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Gopha
05-20-2006, 11:00 AM
chea, 5-6 barz... we'll work out a due date....

SiNiS
05-20-2006, 04:28 PM
koo..

Check

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Gopha
05-20-2006, 05:01 PM
chekk

oh and, how bout blind spitz??? we can send em to tox or suttin...

-payce

SiNiS
05-20-2006, 05:05 PM
Chill by me.. mid week is kool?

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Gopha
05-20-2006, 05:10 PM
yessuh soundz gud....

-payce

PLAYBOYBLAZE
05-22-2006, 09:01 PM
Ill try to remember to come back & vote on this...

~1~

Gopha
05-24-2006, 05:53 AM
i sent mah verse to tox last night sooo idk wutz goin on....

Rocladii
05-24-2006, 03:35 PM
Gopha:

after dis battle you'll see ya best aint even close to mah quick shit
because tha 'GAP' BETWEEN ME AND YOU IZ SO BIG...
itz PUTTIN EVERY OLD NAVY WITHIN 100 MILES OUTTA BUSINESS!
^^LoL....original kinda clever good opener 4/5

dis cocky fuck getz no love, so when i end him, hard...
he'll ASK FOR SUPPORT, but we'll just HEAR A MARK, ECKO...
...like tha GRAFFITTI ARTIST HELD A SEMINAR!!!(echo)
^^LoL u had da humor hold dis liine dowwn 4/5

alwayz bitchin bout votez, why you so gay when you bust frees?
IN HIS BATTLEZ, SiN is like DIRECT EFFECT and MTV NEWZ...
...cuz he NEEDS SWAY-IN TO SUCEED!
^^LMAO jokes wit punches is killin mayne 4/5

kid thinkz he a VET? ppfffttt dis herb is a FAILURE!
cuz honestly dawg, "YOUR BARELY EVEN MEATY-OKUR"...
LIKE IM QUOTING MEHMET'S PERSONAL TRAINER!(mediocre)
^^damn sik wit da play 5/5

SiN will never be a legend like me, so watch him get blazed again...
cuz tha only TIME SiN's STATUS IS IDOL(idle)...
...iz when NO ONE TALKS TO YOU ON A.I.M.!!!
^^damn hot a$$ liine punch nd play jus knocked him da hell out 5/5

fuck ya ripoff holla front wordplay, lately datz all dis f.ag bringz,
cuz you USED TO BE AITE, but now like I FEEL LIKE QUOTING PLAYBOYPLAZE...
...cuz "IM ONLY C n BADTHINGS"(seein bad thingz)!!!!!!!!
^^LMFAO 5/5


SiNiS:

Hall of Famers..? ok, I'm the Greatest and G's Abdual Jabar cuz my Barz KAREEM HIM
Think ya Dreamin? Go Eat Shit then cuz your WASHED UP and 'It Snow Sea Crit' like PINGUINS
^^damn niice start kidd 4.5/5

Fuck your New Shit Stupid! CHIZZLED PUNCHES will ROCK ya FACE till its 'CAVE DEN' like a NEANDERTHALS LIVIN ROOM IS
Summer Nuesence only time Gopha gets SUPPORT FROM FANS! I 'Foil Car-Rear Plans' like a 'ALUMINUM BUMPER BLUEPRINT'
^^aight flow was good punches mediocre...3.5/5

When it COMES TO BATTLES, GOPHA'S NO REAL RAMBO.. TRUTH IS, I ain't Seen 'G ON THE FIELD' Since 'LAMBEAU'
He's the PUNK TYPE, Pay to HUMP RIDE like TRIPS WITH CAMELS; EATS SUNFLOWER SEEDS and SPITS USED AMMO(Shellz)
^^LMAO niice i liike 5/5

Dude's ACCUSED n CHERRISHED but NEW EVIDENCE ABUSED HIS MERRIT! Now a 'PRIDE RIPPIN' will TAKE COURSE
Just 'WITNESS G-TEAR' like 'DEREK MADE COURT'! cuz GOPHA DONT BITE LINES..He 'BARBARO' like the 'RACE HORSE' ***
^^derek jeter part i was feelin race horse kinda ehh 4/5

