Illbert Rhymestein~vs~SINIS: SINIS WINS

[Illbert Rhymestein]

is 5 bars fine?

house rules

[SiNiS]

5 Bars?

you Little Coward!

Why Do I waste my Time!


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This my Check!

[Illbert Rhymestein]

....wow 8 it is then...

[Illbert Rhymestein]

Due date....Wednesday..or Friday.....ur choice


g'd luck btw

[SiNiS]

Wendsday at the latest!

and Good Luck illbert,

hope that makes you feel better!

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[SiNiS]

Imma 'Rip this Big Mouth Apart' and I aint 'Shreddin Bass', cuz his Biting is like 'Constapation', that 'shit will Never Pass'
Infact... he couldn't 'Wrap Punches' 'Workin for Everlast', so Hits 'Shatter his Dreams', like Illbert's got a 'Head of Glass'

We Aint Boxing yet but ya gettin Wrecked with a Write, Cuz I'll 'Fuckin Murder ya Ass' like 'Gay Sex with a Knife'
Impressed? nah, I'm surprised this Fake Testin to Fight, cuz this 'Bitch is Out Matched' like 'Date's Dressin Alike'

Lieing Bastard! it's Time to 'Put cha Back in Line' like 'Chiropractors'
Fry your Rap Verse, Punchin till your Skull 'PoPs' like 'Fire Crackers'

Like the News was 'Tom' Delivered, your bout to Get 'Broke Off' in Public I (eye)... and I'm a Solem Promise Giver
Ya Shit is History and when I'm Finished Here you'll Live in 'Missery', at the Bottom of our 'Nations Longest River'
*Tom Brokeoff, news anchor. Missourri River, usa's longest river*

Rats are Biters.. and we know what this 'Vermin-did' like its 'Grapes in Red Wine'
Turn up dead he Faced the best and illbert's 'Late-to-Rest' like 'Missed Bed Timez'
* Fermented, laid to rest *

Compairingly ... Everything you Said is All Obscure...! cuz 'In Likeness of my Brightness' ... 'your just a Ball of Dirt' !
ya Lines never 'Pro-Texted' so Spit ya Bars 'Insured'! I'm no 'Diet Pill' but the first time we Battled I 'Metabolic Cure' *
*Protected, Met a Ball Licker *

Get Scorn and Torn Asunder Buddy... Cretin's get Eaten... just 'Examine this Shit' and Notice ya 'Mudded Huggies'
Bite Ryhmes but cant plunder money? Digest a Guys Flesh n 'Poop-iLL' Behind Me cuz this dudes an 'UnderStudy' *
* Pupil behind Me*

Jokes a Shame, Styles 'Never on Track' like 'Broken Trains'! thats a Sign he's 'Headed to Crash' like 'Smoking Planes'
Pro 'S' Came 'like his crib' 2 leave you with a 'Frozen Frame', cuz like this 'Superman Crush' ya 'Wack Off Lowis Lane' *
* Wack off Flow is Slain *

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[Illbert Rhymestein]

umm ok...


SiNiS...i dont respect u cuz basically...


..Start exceptin the fact...naw forget it u wack..cuz u couldnt 'spit hot' wit a mexican wrap!
but whats sad is, this 'guy co plans' his lines but dude, theres 'no credit for that'!!..
(geico)
..My writtens'? that'll stab this c.unt, face it u wack as fuck and its obvious that my skills u cant match it up!
'claim he does audio, but has nothing to cheuffer it' so hes 'hall n' oates' like band drivers in packaged-trucks!!!..
(show for it;haulin notes)
..'Drop mad keys on u' and dude i dont need stress, my 'displayed you son' so of course he'll be less!
wit keys hes blessed? how 'ratin u is easy',cuz like voice editin for nintendo...obvious ur just a 'D,S'!!..
(diss played you son;De-ess)
...Basically, i'm not a fan guy..so while every1 dickridin u, I'm thinkin ya shit is bland why?
I'll tell u..1)ya shits played 2)recycled..and only way u make a verse 'enter resting' is a comp on stand by!!..

Balls to what? Tea bag in your mouth??

well i would say that this 'Rye-on Some Bull Shit'.. Making a Cow Pie Sandwhich Allready!

:roll:

....speakin of his fake personals and nameplays.....

