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FlawlesS
10-24-2003, 06:44 AM
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the smoke, alcohol and drugs have conquered my mind
my hands have been dirtied by the drama of crime
due to my actions, i feel weak and helpless at times
i overcome the pain and relenquish with rhymes
went thru denial in a downward spiral
accompanied with awkward smiles
from people who have no idea what theyre talking about...
yet, the speak to me as if they kno what im walking around
what i have and have not seen, or what they have not seen
ask my dreams, to see a vivid picture masked with screens
u wont be able to get past the scene, its a ubiqutous site
walkin farther away from that infinite light,
now, i cannot even get it into my site
im deprived of it, can i still survive in this?
...i cannot even decide...

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kaos
10-24-2003, 04:41 PM
yo dawg, that was sum meaninful shit, i liked it

Endo Jay
10-25-2003, 01:36 PM
I was feelin' ya dawg.. That shit coulda been spit by me sometime in my life...for real, deep..

ill-matix
10-27-2003, 08:15 PM
seemed to me this piece was deep and personal shit....overall this was good and the length was aight....keep droppin....

~Lady N~
10-27-2003, 10:13 PM
I really like this, it showed ur emotions to problems in life, i can relate. Much love to u and i like ur stlye of writin, stay up

Big-D
10-29-2003, 05:37 AM
ask my dreams, to see a vivid picture masked with screens
u wont be able to get past the scene, its a ubiqutous site
walkin farther away from that infinite light,
now, i cannot even get it into my site

Nice Flawless... i see you are holding true to the name.

P.S. I havent forgot about our colab... Just been really occupied with some major things.

young_fresh
12-14-2003, 08:54 PM
Damn bruh that shit was rite i was feelin that