Watch 'S SCAR GO' like I 'PLATED A SNAIL'... SENT STRAIGHT TO HELL, FROM the TOP, NO NEED DEBATING G FELL
A FORGOTTEN MOD cuz the RAPS BORE US! But GOPHA'S like 'ZACH MORRIS', his 'POPULARITY WAS SAVED BY THE BEL'
^^DAMNNNNN kidd 5/5

AGAINST ME you WONT 'GRIND IT OUT' like 'TEETH IN A FEINS MOUTH'! So 'FUCK AROUND?-AND BEFF WILL FOLLOW IT' like 'SEX IN A STEAK HOUSE'
BOSTON ARTIST??? Nothin BUTT MUSICAL FRUITS from BEAN TOWN! G Gets 'CRACK-IN-APART-MENS' but neva been 'COMPLEX IN A BREAKDOWN'
^^DAMNNNN niice finish kidd 5/5

GOPHA---27/30

SINIS---27/30

vote---TIE

Damn i re-read these battles and judge the lines nd trust me i came out wit da same score without changing a thing thats mah tru feelings toward dis battle....take it or leave it kidz.

BOTH VERSES WERE TIGHT GOPHA I WAS KINDA SCARED READIN THAT OTHA BATTLE BUT BABII U STILL GOT IT...SIN U SURPRISED ME

Gopha
05-25-2006, 07:01 PM
bump nasty...

and dis should definently be moved up the RD3 level or w/e

KMA
05-26-2006, 03:21 PM
Gopha

after dis battle you'll see ya best aint even close to mah quick shit
because tha 'GAP' BETWEEN ME AND YOU IZ SO BIG...
itz PUTTIN EVERY OLD NAVY WITHIN 100 MILES OUTTA BUSINESS!
Damn. Clever as Hell. Took me a minute to get it, but wow. Good opener.

dis cocky fuck getz no love, so when i end him, hard...
he'll ASK FOR SUPPORT, but we'll just HEAR A MARK, ECKO...
...like tha GRAFFITTI ARTIST HELD A SEMINAR!!!(echo)
Damn again. Sick bar, clever rhymes and ish. Kudos, Gopha.

alwayz bitchin bout votez, why you so gay when you bust frees?
IN HIS BATTLEZ, SiN is like DIRECT EFFECT and MTV NEWZ...
...cuz he NEEDS SWAY-IN TO SUCEED!
Haha.... comedy. Good bar.

kid thinkz he a VET? ppfffttt dis herb is a FAILURE!
cuz honestly dawg, "YOUR BARELY EVEN MEATY-OKUR"...
LIKE IM QUOTING MEHMET'S PERSONAL TRAINER!(mediocre)
Wowza.

SiN will never be a legend like me, so watch him get blazed again...
cuz tha only TIME SiN's STATUS IS IDOL(idle)...
...iz when NO ONE TALKS TO YOU ON A.I.M.!!!
Kind of an old concept methinks. But you pull it off pretty cleanly.

fuck ya ripoff holla front wordplay, lately datz all dis f.ag bringz,
cuz you USED TO BE AITE, but now like I FEEL LIKE QUOTING PLAYBOYPLAZE...
...cuz "IM ONLY C n BADTHINGS"(seein bad thingz)!!!!!!!!
Sweet finisher. Killer wordplay, as seems to be attributed to damn near every bar in this verse.

SiNiS

Hall of Famers..? ok, I'm the Greatest and G's Abdual Jabar cuz my Barz KAREEM HIM
Think ya Dreamin? Go Eat Shit then cuz your WASHED UP and 'It Snow Sea Crit' like PINGUINS
Woah. That was certainly ill. Chill fa'real with that crazy wordplay.

Fuck your New Shit Stupid! CHIZZLED PUNCHES will ROCK ya FACE till its 'CAVE DEN' like a NEANDERTHALS LIVIN ROOM IS
Summer Nuesence only time Gopha gets SUPPORT FROM FANS! I 'Foil Car-Rear Plans' like a 'ALUMINUM BUMPER BLUEPRINT'
Woulda been higher but I suspect you got the support from fans thing from Serius Jones in Fight Klub. I'm not trying to offend, that's just what it seems like to me. If it wasn't, my sincerest apologies. Other than that, ill ass bar.

When it COMES TO BATTLES, GOPHA'S NO REAL RAMBO.. TRUTH IS, I ain't Seen 'G ON THE FIELD' Since 'LAMBEAU'
He's the PUNK TYPE, Pay to HUMP RIDE like TRIPS WITH CAMELS; EATS SUNFLOWER SEEDS and SPITS USED AMMO(Shellz)
Ehhh, complex, but not a very hard hitting punch, I felt. I don't think there's some hidden meaning I'm missing here, but I could be mistaken. Either way, votes can't be changed if I recall.