...Wen droppin,know that i despite lies, i knife lives..and wen it comes 'to ya keys'? u not the 'nice type'!
This guys hype, but i'll 'berry u, so keep that bear in mind' like images of the wildlife!!
...This f.ag hard?..never that, he'll need a better rap...cuz like 'runnin out of supplys' this here is the last straw!
Get clapped raw...this dude homo, so wen bangin, he hates it 'in the ass' like people biased towards nascar!!.
(indy)
...This not a riddle damn, u suck face it..call a dentist, cuz after punchin the shit out of u, u'll need a dental plan!
And when i diss u fam, just know that u not on my level...u can 'weigh in' which'll prove that to me? ur nuttin but a little man!
(wayan)
...Bust at dude, and leave this bitch wetter then pools..and his head?..ha! it'll be redder then food!!
U punch but my block? u'll never get thru, must be an 'c.hink dick suckin contest' cuz I can come half assed' and still 'spit' better then u!!


...mufucka!


VOTE UP!

[SiNiS]

Balls to what? Tea bag in your mouth??
well i would say that this 'Rye-on Some Bull Shit'.. Making a Cow Pie Sandwhich Allready
^^lol, talk about outta context, WoW!
I Should've just quoted from the Pm's you've sent me..lol

Bump for Votes

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[SiNiS]

BUMP

[...yOuNg jU...]

Imma 'Rip this Big Mouth Apart' and I aint 'Shreddin Bass', cuz his Biting is like 'Constapation', that 'shit will Never Pass'
Infact... he couldn't 'Wrap Punches' 'Workin for Everlast', so Hits 'Shatter his Dreams', like Illbert's got a 'Head of Glass'

First line, nice… the constipation lines are played, but the way u flipped it was really cleaver, so u still get points for that… ‘Wrap Punches’ was so ill.. the bar should of ended with that, n it would of made it better… but the head of glass wasn’t all that bad… kinda simple though… still a hard clean bar overall

We Aint Boxing yet but ya gettin Wrecked with a Write, Cuz I'll 'Fuckin Murder ya Ass' like 'Gay Sex with a Knife'
Impressed? nah, I'm surprised this Fake Testin to Fight, cuz this 'Bitch is Out Matched' like 'Date's Dressin Alike'

LMAO… is all I gotta say… beautiful…

Lieing Bastard! it's Time to 'Put cha Back in Line' like 'Chiropractors'
Fry your Rap Verse, Punchin till your Skull 'PoPs' like 'Fire Crackers'

Ehhh… backs n chiropractors has been flipped so many times… but still nice… weak bar overall

Like the News was 'Tom' Delivered, your bout to Get 'Broke Off' in Public I (eye)... and I'm a Solem Promise Giver
Ya Shit is History and when I'm Finished Here you'll Live in 'Missery', at the Bottom of our 'Nations Longest River'
*Tom Brokeoff, news anchor. Missourri River, usa's longest river*

Second line was nice… multies are kinda off…

Rats are Biters.. and we know what this 'Vermin-did' like its 'Grapes in Red Wine'
Turn up dead he Faced the best and illbert's 'Late-to-Rest' like 'Missed Bed Timez'
* Fermented, laid to rest *

Lol @ missed bed timez… this was OK

Compairingly ... Everything you Said is All Obscure...! cuz 'In Likeness of my Brightness' ... 'your just a Ball of Dirt' !
ya Lines never 'Pro-Texted' so Spit ya Bars 'Insured'! I'm no 'Diet Pill' but the first time we Battled I 'Metabolic Cure' *
*Protected, Met a Ball Licker *

Whoa… really creative with the metabolic cure.. multies off again though… but the bar is hard regardless

Get Scorn and Torn Asunder Buddy... Cretin's get Eaten... just 'Examine this Shit' and Notice ya 'Mudded Huggies'
Bite Ryhmes but cant plunder money? Digest a Guys Flesh n 'Poop-iLL' Behind Me cuz this dudes an 'UnderStudy' *
* Pupil behind Me*

Ok.. poopp ill.. funny.. nice

Jokes a Shame, Styles 'Never on Track' like 'Broken Trains'! thats a Sign he's 'Headed to Crash' like 'Smoking Planes'
Pro 'S' Came 'like his crib' 2 leave you with a 'Frozen Frame', cuz like this 'Superman Crush' ya 'Wack Off Lowis Lane' *
* Wack off Flow is Slain *

HOLY SHIT!!!!... FIRE… STRAIGHT PIFF!!!!!





