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~Lady N~
10-27-2003, 10:30 PM
she used a needle to sow in the seams
hiding her knowledge of a life filled with crack feens
the blood seemed as thick as the tears she drowned herself in
the cries nobody heard when the razor began to hit her skin
her mothers raped body and stab marks across her chest
she never told who did it, she kept her pimp from arrest
the only life she ever knew, one of prostitution
a happy family she saw, it was just a drunken allusion
only memory of her father, is a casket filled with roses
"she's an unfit mother" thats wat the court imposes
she becomes a child nobody wants to foster
people that pretend to care, whom are labeled an imposter
where is god or the angles that are said to be up above
how could they let this happen to a child who never knew love
her broken heart thats left with huge gashes
hopefully she'll see adulthood before her body becomes ashes...



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Sleepy
10-27-2003, 10:56 PM
Yo. Where'd you come from ?!?
That was very deep and thought provoking girl.
You have earned my respect,
it's easy to spot a real poetic mind from the first line,
and you seem to posses a keen understanding of human reaction to certain emotion. I hope to collab with you in the near future.
One Love "un amor", "un amoure"...

Big-D
10-29-2003, 05:30 AM
This is off the hook... For real. Very deep. I definately look forward to seeing more of your work and the possable colab with you and SLEEPY!

Peace

~Lady N~
10-29-2003, 08:24 PM
Thanks ya'll for the feedback, yea a callab wit u sleepy would be nice, i like ur shit
STILL UPPIN

PLAYBOYBLAZE
10-31-2003, 03:00 PM
that piece made poem of the month.

Good Job!

LyricalIllusion
11-01-2003, 04:22 AM
nice shit keep it up