Bottled Up

[Sleepy]

What happens to tears that remain trapped in the lids?
What happens to feelings never relinquished?
Do Dreams have boyency? or do they just sink?
Do You ever sit to think?
Or are you like everyone, on the brink of a risk?
Do you question life?
Do you question death?
Do you find yourself questioning yourself and what's next?
How can you know what the pendulum brings?
How can you change what happened? Why change a thing?
Do you bottle up your ideas or fears ?
Are you afriad to set them free for an audience to see?
Or are you like me? releasing them everytime you write and breathe....?

[PLAYBOYBLAZE]

yo, im like you....really nice poem....i wanna c more

[Sleepy]

Thanks Man. No Doubt I'll be droppin' by more often now...
I have reached an Artistic Plateu... oh.. props on becomin'
Moderater... congrats.

[PLAYBOYBLAZE]

thanx man, but yeah, u got to write more poems here....you probably already know
but poetry is where rap originated from...if u can write poetry....u can write anything.....

-peace

[FlawlesS]

ya..forreal sleep..that shit was mad deep ..official son

[~Lady N~]

DAMN SLEEPY!! i freal loved this poem so so so so so so so so soooooooo much!The endin got me cause writein is my way of lettin it all out. I liked the way u was ryhmein, it kinda reminds me of sumthin i would write myself. I like your vocabulary and how u was reflectin on life. Shit like this makes me try to elevate my poetry. Stay up and post sumthin soon! Much love Sleepy

[Juicy]

I love theis question u asked in your poem sometimes i find myself askin simeler questions... i love this poem i swear i do