:READY FOR VOTES: ToxN vs. baby_uzi

[Young Ru]

5 bars....
You no the rest.....




Chek!

[Young Ru]

Quick Key.....


Lets Get this Popping....



Just Observe the Fake Answer slips accept to battle me you well I ‘create an injury spree’ like I ‘make damage trips’
Stop quit writing ya Eight Stanza Scrips and Give up Rap ya Getting old ‘Toxn Ageing See’ like ‘Waste Management'
Toxin Agency

Quick to jab this bitch and have em mad and shyt so even with a fetish for legs dude ‘Pass shin it’ is when this ‘folk receive love’
I’m Holding the snub and hoping to cut till you leaking through ya computer after sliced and ya ‘Dell Leak Up’ like ‘Grocery Mugs’
Passionate....Deli Cup

About face and Remember these steps cuz coming to me I’ll Exam ya head and give ya ‘brain a quiz’ like being ‘Mentally test’
This aint an ‘unintentional accident’ ya not ‘Coincidentally wrecked’ cuz when I ‘Pop, you luring to demise’ like ‘Celebrity deaths’
Popular inTo Demise

Utilize ya head and listen, so whoever stated you a vet? Was wrong I’ll ‘cut you out that division’ like the ‘Sectors Ripping’
Now the weights on like the pressures pitched in so I’ll Burn ya scripts to leave ya ‘Play boiling’ Like ‘Hugh Hefner Fishing’
Playboy Ling

Trying to ‘edge out bars’ like ya Raps in border but im leaving you going ‘nuts around this mess’ like ‘sack disorders’
In fact watch I’ll ‘send you a hit’ like placing ‘crack in orders’ so now ‘T's in some shit’ like ‘flirtatious scat performers’
Teasin some shyt

[Illbert Rhymestein]

Just Observe the Fake Answer slips accept to battle me you well I ‘create an injury spree’ like I ‘make damage trips’
Stop quit writing ya Eight Stanza Scrips and Give up Rap ya Getting old ‘Toxn Ageing See’ like ‘Waste Management'
^^not feeling the first line..second line is str8 kinda predicted whats coming next though..:(

Quick to jab this bitch and have em mad and shyt so even with a fetish for legs dude ‘Pass shin it’ is when this ‘folk receive love’
I’m Holding the snub and hoping to cut till you leaking through ya computer after sliced and ya ‘Dell Leak Up’ like ‘Grocery Mugs’
^^lolz, i thought the wordplay was forced...on both parts actually.second line was ok even tho i felt u coould've made it hit harder if u were to connect some sort of 'meat' in there to make the deli concept harder, but w/e..
About face and Remember these steps cuz coming to me I’ll Exam ya head and give ya ‘brain a quiz’ like being ‘Mentally test’
This aint an ‘unintentional accident’ ya not ‘Coincidentally wrecked’ cuz when I ‘Pop, you luring to demise’ like ‘Celebrity deaths’
^^lolz, grammar!..u cant be mentally test..lolz, mentally testED, but no biggie...ur mulits are hella off the wordplay is str8 but the ending punch is basic...:(
Utilize ya head and listen, so whoever stated you a vet? Was wrong I’ll ‘cut you out that division’ like the ‘Sectors Ripping’
Now the weights on like the pressures pitched in so I’ll Burn ya scripts to leave ya ‘Play boiling’ Like ‘Hugh Hefner Fishing’
^^first line is played..seoncd line was funny..but i think u should learn to balance ur bars cuz u focus too much on wordplay which is taking away from ur punch..either that or learn to make better connections...but not bad.
Trying to ‘edge out bars’ like ya Raps in border but im leaving you going ‘nuts around this mess’ like ‘sack disorders’
In fact watch I’ll ‘send you a hit’ like placing ‘crack in orders’ so now ‘T's in some shit’ like ‘flirtatious scat performers’
..@the firstline..the whole sack dissorder is forced..no1 actually say sack dissorders....i mean others might like that, but me personally i just think its corny..second line was much better...


ToxN:

Ya weak.. I'll take uzi and snap-his-piece, wanna 'get big asshole'? Go find a f.ag-n-tease
Ya lines been rotten-n-worse, so 'wad-up-ya-verse' and make ya rap-increase! (in crease)
^^simple yet effective..i was feeling it..
Ya shit-getting-older, it's 'perfectly clear' that I'm wiser.. I'm spittin-it-nobler (no blur)
Cuz ya concepts are weak-plays, so ya gonna need-Lays to put a 'chip-on-my-shoulder'!
^^lolz, u know how i feel about the first line but after research its actually good witht eh wordplay..second line is good, but played..:(
I'm attackin-wild, wanna test me but like Martha Stewart you won't pass-the-trial
Straight up hurt-him, I'll make ya say "Cheese!" and start smirkin.. cuz my punches CRACK-A-SMILE!
^^this made me chuckle..but the first line wasnt hard hitting..:(
Ya words don't even-move-me, so you ain't 'fuckin Angel characters' when ya freakin-Lui's-see (lose see)
Ya get ripped-bud cuz ya verse is like the 'strip-club'.. we 'see-n-boo-b's'! (seein boobies!)
^^rofl this made me laugh out loud literally..corny, but hilarious.
My punches knock you out.. and like 'broken watersport boats' I won't leave you awake (a wake)
Ya raps all lies-holmes so like speakin bout rhinestones.. "We know that Ru be fake"!
^^ok namplay kinda basic though..

