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EternalUnderdog
10-25-2003, 07:39 PM
Ok fellas, here is our verses:

Kaos:

Playboy Diss

Yall just sum decoys so I'll stay-annoyed wid these "play-boys"
u dawgs could attend a "welfare" "church" and still couldn't "pray-to-be-employed"
first-of-all, play boy u the worse-of-yall, I'll "fill" this kid up with my "flows" then watch him "burst-n-fall"
u "talk" "shit" like u "converse-in-stalls", I'll make all u "pussies" "disappear" like wen "bitches "disperse-in-malls"
u all a "day-of-mistake", I need a "glass eye" to "gaze-at-these-fakes"
if yall lived in "NEW YORK" u still wouldn't be "raise-n-the-stakes"
still think-uz-the-best? My "bars" will take ya to the "brink-of-death"
look how ya fagits are dressed!!! u "bleedin" dawg and that ain't "pink-on-ya-chest"
the "occurrence" of this "battle" is the "event-of-ya-demise"
u couldn't "invest" in a "win" cuz they were all "spent-on-ties"

get "satan" to write a ryhmes cuz u still wont have a "chance-in-hell"
u should watch who u "steppin-to" wen ya ain't even "dance-n-well"
i'll beat ya in the "past", "future", and "PRESENT" cuz u wouldn't be "gifted" if it was "christmas"
so quit tryin to diss-us wen ya "punches" are "weak" and ya always "miss-us"
ya "pre-menstral" cycle during "metapause" is the only time u got "flow"
dawg ur "foundation" wouldn't "florish" if "fertilized" with "miracle-grow"
quit "talkin" bout "chedda" if u've neva "heard-of-cheese"
cuz i "murda" emcees in the "1st", "2nd", and "3rd-degrees"
uz a "56k-modem-rappa" cuz ya "lines-fail-to-connect-quick"
so just cuz u'z a "natural-disaster" dont "mean-ya-wreak-shit"



Flawless Diss

flaw is "swallowed-by-me" more frequently than "extacy"
what did u expect-2-see? u only in the "spot-light" "standin-next-2-me"
rice "beat" yo ass twice and u still call ya self the "undisputed-champ"
so i'll continue to "brand" this bitch with my "flows" like an "un-diluted-stamp"
u trying to "pitch" for ya "team"? i wont "show-u-relief"
i'll keep-it-brief, just know-u-beat, u could "tie down" my "cow" but still woudln't "slow-the-beef"
Im an "analytical-criminal, leavin ya "condition-critical", now ya life "source-is-clinical"
My thought patterns are subliminal, I'll leave ya head "spinnin" cuz my rap "forces-r-centrifugal"
i got experience-wid-gats, ya whole-appearance-is-wack
my punches put ya rib-cage in ya back, to be exact, im talking about clearance-wid-macks

i'll take on "3" emcees steppin-2-me, bitch im a "tripple-threat"
i "surround-g's" to "ripple-sets", and "pound-knees" to "cripple-vets"
i'll hand u a "metal mike" so u can raise it 2 ur wig-and-u-"knock-ya-self-out"
u claim to spit "boulders" at kids-but-u-couldn't-"rock-yung-lout"
stick a flag in "lincolns" "grave" u still ain't "claim-n-fame"
some one "free-this-slave" before i "pop" him like "shampaine"
u must have "sex in circles" the way u "fucken-around"
this bitch is goin "no-where-fast" like plants "stuck-in-the-ground"
ur rhymes are "basic", "face-it", like "kindergartens" "tracin-lines"
kaos "scalpin" ya on "stage" in front of ya fans to "de-face-ya-rhymes"

EU:

Endo Jay

Your name says it all, this is the "End O Jay"/
My lyrics release demons that're usually pent away/
You lost, so I've no reason to be mad at ya/
'Cause you couldn't be above me if you stayed in Canada/
Your lines are weak, you've got a meak technique/
This bitch couldn't "flow smart" if he had a brain leak!/
You'll regret that we met after I spit this set/
Even if you're made by "Chevy" you couldn't be a "vette"/ ((Corvette))
This couldn't "drop bombs" if he was in Palestine/
His chance of a win is like Pittsburgh trading Dallas Hines!/
When I step up, consider your verses flipped/
This kid could be a toy and still not be equipped/
I drop verbal dynamite and the fuse has been lit/
It's like you're stuck in the desert, the way you can't spit/
Comin' at you is easy, you're easily teasible/
Victory for your team isn't lookin' feasible/
I come out with punches, throwin' them and landin'/
After my hits, forget your legs, you won't be standin'/
My last punch at you delivers this knockout/
And dude, about your mouth, you need to take my cock out/

LyricalIllusion diss

You're a true magician, 'cause talent from you's illusion/
Read your own damn lines if you wanna see confusion!/
Why did you even volunteer to drop lines in this bout?/
'Cause the only "droppin" this kid should do is drop out/
No intermission allowed when I apply this submission/
I'm so quick when I spit, that I'll destroy your vision/
No need to humiliate you, you've already done it/
I'm so sick with "tracks" that when I spit I "run" shit/
You couldn't get votes in a population of you/
This kid doesn't know that I'm rockin' stations, it's true/ ((Radio stations))
It's like I've got "verbal swingsets" the way I "play on words"/
You should leave now, 'cause my lines're slayin' nerds/
Your "lines" couldn't hurt me if they were made of "coke"/
Did you ever read your lines? That shit's a joke/
You couldn't "rock shit" if you were "eatin' stones up"/
Forget your kiddy shit, my shows're "seatin' grown-ups"/
This bout is almost over son, no need to fret/
Although it must be hard, 'cause I know you're upset/
I'll use this guy's magic to go get me a beer/
But you're best trick would be if you just disappeared/

Alright fellas, 80 lines against yas. Post your shit up when you get a chance.

-Dope Dago

EternalUnderdog
10-25-2003, 07:41 PM
Oh, and to clear up that Pittsburgh trading Dallas Hines line...

NFL, Pittsburgh Steelers' #1 Wide Receiever is Hines Ward and there are rumors that Dallas offered a trade for him or something like that. Heard it in school.

Peace.

-Dope Dago

LyricalIllusion
10-26-2003, 02:26 PM
Aiight good job but it ain't enough!

Eternal Underdog Diss:


EU Ai'nt you heard Im bad to the BONE youre a pest why don'tyou just leave me 'ALONE' Eiven if it was on 'fire' you could'nt 'heat' up a 'THREAD' getting youre dick rode so much by Kaos why don't you take it to 'BED'//
reading youre rhymes im going to fall 'ASLEEP' gay fvck on me you can try and take a 'LEAP' but you still want to battle me without no 'BEEF'//
Kaos yeah I could'nt picture seeing him leaving youre 'DICK' but when you chat to me on 'aol' you treat him like 'SHIT' Kaos you might think that both of you get 'ALONG' but he says you need to understand that youre 'weak' and he's 'STRONG'//
Check youre profile you ain't lying you are 'PITIFUL~LYRICAL BUM' Ill give you a chance to 'RUN' before you find out me EJ PBB &Flawless 'WON'

aiight theres youre 10 lines hurr's Kaos's

I'll 'BASH YOURE FAKE SHIT' TRASH THIS FAKE BITCH' 'CAUSE LI DON'T PLAY KID' you Acting like you did'nt 'KNOW' I'm smooth with 'FLOW' him and EU gay all you see is them 'BLOW'//
How about after I beat you I keep you as 'PETS' and let you breed and take you to the best 'VET' Eating youre heart out through these ill 'WORDS' him and EU think they both hard smoking 'HERBS'//
You to both Transexuals you ain't really 'GUYS'? well Im going to eat you while you both still 'ALIVE'//
Kaos is truly not ready to deal with these 'LYRICALS' against Flaw that was a multi diss?It never went past 3 'SYLLABLES'
Kaos is a ex 'POLE DANCER' this kids unknown on rap dogs like the cure for 'CANCER'

11 lines 4 u you special dawg lol
BLAH

EternalUnderdog
10-27-2003, 06:51 PM
C'mon fellas, where's the lines?

