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Sleepy
10-27-2003, 10:14 PM
If I ever did meet you, there could be no words said,
Like the days I'd pray to greet you, You'd make me crazy in the head
but instad of telling you how I feel,
I had to put it to verse, just so it's real.

Your beauty is unsurpassed, and your smile unmatched,
way beyond beauty known to existance in the past.
I reminisce visiting you at work,
only to be dismissed by some jerk who would lurk
and try to spit game,
you being the respectful dame, brought shame to his name.

Still... I believed I had a chance,
since you go to my school too,
gather up the courage to ask you to the dance?
but rejection by you would make me more blue
than an old school lil kim hair do.

With your sparkling eyes, you'd break apart cloudy skies,
and allow sunlight into our lives.
Your smile brought blossoming and cause for the group to grow green,
I mean, your laugh alone, can change a moan into a light-tone roam,
kinda like the feeling of coming home, after a long trip gone.

Yet I hardly know her,
yet I hardly see her,
yet I sigh beside her,
Dream to hold her,
hunger to have her,
but i wait outside where...
the weather is cooler....
sitting on the sidewalk counting seconds go by,
I stare up at the night sky...and since your alive
I smile not knowing why, as both of us caress under the moon light.

Sleepy
10-27-2003, 10:18 PM
Corrections

***** Group ----- Ground
*****

~Lady N~
10-27-2003, 10:47 PM
I really liked dis alot, i felt wat u was sayin. I know wat its like to have deep feelins bout somebody even if they aint feel da same, i understand where the poems commin from. Also I liked ur lil line bout Lil Kims hair, i like ur style of poetry. So stay up.Much luv to u

Big-D
10-29-2003, 05:33 AM
I reminisce visiting you at work,
only to be dismissed by some jerk who would lurk
and try to spit game,
you being the respectful dame, brought shame to his name.


Nice lines... Espicially the last one.