..Start exceptin the fact...naw forget it u wack..cuz u couldnt 'spit hot' wit a mexican wrap!
but whats sad is, this 'guy co plans' his lines but dude, theres 'no credit for that'!!..
(geico)
Loved the flow… Mexican wrap had me laughin… geico.. real creative… nice bar

..My writtens'? that'll stab this c.unt, face it u wack as fuck and its obvious that my skills u cant match it up!
'claim he does audio, but has nothing to cheuffer it' so hes 'hall n' oates' like band drivers in packaged-trucks!!!..
(show for it;haulin notes)
Damn Kid… nice set up… beautiful creative ending, along wit a personal, multies.. and flow…

..'Drop mad keys on u' and dude i dont need stress, my 'displayed you son' so of course he'll be less!
wit keys hes blessed? how 'ratin u is easy',cuz like voice editin for nintendo...obvious ur just a 'D,S'!!..
(diss played you son;De-ess)
Ehhh.. a lil forced? No?

...Basically, i'm not a fan guy..so while every1 dickridin u, I'm thinkin ya shit is bland why?
I'll tell u..1)ya shits played 2)recycled..and only way u make a verse 'enter resting' is a comp on stand by!!..
Lol.. this was OK.. flow a lil off..

...Wen droppin,know that i despite lies, i knife lives..and wen it comes 'to ya keys'? u not the 'nice type'!
This guys hype, but i'll 'berry u, so keep that bear in mind' like images of the wildlife!!

Lol.. funny

...This f.ag hard?..never that, he'll need a better rap...cuz like 'runnin out of supplys' this here is the last straw!
Get clapped raw...this dude homo, so wen bangin, he hates it 'in the ass' like people biased towards nascar!!.
(indy)

Pretty solid.. nothing all that impressive or anything

...This not a riddle damn, u suck face it..call a dentist, cuz after punchin the shit out of u, u'll need a dental plan!
And when i diss u fam, just know that u not on my level...u can 'weigh in' which'll prove that to me? ur nuttin but a little man!
(wayan)

First line was real off… u dnt call a dentist for a dental plan… kinda overboard too on that one… BUT… THAT SECOND LINE WAS BANANAS… GOOD SHIT

...Bust at dude, and leave this bitch wetter then pools..and his head?..ha! it'll be redder then food!!
U punch but my block? u'll never get thru, must be an 'c.hink dick suckin contest' cuz I can come half assed' and still 'spit' better then u!!

No no no… u fucked it up with this ender… should of madfe the weigh-in bar the ender… looks like u ran out of gas at the end… first line was soooo wack… yea, the last line was ok.. but it doesn’t make u say ohhhhhh.. u feel me


Flow… Illbert

Multies… Illbert

Wordplay.. Sinis – Hands Down

Punches.. ughhhhh…. Gotta say Sinis… just cuz they were sooo HARD…

Creativity… Sin

Personals… Ill... sin that poop-ill line was crack... but he did get u on that line Audio u not droppin audio... lol... plus the DS line, which wasn't all that, but it counts

Delivery… Ill

Complexity… Sin

OVERALL-> SINIS



Sin.. no doubt ur #1 on the site right now.. u know i've had respect for u... and ill.. u gotta admit.. sin is on fire right now... one thing though.. Sin i noticed that ur multies aren't on point like that no more.. not that it matters, cuz multies don't really win battles... just makes it flow easier and look prettier lol... but ur context is off the hook.... Ill.. u've elevated mad much... respect to you homie.. u had me laughin there a few times.. NICE BATTLE GUYZ


GeT aT Me!!!

[Illbert Rhymestein]

lolz..0-1...I had personals..but i guess u have to think to get them..:(

[...yOuNg jU...]

mah bad ill.. i didn't mean to say u aint have any...

'claim he does audio, but has nothing to cheuffer it' so hes 'hall n' oates' like band drivers in packaged-trucks!!!..

^^^ that passes as a personal, cuz he told me he does audio too, n i iant seen it...

and then the DS line too.. my fault...

sick shit...

i'll edit my post...

sorry bout that again

[SiNiS]

Thanks for Voting juJu.. you allways a honest cat. and i can elevate more, but i appreciate the props..

and what is it with you kids thinking i dont have audios? you know what, i'll sell you a copy when it's finished for half price, just in spite... other then that, you aint hearing shit but a diss track, maybee..!