Dude's ACCUSED n CHERRISHED but NEW EVIDENCE ABUSED HIS MERRIT! Now a 'PRIDE RIPPIN' will TAKE COURSE
Just 'WITNESS G-TEAR' like 'DEREK MADE COURT'! cuz GOPHA DONT BITE LINES..He 'BARBARO' like the 'RACE HORSE'
Solid bar, but forced wordplay.

Watch 'S SCAR GO' like I 'PLATED A SNAIL'... SENT STRAIGHT TO HELL, FROM the TOP, NO NEED DEBATING G FELL
A FORGOTTEN MOD cuz the RAPS BORE US! But GOPHA'S like 'ZACH MORRIS', his 'POPULARITY WAS SAVED BY THE BEL'
Damn. BEL punch.... sick.

AGAINST ME you WONT 'GRIND IT OUT' like 'TEETH IN A FEINS MOUTH'! So 'FUCK AROUND?-AND BEFF WILL FOLLOW IT' like 'SEX IN A STEAK HOUSE'
BOSTON ARTIST??? Nothin BUTT MUSICAL FRUITS from BEAN TOWN! G Gets 'CRACK-IN-APART-MENS' but neva been 'COMPLEX IN A BREAKDOWN'
Pretty good bar, but you should have picked a different closer.

Flow:SiN... easy. I dunno, G's bars just seemd kinda choppy on the flowage.
Personals:Hard to call it. I'll have to say tie. Too many.
Punches:Another tie.
Multis:SiNiS
Creativity:Ugh, another tie. This battle makes my brain hurt.

Overall vote: I gotta call it a tie. Sorry, but there's just too much good ish in this battle from both sides for me to select a clear cut winner.

SiNiS
05-29-2006, 06:06 PM
This needs To get Votes..



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kingbrown
05-30-2006, 02:17 PM
damn....where the voterz at?

if you'll need feed I'll break it down...jus let me know....nice verses...

and you'll had sum money personals up in there too....i hope peeps caught them all..


"swayin to suceed" ...lolz...very clean...

and sin had those subtle disses like "bar borrow" and "used ammo"....

hot ish....i'll edit this with a breakdown if you'll want...

KB

Gopha
05-30-2006, 02:33 PM
^^^if you find sum time to do it dat would be very appreciated... and BTW... if anyone wantz to do a good break down vote on dis battle just leave a link and id be happy to break down ya battle or freestyle or w/e...

2-3 bump

EmceeSmythe
05-30-2006, 05:33 PM
Alright... I saw this yesterday but didn't have time to vote until now... so let's get going... Gopha first.


after dis battle you'll see ya best aint even close to mah quick shit
because tha 'GAP' BETWEEN ME AND YOU IZ SO BIG...
itz PUTTIN EVERY OLD NAVY WITHIN 100 MILES OUTTA BUSINESS!
^^... Alright... original, tight punch, not very complex rhymescheme but that's not exactly your style so I'm not gonna ding ya too much for it... cool so far.

dis cocky fuck getz no love, so when i end him, hard...
he'll ASK FOR SUPPORT, but we'll just HEAR A MARK, ECKO...
...like tha GRAFFITTI ARTIST HELD A SEMINAR!!!(echo)
^^... Mmm... it connects alright but not the hardest wordplay... pretty good though. Same comment on the rhymescheme.

alwayz bitchin bout votez, why you so gay when you bust frees?
IN HIS BATTLEZ, SiN is like DIRECT EFFECT and MTV NEWZ...
...cuz he NEEDS SWAY-IN TO SUCEED!
^^... :lol: :lol: Sick on the personal and wordplay... tight bar overall... rhymescheme is a little better.

kid thinkz he a VET? ppfffttt dis herb is a FAILURE!
cuz honestly dawg, "YOUR BARELY EVEN MEATY-OKUR"...
LIKE IM QUOTING MEHMET'S PERSONAL TRAINER!(mediocre)
^^... Alright, I see what you did with this but it's kind of... forced, ya dig? It was clean but not that tight of a wordplay to start with... rhymescheme is a little better here too.