-Dope Dago

Endo Jay
10-27-2003, 08:41 PM
EU

Aight not to get to violent here but..
ya crew like some asspounders wit a tub-o-vasiline, ya gettin’ nuttin but consistant fistins..
So much so ya punches resemble pistons, rydin’ more dick than exlovers of Richard Nixon..
Just 2 lines in and you got second guessin’s, thinkin’ you shoulda worn protection, when you commenced wit the gay-text..
Cuz now I’m commin’ hard, and you can be damn sure that I’mma “Lay-Text” (latex)
So now after 2 more you know I’m really gonna slam – this…
Fuck your works of art…My rhymes rip ya canvas…
Dawg, I’m commin’ in this hard, wit knives to split ya eyes so you can “FourSee” my victory…
And if these kids couldn’t get that wordplay, Irony don’t mean shit-to-me!
So as you readin’ my lines, you gon be wishin’ you’d rehurst, cuz now you wheelin in reverse…
And sorry for all these typos…but I’m still laughing at your verse…
So after you read these punches, shove em up ya ass, cuz you the “butt of all jokes”
Fuck wasting another punchline on these doods, I’ll kill em wit gimmicks, “th-th-th-that’s all folks!!

Kaos..

Ah, I get to rip you again make you “bow down” like this “Ships Sinking”
Ya flows outcha ass dog, no wonder ya lyrics stinking…
You thought you could beat me this time? The fuck was you thinking?
You’ll loose this, there’s no use.. My lyrics so fast you think it’s random abuse
Don’t take it too hard I’m jus pullin’ ya leg..while you hangin’ on a noose..
All your lines are spat in fear, I’ll make this bully known..
I’m smackin’ ya hard with a fist full of vitamins to make you fully “Groan”
Good thing this is a tag team battle, you’d never Make it on your own!
I’m turnin’ a page on this lyricist..As I rage in this…
I’m too sick for ya whole crew, thank god it aint contagious

FlawlesS
10-27-2003, 10:48 PM
im at school right now..i'll drop a lil later

PLAYBOYBLAZE
10-28-2003, 12:25 AM
KAOS:

okay, i soak kaos with spit n leave em kaotic then 'use your name' n 'pass words' to observe your lyrical vomit/
tax his ass so bad IRS iz gonna audit with 'this site of my spit' it even makes hiz 'lip balm split'/
your bullshit iz atomic thats how this comic blows-loads call it 'no hard feelings' aftershocks explode ur nose-bone/
i neva trust unknown foes i make em decompose when exposed and impact they health when i radiate thru ozones/
break up this bitch then switch A S u K O only time this kid stacks chips with broken legos/
i hit harder than weed or bats from canseco my bumper sticker says yes to drugs, his fo gay-folks with rainbows/
he only sees green when his heads-smashed-in-the-lawn this ffagg teamed up with dope dago to go bed-bath-and-beyond/
ur dressed to impress inna button up shirt thats eighties rayon so ill raise a tight fist n yell stay whack n stay blonde/
i 'carry-on' while i 'take flight' n correspond like great whites u have to tug ur testicules to 'get nuts' n fight with raised mics/
u hang with gangstas to 'try and find the G-Spot', surprise, my uprise overpowers ur degrees with a delivery third reich/

Eternal Underdog:

EU what were you thinking resurrecting the core/
yall couldnt stay together if u were nailed to a board/
the hell with the four now i guess its only two/
after we done with kaos then i guess its only you/
one single mc against the rhymez of four horsemen/
ill advertise u likely to die with one line endorsement/
rebirth of core equals abortions due to TDK law enforcement/
conspiring of fraudulent corrupted cats best prepare for extortion/
ill drop u in a stash of 'x' ta make u feel at 'E's/
then force the core to seperate and flee the country/

FlawlesS
10-28-2003, 06:28 AM
aiight check it out...