1-0 SiNiS


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[Gopha]

SiN

Imma 'Rip this Big Mouth Apart' and I aint 'Shreddin Bass', cuz his Biting is like 'Constapation', that 'shit will Never Pass'
Infact... he couldn't 'Wrap Punches' 'Workin for Everlast', so Hits 'Shatter his Dreams', like Illbert's got a 'Head of Glass'
^^^very solid, nuttin really special tho...

We Aint Boxing yet but ya gettin Wrecked with a Write, Cuz I'll 'Fuckin Murder ya Ass' like 'Gay Sex with a Knife'
Impressed? nah, I'm surprised this Fake Testin to Fight, cuz this 'Bitch is Out Matched' like 'Date's Dressin Alike'
^^^nice punch, complex but not too complex, juss how I like it

Lieing Bastard! it's Time to 'Put cha Back in Line' like 'Chiropractors'
Fry your Rap Verse, Punchin till your Skull 'PoPs' like 'Fire Crackers'
^^^very meh, i mean it wasnt bad in anyway, a clean meta, but no pun, wordplay etc... and in a battle like this it jus felt out of place and fillerish imo

Like the News was 'Tom' Delivered, your bout to Get 'Broke Off' in Public I (eye)... and I'm a Solem Promise Giver
Ya Shit is History and when I'm Finished Here you'll Live in 'Missery', at the Bottom of our 'Nations Longest River'
^^^first line was cool, ive seen missouri/misery before tho, a couple timez, which took away from this a little, flip was raw as hell doe.. gj..


Rats are Biters.. and we know what this 'Vermin-did' like its 'Grapes in Red Wine'
Turn up dead he Faced the best and illbert's 'Late-to-Rest' like 'Missed Bed Timez'
^^first line was coo, second was ok... nm to say here

Compairingly ... Everything you Said is All Obscure...! cuz 'In Likeness of my Brightness' ... 'your just a Ball of Dirt' !
ya Lines never 'Pro-Texted' so Spit ya Bars 'Insured'! I'm no 'Diet Pill' but the first time we Battled I 'Metabolic Cure' *
^^^punch is nice, wordplay is pretty clean, Cure/ker is a tad bit forced, but you pull it off... nice shit

Get Scorn and Torn Asunder Buddy... Cretin's get Eaten... just 'Examine this Shit' and Notice ya 'Mudded Huggies'
Bite Ryhmes but cant plunder money? Digest a Guys Flesh n 'Poop-iLL' Behind Me cuz this dudes an 'UnderStudy' *
^^^punch is solid, but tha wordplay just aint doin it for me.. itz really pronounced Pue'pill, not Poo...

Jokes a Shame, Styles 'Never on Track' like 'Broken Trains'! thats a Sign he's 'Headed to Crash' like 'Smoking Planes'
Pro 'S' Came 'like his crib' 2 leave you with a 'Frozen Frame', cuz like this 'Superman Crush' ya 'Wack Off Lowis Lane' *
^^^this was dope sauce, normally when you get tha complex wordplay your wordin soundz stretched out and wack, but this was very clean... tite shit homie...

Overall: A very a solid verse, Ive certainly seen better from you tho... a couple lines felt sorta fillerish... wordplay sometimez came off a lil forced...

Illbert:

..Start exceptin the fact...naw forget it u wack..cuz u couldnt 'spit hot' wit a mexican wrap!
but whats sad is, this 'guy co plans' his lines but dude, theres 'no credit for that'!!..
^^^lol this was dope, very clean wording.. nice shit

..My writtens'? that'll stab this c.unt, face it u wack as fuck and its obvious that my skills u cant match it up!
'claim he does audio, but has nothing to cheuffer it' so hes 'hall n' oates' like band drivers in packaged-trucks!!!..
^^^ive actually seen chaffuer/show for quite a lot, although admittantley not on this particular website... not a pad flip tho...

..'Drop mad keys on u' and dude i dont need stress, my 'displayed you son' so of course he'll be less!
wit keys hes blessed? how 'ratin u is easy',cuz like voice editin for nintendo...obvious ur just a 'D,S'!!..
^^^ok... punch is sorta weak...