SiN will never be a legend like me, so watch him get blazed again...
cuz tha only TIME SiN's STATUS IS IDOL(idle)...
...iz when NO ONE TALKS TO YOU ON A.I.M.!!!
^^... Semi-played but alright... not your strongest...

fuck ya ripoff holla front wordplay, lately datz all dis f.ag bringz,
cuz you USED TO BE AITE, but now like I FEEL LIKE QUOTING PLAYBOYPLAZE...
...cuz "IM ONLY C n BADTHINGS"(seein bad thingz)!!!!!!!!
^^... :lol: :lol: I don't know if everybody caught the C being for C Hustle cause I didn't the first time I read it... but that one had my rolling... dope punch and wordplay... clean... rhymescheme was a little better... solid overall.

only vet breakdownz plz, pm me if you dont understand anything...
I don't know whose that was but prolly the worst bar of the battle... I'm disappointed in both of you... nah I'm fuckin with ya... let's move on...

Alright... Sin's up.

Hall of Famers..? ok, I'm the Greatest and G's Abdual Jabar cuz my Barz KAREEM HIM
Think ya Dreamin? Go Eat Shit then cuz your WASHED UP and 'It Snow Sea Crit' like PINGUINS
^^... Hmm... I get it and the it's nice and complex... I liked the first punch better but cool so far.

Fuck your New Shit Stupid! CHIZZLED PUNCHES will ROCK ya FACE till its 'CAVE DEN' like a NEANDERTHALS LIVIN ROOM IS
Summer Nuesence only time Gopha gets SUPPORT FROM FANS! I 'Foil Car-Rear Plans' like a 'ALUMINUM BUMPER BLUEPRINT'
^^... Tight wordplay on the second punch... You're getting all fuckin random with it... nice.

When it COMES TO BATTLES, GOPHA'S NO REAL RAMBO.. TRUTH IS, I ain't Seen 'G ON THE FIELD' Since 'LAMBEAU'
He's the PUNK TYPE, Pay to HUMP RIDE like TRIPS WITH CAMELS; EATS SUNFLOWER SEEDS and SPITS USED AMMO(Shellz)
^^... Well... kind of forced on the first one but the second punch and wordplay were clean... and complex.

Dude's ACCUSED n CHERRISHED but NEW EVIDENCE ABUSED HIS MERRIT! Now a 'PRIDE RIPPIN' will TAKE COURSE
Just 'WITNESS G-TEAR' like 'DEREK MADE COURT'! cuz GOPHA DONT BITE LINES..He 'BARBARO' like the 'RACE HORSE' ***
^^... G-Tear was forced, but the bar-borrow was completely sick... original and clean... NICE bar.

Watch 'S SCAR GO' like I 'PLATED A SNAIL'... SENT STRAIGHT TO HELL, FROM the TOP, NO NEED DEBATING G FELL
A FORGOTTEN MOD cuz the RAPS BORE US! But GOPHA'S like 'ZACH MORRIS', his 'POPULARITY WAS SAVED BY THE BEL'
^^... Nice... not your hardest of the battle but nothing really wrong with it either... nice wordplay on S Scar Go.

AGAINST ME you WONT 'GRIND IT OUT' like 'TEETH IN A FEINS MOUTH'! So 'FUCK AROUND?-AND BEFF WILL FOLLOW IT' like 'SEX IN A STEAK HOUSE'
BOSTON ARTIST??? Nothin BUTT MUSICAL FRUITS from BEAN TOWN! G Gets 'CRACK-IN-APART-MENS' but neva been 'COMPLEX IN A BREAKDOWN'
^^... :lol: Laughing at the musical fruit thing... Nice personal... but I don't think this was that hot overall... once again not your strongest of the battle.

I really don't know which way to go on this... G was more consistent but I felt like Sin had a couple harder punches as well as a couple weaker ones. So it's weird but I think all the punches, wordplays, personals, were about tied... but Sin kind of wrecked Gopha in the flow and rhymescheme categories... so he's got my vote. I guess it was just too even on the punches.

CLOSE-ass battle... and hot from both. SiNiS gets my vote... but I understand how this vote could piss you off in a big battle so I'll understand if it's discounted as well.

SiNiS
05-31-2006, 01:30 PM
It's up to Gopha and SiNiS as to whether or not to accept that vote.. you are suppose to be a member of the forum in order to vote.. not knockin Smythe though cuz I think he's more than capable of droppin a good vote, which is why I'm sayin you two can accept it if you wish.