damn this battle is hard to vote on..because ToxN is at a dsadvantage of hsis style...most of RD prefer Uzi style cuz they think its complex....but i feel his style kinda lets it down due to forced ish...toxn on the other hand is more str8 to the point and simplistic, but it gets teh job done...BUT nothing complext....personally I rather the complext style if done rihgt....but then i love the short style when done to perfection..

flow-ToxN
Punches-ToxN
complexity-uzi...even though most was forced
wordplay-uzi....
Metas-uzi
Humor-ToxN
creativity-ehhh
personals-not really much personals.im dissapointed..theres ALOT of shit to be said about u two lolz..
vocab-uzi
Multies-toxn
Nameplay-tie


Vote- this is a tie...cuz i cant decide....

take it or leave it



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[Young Ru]

ok....itz 1-1

Uppin votes.....and Crew votes are allowed...

[SiNiS]

Dam, hott drops From Both of you.. i will Edit this with a Full Breakdown Vote when i get back! Thank you,

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*edit*
Baby Uzi:

Just Observe the Fake Answer slips accept to battle me you well I ‘create an injury spree’ like I ‘make damage trips’
Stop quit writing ya Eight Stanza Scrips and Give up Rap ya Getting old ‘Toxn Ageing See’ like ‘Waste Management'

The first line was to up and down to follow, no fluid thought to it... Toxn agency was creative tho..

Quick to jab this bitch and have em mad and shyt so even with a fetish for legs dude ‘Pass shin it’ is when this ‘folk receive love’
I’m Holding the snub and hoping to cut till you leaking through ya computer after sliced and ya ‘Dell Leak Up’ like ‘Grocery Mugs’

pass shin it? i get the passion flip, but what is pass shin it? you shouldn't have used Leak twice..

About face and Remember these steps cuz coming to me I’ll Exam ya head and give ya ‘brain a quiz’ like being ‘Mentally test’
This aint an ‘unintentional accident’ ya not ‘Coincidentally wrecked’ cuz when I ‘Pop, you luring to demise’ like ‘Celebrity deaths’

exam your head, brain a quiz, mentally test.. wasn't feeling it wut all the words mean the same thing.. popular ingto demise doesn't fit real clean. could have been worded a lil better..

Utilize ya head and Listen, so whoever stated you a vet? Was wrong I’ll ‘cut you out that division’ like the ‘Sectors Ripping’
Now the weights on like the pressures pitched in so I’ll Burn ya scripts to leave ya ‘Play boiling’ Like ‘Hugh Hefner Fishing’

aint feelin this bar at all.. all the wordplays were harmless, and play boy ling was weak!

Trying to ‘edge out bars’ like ya Raps in border but im leaving you going ‘nuts around this mess’ like ‘sack disorders’
In fact watch I’ll ‘send you a hit’ like placing ‘crack in orders’ so now ‘T's in some shit’ like ‘flirtatious scat performers’

nutts around this mess? you claiming your a mess? and sack dissorders would be elphanttitis or jock itch.. not feeling it

ToxN:

Ya weak.. I'll take uzi and snap-his-piece, wanna 'get big asshole'? Go find a f.ag-n-tease
Ya lines been rotten-n-worse, so 'wad-up-ya-verse' and make ya rap-increase! (in crease)

first line was aiight.. like the second line.. throw away your verse and make it bigger.. i get it..

Ya shit-getting-older, it's 'perfectly clear' that I'm wiser.. I'm spittin-it-nobler (no blur)
Cuz ya concepts are weak-plays, so ya gonna need-Lays to put a 'chip-on-my-shoulder'!

clever wordplay with no-blur.. lays and chips are played but flip is creative..

I'm attackin-wild, wanna test me but like Martha Stewart you won't pass-the-trial
Straight up hurt-him, I'll make ya say "Cheese!" and start smirkin.. cuz my punches CRACK-A-SMILE!

first line is decent, not that hard.. crack a smaile was koo..

Ya words don't even-move-me, so you ain't 'fuckin Angel characters' when ya freakin-Lui's-see (lose see)
Ya get ripped-bud cuz ya verse is like the 'strip-club'.. we 'see-n-boo-b's'! (seein boobies!)

your an asshole for taking that luicy flip.. it was tight but mine would have been iller.. had me rollin with the second flip.. good bar..

My punches knock you out.. and like 'broken watersport boats' I won't leave you awake (a wake)
Ya raps all lies-holmes so like speakin bout rhinestones.. "We know that Ru be fake"!

hard bar.. clean first flip and second flip was hard!

