Young...I gotta be.

[Endo Jay]

Young....I gotta be the ghetto's nominee
Lyrics spill properly
Come inta my mind (follow me)
To the dramas in these harmful streets
The feinds honor me
Appartment 303
The start of my sales
The mark of my hell
My fathers betrayel
And niccas say the gutter is swell
Yall must notta been ta a heartless home
A ghetto street some projects or some barrios
Im sorry yo
I wish I had a life like some of yall niggas
And some of yall niggas wanna have lives like broke niggas who hold triggas
Just ta get home quicker
But I couldnt give you my pain im locked in these gate
It's sad and a good thing yall kids can't relate.

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[ill-matix]

this piece was good but the lines good and should have been a little longer....

[~Lady N~]

tha lines aint need to be no longer, dats the way u wrote it, then dats the way its suppose to be. poetry dont need to be any certain way cause it comes from the heart. I liked this from u, the ryhmein was on point and the endin had sum meanin. I understand where you comein from wit this and its filled wit emotion & feelin, which i luv. Stay up and Much luv to you.

[FlawlesS]

feelin it dog, feelin it...
it brings some memories up, u feelme ?
do ya thing, stay up

[LyricalIllusion]

1st thing Ive actually read from you and I liked it you got nice Flow Nice story to it aswell keep it up
BLAH