^^ I have no problem.. its up to G.



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Gopha
05-31-2006, 01:39 PM
^^^lolz course you do...

anywayz, im completely koo wit tha fact he aint in RD3, vote wuz broken down and well explained, and tha fact dat it all came down to a preference of structure iz kinda wack... but owellz, im koo wid it...

2-4 keep tha votez comin

kingbrown
06-05-2006, 02:19 PM
FEED-sikk ish

g-status
after dis battle you'll see ya best aint even close to mah quick shit
because tha 'GAP' BETWEEN ME AND YOU IZ SO BIG...
itz PUTTIN EVERY OLD NAVY WITHIN 100 MILES OUTTA BUSINESS!
coo opener, the punch was very original and came off hard....lolz...old navy outta business...lolz...good ish...i guess a critique would be lack of multies, so its hard to get the flow right, but its a solid bar regardless.
dis cocky fuck getz no love, so when i end him, hard...
he'll ASK FOR SUPPORT, but we'll just HEAR A MARK, ECKO...
...like tha GRAFFITTI ARTIST HELD A SEMINAR!!!(echo)
ha! this was pretty funny mayne...not super hard hitting, but this is a friendly battle so it works pretty well here...creativity def holds this bar together...same ish as on first line with the multies and flow, but it doesn't take away from the bar cuz there isn't any filler phrasing...g style...
alwayz bitchin bout votez, why you so gay when you bust frees?
IN HIS BATTLEZ, SiN is like DIRECT EFFECT and MTV NEWZ...
...cuz he NEEDS SWAY-IN TO SUCEED!
wow....this was well pieced man...very nice...it hits decently as a personal...lolz..the similie is perfect, and the wp hits hard as a punch...same g style flow/multie scheme...
kid thinkz he a VET? ppfffttt dis herb is a FAILURE!
cuz honestly dawg, "YOUR BARELY EVEN MEATY-OKUR"...
LIKE IM QUOTING MEHMET'S PERSONAL TRAINER!(mediocre)
aight...trainer and failure aren't that close...'tame' her or 'blame' nerds is closer to train-er...fail-ure is like 'nail' herbs with 'brail' verbs....when there is only one hard multi to keep the flow together, it needs to be a lil cleaner and complex... 'to succeed, and 'you bust frees'... but newayz...the punch concept is aight...the wp itself was almost more interesting tho than the punch....more of an average bar from you i think...
SiN will never be a legend like me, so watch him get blazed again...
cuz tha only TIME SiN's STATUS IS IDOL(idle)...
...iz when NO ONE TALKS TO YOU ON A.I.M.!!!
def a coo flip, but i feel like i've seen aim plays before...i dunno...legend like me and status is idol is pretty coo setup in concept or the punch too...it was well thought out...but status is idol is kinda forced the way i read it for some reason....someone can be AN idol, or be idolized...i think that's why i didn't catch it at first, but its a small detail..the technique here is off the chain...multi hit much better too...
fuck ya ripoff holla front wordplay, lately datz all dis f.ag bringz,
cuz you USED TO BE AITE, but now like I FEEL LIKE QUOTING PLAYBOYPLAZE...
...cuz "IM ONLY C n BADTHINGS"(seein bad thingz)!!!!!!!!
coo personal attempt...although i am feelin some of the wp ive seen on hf lolz...but its w/e...i wuz feelin it as a setup....but bad things here was only fresh cuz it was flipped against pbb, which could have only been flipped since that whole thing was exposed...not complex tho...no filler or anything....well pieced, but not that deep for a closer...

