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GrandTheft
10-29-2003, 11:47 AM
iam learning how to write sonnets, and i wrote a love poem to mah girl, but i thought these couplets were like some thing one could use ina rap song...


''your soft warm touch, kept 'grace' in age....
''makes my heart tone's riot, in a simple rage....



i aint gettin soft but what ive found out that females love poetry especially when written for there boyfriends, eyo fellaz poetry is the key to female wonders........lolz.......peace out....iam goin to post up the sonnet i wrote after my girl reads it..........peace out.......and no iam not gettin soft!!!

PLAYBOYBLAZE
10-29-2003, 12:11 PM
u gettin soft up in this mutha??...lol..j/k...yea...like them linez, but
i wunna hear the whole piece...so, post it when u can


-peace

LyricalIllusion
10-29-2003, 12:24 PM
good luck with it lol
BLAH