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Cynikal_Gonz
10-17-2003, 10:45 PM
~Elise~

she walks in a room and im completely *froze~by~her~charmness*,
graceful beauty flows through my soul, like a bird through a sky or a *rose~in~a~garden*
jelous bitches so the *hoes~try~to~start~shit*,
my *heart~beat* is *sparking* from the mellow sound of sweetness like a *harp~string*
independent, in a *bold~manner* matching her gold heart she rules with a *gold~hammer*
her words *blind~my~heart* till I'm in an *eternal~sleep*
I will *climb~afar* just for one moment to *hear~her~speak*shes *free~too* do as she pleases, sweet like honey but as deep as *tree~roots*
easy to *speak~to* makes you look at a window and make you *believe~you* can *leap~through*
Elise...
Elise....

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http://rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?p=20275#20275

http://rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?p=20276#20276

free2rhyme
10-18-2003, 10:20 AM
damn ...i felt ya right ther u had tha meanin in that poem n it reminds me of my gurl damn....peace

Cynikal_Gonz
10-18-2003, 11:56 AM
thanks homie, keepem comm'in

LyricalIllusion
10-18-2003, 12:52 PM
Yo Nice shyt keep it up and F2R fvking hell does a dog remind u of ure girl lol!

free2rhyme
10-18-2003, 01:28 PM
i do knot now cuz im fuckin drunk n idk but fuck it man idk

Cynikal_Gonz
10-18-2003, 02:53 PM
lmao...aight ya'll lets keep this on topic

1-G_MC
10-19-2003, 09:47 PM
nice one dog...good structure.....

PLAYBOYBLAZE
10-19-2003, 11:02 PM
yea, nice structure, i liked the spill keep it up....

young_fresh
12-18-2003, 09:42 PM
that shit was real man, it was deep to i could teel it came down from there
go head and keep doin that man good one