sinning

Hall of Famers..? ok, I'm the Greatest and G's Abdual Jabar cuz my Barz KAREEM HIM
Think ya Dreamin? Go Eat Shit then cuz your WASHED UP and 'It Snow Sea Crit' like PINGUINS
kareem him is pretty coo, simple but def coo as a punch and for a lil bit of wp too, snow sea crit is very creative...but crit is a lil forced for sea creature or critter or w/e...but to flip it with no secret like that as a punch is pretty impressive...coo opener
Fuck your New Shit Stupid! CHIZZLED PUNCHES will ROCK ya FACE till its 'CAVE DEN' like a NEANDERTHALS LIVIN ROOM IS
Summer Nuesence only time Gopha gets SUPPORT FROM FANS! I 'Foil Car-Rear Plans' like a 'ALUMINUM BUMPER BLUEPRINT'
lolz...cave den...hard hittin wp there...clean and relevant after the first phrase, which was jus aight..seemed placed to start the flow rather than for content cuz the quality of g's new shit isn't really referenced again...but the line hits hard and flows decent regardless...summer nuesence was pretty nice with fans...and foil career plans was sikk...not super direct but the creativity more than held it together...
When it COMES TO BATTLES, GOPHA'S NO REAL RAMBO.. TRUTH IS, I ain't Seen 'G ON THE FIELD' Since 'LAMBEAU'
He's the PUNK TYPE, Pay to HUMP RIDE like TRIPS WITH CAMELS; EATS SUNFLOWER SEEDS and SPITS USED AMMO(Shellz)
this bar was jus solid...meta punch was very clean on the first...subtle like personal...second started out fillerish since it wasn't real relevant to the punchline...but the punch was a well pieced personal as well...subtle again..but nice...
Dude's ACCUSED n CHERRISHED but NEW EVIDENCE ABUSED HIS MERRIT! Now a 'PRIDE RIPPIN' will TAKE COURSE
Just 'WITNESS G-TEAR' like 'DEREK MADE COURT'! cuz GOPHA DONT BITE LINES..He 'BARBARO' like the 'RACE HORSE' ***
first line was all fillerish phrasing....it was very relevant to this bar and the previous line, but i still wanted an actual punch there for some reason....G tear is pretty coo tho...bar borrow...lolz...i didn't even know what the hell that was until i heard he got fucked up on sportcenter the other day...lolz..very creative as a personal diss wit some interesting wp....
Watch 'S SCAR GO' like I 'PLATED A SNAIL'... SENT STRAIGHT TO HELL, FROM the TOP, NO NEED DEBATING G FELL
A FORGOTTEN MOD cuz the RAPS BORE US! But GOPHA'S like 'ZACH MORRIS', his 'POPULARITY WAS SAVED BY THE BEL'
coo word play with escargo, but the second part didn't hold up its creativity...it was like u backed off for the second line or sumthin...i wasn't feelin the second either...this bar jus lacked the creativity of every other bar....saved by the bell is aight as a concept here, but its not fresh and when u read it a few times, it doesn't even hit that hard....not feelin it too much...
AGAINST ME you WONT 'GRIND IT OUT' like 'TEETH IN A FEINS MOUTH'! So 'FUCK AROUND?-AND BEFF WILL FOLLOW IT' like 'SEX IN A STEAK HOUSE'
BOSTON ARTIST??? Nothin BUTT MUSICAL FRUITS from BEAN TOWN! G Gets 'CRACK-IN-APART-MENS' but neva been 'COMPLEX IN A BREAKDOWN'
this bar was ridic....all similies and metaz...no filler at all...every phrase was relevant and decently complex...the first meta was pretty funny as well as hard...and the second was sum simple but clean comedy with musical fruits (what are we 10 yrs old lolz...j/p...it werks here for sure...this a friendly battle)....the second finishes very nice tho as a closer...its like u started out giving him props with crackin apart mens, but then finishes with a pretty sublte personal about a lack of complexity...classy punch...and the wp is ridic...crackin apartments/ complex in a breakdown....very creative...easy to miss too....

coo battle fellaz....impressive ish from both....sin repped with sum off the wall wp flips, and g represented with the comedy meta punches....enjoyable to read for sure....

SiNiS
06-06-2006, 06:22 PM
Thanks for the Feed back Brown. much respect..

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Young Ru
07-18-2006, 10:18 PM
This been open too long

Gopha:
after dis battle you'll see ya best aint even close to mah quick shit
because tha 'GAP' BETWEEN ME AND YOU IZ SO BIG...
itz PUTTIN EVERY OLD NAVY WITHIN 100 MILES OUTTA BUSINESS!
Fire....lol....damn

dis cocky fuck getz no love, so when i end him, hard...
he'll ASK FOR SUPPORT, but we'll just HEAR A MARK, ECKO...
...like tha GRAFFITTI ARTIST HELD A SEMINAR!!!(echo)
Cool bar...it was ok....Wordplay simple but it worked....ya dig?

alwayz bitchin bout votez, why you so gay when you bust frees?
IN HIS BATTLEZ, SiN is like DIRECT EFFECT and MTV NEWZ...
...cuz he NEEDS SWAY-IN TO SUCEED!
Sick personal.....clean...fresh...hot all dat and a bag of chips

kid thinkz he a VET? ppfffttt dis herb is a FAILURE!
cuz honestly dawg, "YOUR BARELY EVEN MEATY-OKUR"...
LIKE IM QUOTING MEHMET'S PERSONAL TRAINER!(mediocre)
Nice lil bar...Cool wordplay...

