endo Jay]

check

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come on sleepy u gotta check in man

[Sleepy]

text check....

[Endo Jay]

Aight, aight… I gotta kill the kid with a story??
Dag..lemmy start off like diss

Aight check it – there was this dood named sleepy who was sleepy all the time and in despair…
he was sleepy in the bathroom, sleepy sitting in chairs…
he was sleepy bendin’ over..he was sleepy everywhere!
Dood was even sleepy behind the wheel cuz he’s a dumb mother fucker..
now for a long time his dream job was to be a trucker…
so he worked real hard and studied for hours at end…
his career as a trucker was sky rocketing, who knew what was around the bend?
He dreamt of being the man in the seat of a big rig picking up hitch hikers..
rescuing damsels in distress even tho his friends knew he’d just end up changing diapers…
but little did they know sleepys odd sexual habits..
he tried to conceal them but he just couldn’t have it…
he needed the love of the Ape persuasion.
No longer would he be saticfied with the Chim-porno station…
no no he was a trucker so what did he do?
Went out and bought a monkey, shit – he bought two!
Over the next months he trained em real hard…
the damn monkeys wouldn’t even stray from his yard!
Smack em real hard and they’ll do their thing and give him pleasure…
left one at home and brought one to work, he thought he was very clever!
Driving home through his town he saw a man on the corner who looked oddly familiar..
maybe he’d met him one night playing billiards?
The man stuck his thumb up in the usual hitch hiker manner…
Sleepy could pick him up and feel all the glamour!
Picked the man up, said his name was Steve..
he didn’t think any one would pick him up, he felt very relieved…
Now many would say the man was coming onto sleepy, but who really knows…
I think the dood was gay..fruity - the weird sexuality chose..
Guy was gay as a cucumber from the tips of his toes all the way to his noes..
Sleepy noticed this oddity and figured what the hell!?
I might as well show him my monkey, we’ll have a show and tell!
So he leaned over said yo check this, dawg..
slapped the monkey once and it was all over his nobb.
Monkey did his thing and even cleaned the seat..
Steve looked over and said, goddamn, that’s neat!
Sleepy said yeah man, wanna give it a try, it’s really quite spunky…
steve said yeah man, but don’t hit me as hard as you did that monkey!
So they went at it in the cab of his truck…
and from then on out Sleepys been a gay mother fuck…
side note to the story – sleepy and steve did a whole lot of luvin’…
even after he found out steve was his cuzin…
but damn I guess the story ended up happy…
but dag son, the kids fucked up..ugh, some one slap me…

hah..shit - keystyled too by the way.

[Endo Jay]

^^ Uppin' for Sleepy ^^

And some feed back - First story I wrote fer rapdogs

[Sleepy]

Phone Convo:

Sleep: Yo nigga' where tha fuck is my money muu fucka?
Endo: I told ya ass... I'm all tied up dawg...
Sleep; You told my ass that last week bitch don't act hard all of a sudden cuz you
got a lil money muda fucka..
Endo: Iight sleep, Iight...
Sleep: Yo, Imma come by tommorow at 7 nigga... If you don't have my muda fuckin' money..
"ay pobre sito.." ::CLICK::......


A mistake which I'll never repeat,
gave that nigga an opportunity to make ends meet,
I was chillin' wit tha cru on 25th street when what does a nigga' do..
but come with heat/

I was bustin' a flow about two hoes an I dun even know if I finished the bar before a...
Blow was heard comin' from a piece of shit car
86 taurus, towards-us, Endo just created a crisis
that bitch will meet my fist when I see through this,
leave 'em at tha pits of this abyss.../

Luckily I came out one shot to tha leg...
but instead of turnin' red I was blessed it wasn't my head
yo Grandtheft, load up tha gauges...
n get tha tech.... we gon leave some bruises..
or better yet, let's make him die which ever way he chooses/

I told him specifically at 7 in da' evening,
but he dared cross sleep now "Ay pobrecito" Right up under his cheek he bout ta be bleedin'/

This was the plan, I know where his dad works so I'm finna run up there
pop his old man, Godfather style... ya' sleepin' wit tha fishes
Endo swore he was hard, but he ain't even vicious...
I'm malicious, so much that I didnt settle with his pops,
nope, I got that nigga' locked, Pull up to his spot,
automatic ready for static cocked..../

so now we creep slow, lightly bumpin' "shook-ones p.II" cuz ya' know...
that defined him, shooked nigga'with a grin on his skin, he thought he'd win...
all cozy n warm at his house... I knelt to the ground.. for I was about to sin n there was no way out/

It went... "Dear father, up in heaven forgive my acts which are about to be givin,
this duck was a wack dealer and a wacker story teller,
He's really stupid... so lord, being that I'm smartest...
send him to hell cuz he the type to spit gay when it was a crime related contest"/

I got up to my shoes, wore nothin' but blue just so there was no mistake of who
it was, that splattered his blood-cuz, Sleepy bout to put a bitch to sleep....
Gt said.. "I need a blunt homie"
yea I got you... we bout to smoke a "JAY wit Endo (indo)" now.. uh.. Follow me/

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lol....here's my vote.....



Creativity:both
Plot: Sleep
Consistency:both
Flow: Endo
Multi's:Sleep
Overall:Sleep


both stories were hot...but Sleep's story was more crimal-like and wasn't forced like into being a campfire story....lol....






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Creativity:both
Plot: Sleep
Consistency:both
Flow: sleep
Multi's:Sleep
Overall:Sleep

i felt that sleepys story was more enternaining and like rice said more criminal based. endos was good 2 but sleepys just did it for me

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Sleepy Wins