...Basically, i'm not a fan guy..so while every1 dickridin u, I'm thinkin ya shit is bland why?
I'll tell u..1)ya shits played 2)recycled..and only way u make a verse 'enter resting' is a comp on stand by!!..
^^^lol pretty good

...Wen droppin,know that i despite lies, i knife lives..and wen it comes 'to ya keys'? u not the 'nice type'!
This guys hype, but i'll 'berry u, so keep that bear in mind' like images of the wildlife!!
^^^ugh i really didnt like dis holmez... the wording felt very rushed, connection is mad vague and really just doesnt work... an 'image of wildlife' does not connect in anyway what it would mean to 'berry'(as in the fruit) then 'you' followed by what soundz like a quote from a forest safety booklet regarding bears.... it seems like you just took 'bear' and 'berry' connected it to 'wildlife image' and hoped catz wouldnt read into it too hard... you cant just ignore tha other wordz you use in context with 'berry' and 'bear'...also the wordplay on 'bear in mind' doesnt work both ways, yes you can 'keep that bear in mind' when refferring to tha animal, but when you sayin 'bear in mind' as in 'take notice of' it makes no sense when you throw a 'so keep that' infront... you have to make sure both parts of tha wordplay work in tha same context... you musta been rushed wen you made this bar, cuz it really just does not make any sense....

...This f.ag hard?..never that, he'll need a better rap...cuz like 'runnin out of supplys' this here is the last straw!
Get clapped raw...this dude homo, so wen bangin, he hates it 'in the ass' like people biased towards nascar!!.
^^^pretty good...

...This not a riddle damn, u suck face it..call a dentist, cuz after punchin the shit out of u, u'll need a dental plan!
And when i diss u fam, just know that u not on my level...u can 'weigh in' which'll prove that to me? ur nuttin but a little man!
ive done wiegh/way before, but this flip was mad fresh... good shit

...Bust at dude, and leave this bitch wetter then pools..and his head?..ha! it'll be redder then food!!
U punch but my block? u'll never get thru, must be an 'c.hink dick suckin contest' cuz I can come half assed' and still 'spit' better then u!!
^^^pretty weak duke, i mean a spit/blowjob type line? your better then dat dawg... shit was done out in 04..

Overall: You started off strong, and came pretty consistent... but you really fell off at tha end, that wildlife line was just no, and tha closer was a dissapointment... i think you musta got short on time and just rushed ya self at tha end, which is really too bad.... overall a coo verse...

i cant vote due to crew reasons, so i just figured i would drop some feed... dope battle fellaz...

-payce

[Illbert Rhymestein]

crew votes is allowed....

[...yOuNg jU...]

lol.. Sin.. i don't doubt u do audio... it was just funny cuz it's true... like we neva seen it... matta fact i know u do audio... yo u KB n Ven live in Cali right???... i wanna go somewhere but i dunno where.. n i neva been to cali... maybe i can go out there, n kick witcha for a minute

Ill... what Gopha said is tru.. if the closer and the berry line were harder hitting... there is no doubt in my mind that you would of took this battle...

[Illbert Rhymestein]

^^i guess lolz..

no biggie, most know where i battle forreal at..so no worries

good battle


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[kingbrown]

good battle you'll....