SiN will never be a legend like me, so watch him get blazed again...
cuz tha only TIME SiN's STATUS IS IDOL(idle)...
...iz when NO ONE TALKS TO YOU ON A.I.M.!!!
Aim....the whole aim thing is type played ya know...the weakest punch in the battle to me

fuck ya ripoff holla front wordplay, lately datz all dis f.ag bringz,
cuz you USED TO BE AITE, but now like I FEEL LIKE QUOTING PLAYBOYPLAZE...
...cuz "IM ONLY C n BADTHINGS"(seein bad thingz)!!!!!!!!
Not the first tyme i seen the bad things shyt....But never this Way so i like it...not played just more taught and creativity placed in it

SiNiS:
Hall of Famers..? ok, I'm the Greatest and G's Abdual Jabar cuz my Barz KAREEM HIM
Think ya Dreamin? Go Eat Shit then cuz your WASHED UP and 'It Snow Sea Crit' like PINGUINS
Nice wordplay...i think it was well placed..

Fuck your New Shit Stupid! CHIZZLED PUNCHES will ROCK ya FACE till its 'CAVE DEN' like a NEANDERTHALS LIVIN ROOM IS
Summer Nuesence only time Gopha gets SUPPORT FROM FANS! I 'Foil Car-Rear Plans' like a 'ALUMINUM BUMPER BLUEPRINT'
both lines were hot and fresh..nuting missing really...

When it COMES TO BATTLES, GOPHA'S NO REAL RAMBO.. TRUTH IS, I ain't Seen 'G ON THE FIELD' Since 'LAMBEAU'
He's the PUNK TYPE, Pay to HUMP RIDE like TRIPS WITH CAMELS; EATS SUNFLOWER SEEDS and SPITS USED AMMO(Shellz)
sick....G on the field....that was sick nice personal....both lines again were heat.. [i]

Dude's ACCUSED n CHERRISHED but NEW EVIDENCE ABUSED HIS MERRIT! Now a 'PRIDE RIPPIN' will TAKE COURSE
Just 'WITNESS G-TEAR' like 'DEREK MADE COURT'! cuz GOPHA DONT BITE LINES..He 'BARBARO' like the 'RACE HORSE' ***
[i]G-tear kinda forced but another peronal....some people say it as G ta....ya dig? the Barbaro punch was hot though

Watch 'S SCAR GO' like I 'PLATED A SNAIL'... SENT STRAIGHT TO HELL, FROM the TOP, NO NEED DEBATING G FELL
A FORGOTTEN MOD cuz the RAPS BORE US! But GOPHA'S like 'ZACH MORRIS', his 'POPULARITY WAS SAVED BY THE BEL'
The whole Saved By The Bell concept was used against me so this is ok....prolly the bar dat really didnt amount to anything as the others...the s scar go...i was liiking that for some reason...cool...woulda been sicker if the last line was different

AGAINST ME you WONT 'GRIND IT OUT' like 'TEETH IN A FEINS MOUTH'! So 'FUCK AROUND?-AND BEFF WILL FOLLOW IT' like 'SEX IN A STEAK HOUSE'
BOSTON ARTIST??? Nothin BUTT MUSICAL FRUITS from BEAN TOWN! G Gets 'CRACK-IN-APART-MENS' but neva been 'COMPLEX IN A BREAKDOWN'
the first line was Ok.. the second line was clean..


Flow: SiNiS.. (I taught he had a sick flow throughout)
Personals: Tie.. (sick personals...Swaying...G on the field..)
Punches: Gopha (I think he took this...Punches just came like that...)
Multis: SiNiS (brought way more then gopha..)
Creativity: Tie (lol....crazy...They did some good thinking)
Overall vote: SiNiS

SiNiS
07-18-2006, 10:26 PM
5 - 2 ... SiNiS

Good Battle Gopha


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