cmon kaos, who u tryin to kid...actin like i aint-the-champ//
in clubs i hold weight-in-pants, this dude cant wait-to-dance//
im spittin dirty lyrics like i ate-a-tramp--
im abusin-this-write, anythin u spit is just an illusion-to-fight//
he aint gangsta, only 'keys' he knos about is what he uses-to-write//
im smokin kaos, i'll spark this kids-ass, quick think-fast//
have u heard his audio, only track he knos about is in his hi-school gym-class//
do u notice that light, its comin close..i kno u can see-the-end//
dog, u couldnt be nice wit words even if u tried to be-their-friend//
..and on to EU, i beat-u, ur see-thru, i'll defeat-u, and take down the core just please-dudes//
son, u heard-of-thug, im the definition..stab u in the back when i earn-ya-trust//
i put more detail into my rhymes than a persian-rug//
u and kaos..tryin to hold-ya-own, when u goin against 4 dudes thats cold-with-chrome//
got these f*ggots soundin like me when i get dome..i-moan// haha
yall saved the best-for-last, like when i go doggie style with my girl ima test-that-ass//
fuckin u up on delivery, like i addressed-the-bags//
heed-this-my-friend, i hope u dont believe-in-the-end//
cause my 20 bars wasnt even needed-to-win//

peace

LyricalIllusion
10-28-2003, 11:32 AM
ye tight lines ya'll lets get some votes hurr
BLAH

kaos
10-28-2003, 06:37 PM
VOTES

J-White
10-29-2003, 08:05 PM
aight ill break it down


lines i liked from the core


uz a "56k-modem-rappa" cuz ya "lines-fail-to-connect-quick"
so just cuz u'z a "natural-disaster" dont "mean-ya-wreak-shit"

7 damn n!gga ^^


flaw is "swallowed-by-me" more frequently than "extacy"
what did u expect-2-see? u only in the "spot-light" "standin-next-2-me"


8 1/2 damn dawg u killt it there ^^^

i'll take on "3" emcees steppin-2-me, bitch im a "tripple-threat"
i "surround-g's" to "ripple-sets", and "pound-knees" to "cripple-vets"

7 1/2 damn homie ill


now for the other emcees


im smokin kaos, i'll spark this kids-ass, quick think-fast//
have u heard his audio, only track he knos about is in his hi-school gym-class//
do u notice that light, its comin close..i kno u can see-the-end//
dog, u couldnt be nice wit words even if u tried to be-their-friend//


9 damn flaw u always murk the mic 4real ^^

im abusin-this-write, anythin u spit is just an illusion-to-fight//
he aint gangsta, only 'keys' he knos about is what he uses-to-write//

10 i loved that line 4real flaw got me laughin my ass off ^^^





aight tag teams came real hard ill give u that
Endo jay u need to elevate tho dawg but u have improved alot since u have came here 4real Eu dawg ur always surprising me 4real dawg

my overall vote goes to Flaw , Endo, and all the others on their team

no beef guys just being honest

kaos
10-29-2003, 08:09 PM
j thanks for the vote

1-0 other dudes

LyricalIllusion
10-30-2003, 11:18 AM
aiight uppin

1-G_MC
10-30-2003, 03:22 PM
this shit was tight...basically the whole thing was tight, but the disses that were the best was what I based my vote on.....Flawless handed out some sick punches and on the other side EU and Kaos, even though they were kinda out numbered, handed out some nice punches....it was close but lookin at these verse I'd say that The Makeshift Crew took this one by a little......







>>>1<<<

LyricalIllusion
10-30-2003, 04:02 PM
lol 2-0 and u no it ain't only FLAWLESS IN THIS BATTLE FOR FVCK SAKE

EternalUnderdog
11-02-2003, 10:12 AM
J, Ric, thanks for voting, let's get some more on this, it ain't a whole lot to read if you are literate people, the lack of votes on this site is getting to be a problem...

-Dope Dago

EternalUnderdog
11-05-2003, 08:26 AM
Vote people! Vote for this shit, this was a nice battle, LoL.

-Dope Dago

LyricalIllusion
11-05-2003, 11:05 AM
word
this was a good battle

FlawlesS
11-06-2003, 06:32 AM
HOLLA-FUCKIN-FRONT!!!
VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FlawlesS
11-19-2003, 09:48 PM
^^^^^