Imma 'Rip this Big Mouth Apart' and I aint 'Shreddin Bass', cuz his Biting is like 'Constapation', that 'shit will Never Pass'
Infact... he couldn't 'Wrap Punches' 'Workin for Everlast', so Hits 'Shatter his Dreams', like Illbert's got a 'Head of Glass'
not the freshest similie, but decent personal diss came out of it on first. multis aight i guess...wrap punches was coo-strongest in the bar really....shatter his dreams was basic, but effective enough.
We Aint Boxing yet but ya gettin Wrecked with a Write, Cuz I'll 'Fuckin Murder ya Ass' like 'Gay Sex with a Knife'
Impressed? nah, I'm surprised this Fake Testin to Fight, cuz this 'Bitch is Out Matched' like 'Date's Dressin Alike'
solid bar...agree with G on this one...complex but not crazy...seems like obvious plays but their clean and effective. outmatched is perfect example of that...nice wp there...coo punch...multies are a lil better...
Lieing Bastard! it's Time to 'Put cha Back in Line' like 'Chiropractors'
Fry your Rap Verse, Punchin till your Skull 'PoPs' like 'Fire Crackers'
ok punch on first, but def below par for the rest of the verse-surprised theres no wp...every other line has it and higher complexity level...kinda random bar, ya feel me? it works, but seems outta place...
Like the News was 'Tom' Delivered, your bout to Get 'Broke Off' in Public I (eye)... and I'm a Solem Promise Giver
Ya Shit is History and when I'm Finished Here you'll Live in 'Missery', at the Bottom of our 'Nations Longest River'
*Tom Brokeoff, news anchor. Missourri River, usa's longest river*
broke off/bro cough/Brokeoff- familiar concepts, not bad for setup i guess but coulda been fresher....the second was pretty clean, and i like how it was flipped....no like or as in there....came off a lil stronger as a result...but is the missouri river longer than the mississippi? i just thought of that....lolz...the flip is there regardless tho...
Rats are Biters.. and we know what this 'Vermin-did' like its 'Grapes in Red Wine'
Turn up dead he Faced the best and illbert's 'Late-to-Rest' like 'Missed Bed Timez'
* Fermented, laid to rest *
"like grapes into red wine" may have been a lil cleaner here in terms of wording...but we see the wp...its pretty creative...and second was coo...simple but effective wp...
Compairingly ... Everything you Said is All Obscure...! cuz 'In Likeness of my Brightness' ... 'your just a Ball of Dirt' !
ya Lines never 'Pro-Texted' so Spit ya Bars 'Insured'! I'm no 'Diet Pill' but the first time we Battled I 'Metabolic Cure' *
*Protected, Met a Ball Licker *
lol...at first line...cocky lil bitch...def effective in tone...protected was waay forced tho- u didn't need to have another flip in that line anyway...metabolic cure was complex enough to carry the line...prolly coulda set it up better without protexted. pronounciation is too different from protected....but the last wp is a lot better. its not perfect, but its the type of thing that is so creative and effective as a punch that the syntax or whatever can be overlooked a lil...well qualified too with diet pill...good vocab...
Get Scorn and Torn Asunder Buddy... Cretin's get Eaten... just 'Examine this Shit' and Notice ya 'Mudded Huggies'
Bite Ryhmes but cant plunder money? Digest a Guys Flesh n 'Poop-iLL' Behind Me cuz this dudes an 'UnderStudy' *
* Pupil behind Me*
not feelin the first line really...kinda funny but not real deep or anything....plunder is nice word choice here to setup the next concept, but poop ill is jus aight....the concept and punch is sikk..but the actual wp itself is not that clean...it is pronounced pew-pill....multies on point here tho...
Jokes a Shame, Styles 'Never on Track' like 'Broken Trains'! thats a Sign he's 'Headed to Crash' like 'Smoking Planes'
Pro 'S' Came 'like his crib' 2 leave you with a 'Frozen Frame', cuz like this 'Superman Crush' ya 'Wack Off Lowis Lane' *
* Wack off Flow is Slain *
clean similies on first...all effective and hard content...the second was prolly the hardest of the verse...sikk how u flipped frozen frame with supermans crib and turned it into a punch...consistent and creative theme throughout this bar....and the wp is just crazy....its a sikk punch and off the hook wp....impressive shit mayne...wow...



Ill
..Start exceptin the fact...naw forget it u wack..cuz u couldnt 'spit hot' wit a mexican wrap!
but whats sad is, this 'guy co plans' his lines but dude, theres 'no credit for that'!!..
(geico)
not feelin the fillerish 'naw forget it u wack' part, simple punchline on first. guy co plans pretty creative...not the most direct personal or anything-sin has no rep for collaborating or gettin ideas from other heads...but the wp is coo and i like how u flipped it.
..My writtens'? that'll stab this c.unt, face it u wack as fuck and its obvious that my skills u cant match it up!
'claim he does audio, but has nothing to cheuffer it' so hes 'hall n' oates' like band drivers in packaged-trucks!!!..
(show for it;haulin notes)
first line fillerish...braggy....the wp is pretty sikky on the second tho...as a personal it just misses...cuz anyone who knows sin knows he's at a diff level than anyone on this site with audio and freestyle ability...but technique wise it was nasty...good ish ill...creative plays...
..'Drop mad keys on u' and dude i dont need stress, my 'displayed you son' so of course he'll be less!
wit keys hes blessed? how 'ratin u is easy',cuz like voice editin for nintendo...obvious ur just a 'D,S'!!..
(diss played you son;De-ess)
forced with diss played...it wasn't qualified or flipped too cleanly i thought...DS was aight tho...i may have flipped it a lil diff so that the grade: D concept was clearer, but i still see it....personal points
...Basically, i'm not a fan guy..so while every1 dickridin u, I'm thinkin ya shit is bland why?
I'll tell u..1)ya shits played 2)recycled..and only way u make a verse 'enter resting' is a comp on stand by!!..
decent setup for punch on first...feelin the flow on it...enter/inter is not perfect, but the punch line is clean..not bad...
....speakin of his fake personals and nameplays.....
...Wen droppin,know that i despite lies, i knife lives..and wen it comes 'to ya keys'? u not the 'nice type'!
This guys hype, but i'll 'berry u, so keep that bear in mind' like images of the wildlife!!
wanted a meta or similie on the first line because everything else about it was coo. the wording coulda been better on the second tho...i really like the concept, but the problem is that the conversational phrase is "bear in mind that..", not "keep that bear in mind" - the technique was a lil off here I thought...
...This f.ag hard?..never that, he'll need a better rap...cuz like 'runnin out of supplys' this here is the last straw!
Get clapped raw...this dude homo, so wen bangin, he hates it 'in the ass' like people biased towards nascar!!.
(indy)
supplies wasn't quite descriptive enough for last straw- i don't automatically think of straws when someone says were out of supplies...but it works aight....indy ass is kinda forced tho...hates it indy ass doesn't make too much sense in conversation- the play on words is there..but the punch is kinda weak and seemed forced to make it a play on word...
...This not a riddle damn, u suck face it..call a dentist, cuz after punchin the shit out of u, u'll need a dental plan!
And when i diss u fam, just know that u not on my level...u can 'weigh in' which'll prove that to me? ur nuttin but a little man!
(wayan)
eh...first line kinda generic....dental plans/fuckin up someone's grill...eh...seen fresher disses from you. the wayan flip was aight, but it woulda been cleaner if u took out the "can" before weigh in. so it would be more like "u weigh in/u wayan"...the 'can' threw off the meaning a lil and made it less clean i thought....cuz "can wayan" doesn't make sense, but "u wayan" does both ways a lil better...i dunno...just a suggestion...
...Bust at dude, and leave this bitch wetter then pools..and his head?..ha! it'll be redder then food!!
U punch but my block? u'll never get thru, must be an 'c.hink dick suckin contest' cuz I can come half assed' and still 'spit' better then u!!
food isn't always red....redder than rare beef, redder than tomatoes...but u can't just say food there..its just not descriptive or direct enough...the last line was def not crunk tho...i dunno what happened...especially for a closer....a lil surprising...

Punches: Sin- this was the easiest cat to call...ill fell off too many times....
Flow: Sin- was on point here
Personals: Ill- poop ill was not that good in retrospect...ill had better attempts
Multies: Ill- actually more consistent surprisingly enough...nice job man
WP/Creativity: Sin- wack off flow is slan...that almost enough right there...

my vote= SiNiS

sin edged it with punches and creativity, although there were 3-4 lines that weren't on par with the rest of the verse. Ill def fell off towards the end, and missed with a few wp flips which he needed to match sin's better plays....def a good battle tho- ill u stepped up a decent amount for this one...i think we all just wanted to see u finish it strong..it would put a whole different spin on your verse and its weight....

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[Illbert Rhymestein]

^^its cool..i just had to adjust my style....all good, i now know what i need to do to get votes on here..so yea good battle whats that

0-2?..or 0-3? cuz i'm pretty sure gopha would've voted for u lolz..so yea up to you all

[SiNiS]

Gopha, kingBrown.. thanks for the feedback.. allways count on some honesty when Vets Vote!

no Crew Votes allowed, we didn't state it in the rules... and he didn't vote, gopha just gave good feedback!

so technically 2-0 SiNiS, unless you want to call it offcourse!

2-0 Bump!

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[Illbert Rhymestein]

Think about it...Most of rd3 IS in either 1 crew or the other..ones that actually vote shall i say...Dont feel they'd give iased feedback, but w/e

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[SiNiS]

ok then, so 3-0 battle Closed??? what is it?

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[SiNiS]

BuMP!!!!!

[admin]

Illbert is booted. Sinis wins by default.