Flow-ToxN
Punches-ToxN
Complexity-Tie
Wordplay-Tie
Metas- Tie
Humor-ToxN
Creativity-Toxn
Personals-Tie
Vocab- Tie
Multies- Tie
Nameplay- Baby Uzi

Vote : ToxN


Decent Battle..

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[...yOuNg jU...]

Just Observe the Fake Answer slips accept to battle me you well I ‘create an injury spree’ like I ‘make damage trips’
Stop quit writing ya Eight Stanza Scrips and Give up Rap ya Getting old ‘Toxn Ageing See’ like ‘Waste Management'
Toxin Agency

First line very forced... confusing.. needs punctuation.. it kinda frustrates you... lol..
Second line again needs punctution, but the Toxin Agency Was bananas... if ur first line was better, and ur punctuation was on point, this would of been the perfect opener...

Quick to jab this bitch and have em mad and shyt so even with a fetish for legs dude ‘Pass shin it’ is when this ‘folk receive love’
I’m Holding the snub and hoping to cut till you leaking through ya computer after sliced and ya ‘Dell Leak Up’ like ‘Grocery Mugs’
Passionate....Deli Cup

Pass shin is ill.. everything else in that line is weak... Deli cup is real creative, cut, leak, sliced... all in context... one thing though, if u "holdin a snub".. it means ur holdin a gun.. r u guna cut him wit a gun?... could of been flipped way harder n better

About face and Remember these steps cuz coming to me I’ll Exam ya head and give ya ‘brain a quiz’ like being ‘Mentally test’
This aint an ‘unintentional accident’ ya not ‘Coincidentally wrecked’ cuz when I ‘Pop, you luring to demise’ like ‘Celebrity deaths’
Popular inTo Demise

first line a lil forced, no?... popular into demise... the concept is clean... the play is clean.. but the flip... "celebrity deaths"???... it don't match.. popular people into demise.. yes.. but popular into demise no... could of been way more effective if worded better

Utilize ya head and listen, so whoever stated you a vet? Was wrong I’ll ‘cut you out that division’ like the ‘Sectors Ripping’
Now the weights on like the pressures pitched in so I’ll Burn ya scripts to leave ya ‘Play boiling’ Like ‘Hugh Hefner Fishing’
Playboy Ling

HArd FUKIN BAR... HOLY SHIT!!!!

Trying to ‘edge out bars’ like ya Raps in border but im leaving you going ‘nuts around this mess’ like ‘sack disorders’
In fact watch I’ll ‘send you a hit’ like placing ‘crack in orders’ so now ‘T's in some shit’ like ‘flirtatious scat performers’
Teasin some shyt

LMAO... HAHAHAHAHAHAHA... HARD FINISH WIT THE LAST TWO BARS



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Ya weak.. I'll take uzi and snap-his-piece, wanna 'get big asshole'? Go find a f.ag-n-tease
Ya lines been rotten-n-worse, so 'wad-up-ya-verse' and make ya rap-increase! (in crease)

Nice, simple, clean n to the point...

Ya shit-getting-older, it's 'perfectly clear' that I'm wiser.. I'm spittin-it-nobler (no blur)
Cuz ya concepts are weak-plays, so ya gonna need-Lays to put a 'chip-on-my-shoulder'!

lol @ No-Blur... nice.. second line kinda played wit the chip on shoulder, but yet effective... you could of some how linked it up to the WISE remark, n brang in the brand of chips.. imo

I'm attackin-wild, wanna test me but like Martha Stewart you won't pass-the-trial
Straight up hurt-him, I'll make ya say "Cheese!" and start smirkin.. cuz my punches CRACK-A-SMILE!

uuuuuuuuuuuh.. that was nasty.. i pictured that shit too

Ya words don't even-move-me, so you ain't 'fuckin Angel characters' when ya freakin-Lui's-see (lose see)
Ya get ripped-bud cuz ya verse is like the 'strip-club'.. we 'see-n-boo-b's'! (seein boobies!)

HARDEST BAR... OMG THIS SHIT IS HARD... BOWS DOWN N WORSHIPS TOXN

My punches knock you out.. and like 'broken watersport boats' I won't leave you awake (a wake)
Ya raps all lies-holmes so like speakin bout rhinestones.. "We know that Ru be fake"! (ruby)

NICE FINISHER


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Punches... Toxn

Wordplay... Hmmm... Uzi had a lot of them, but some didn't make much sense... Toxn had effective ones... Tie

Creativity.. Uzi

Flow.. Toxn

Multies... Tie

Nameplay... Ru be fake... Toxn aging see... nice play fellaz... Tie

Personals... Tox, his verse was more directed at Uzi



Uzi... if you would of worded ur bars a lil better, there is no way that you would of came out on top of this battle... u had the whole thing on lock concept wise... but the way u did it, it was almost like u thought of these ill ass concepts, rushed in developing them and just posted in a rush... take ur time.. develop ur ideas, cuz u got ill ones.. i'm only tellin u this cuz we're crew... u feel me???...

Toxn... ur the man... lol.. waz good wit the magz???

OVERALL VOTE... TOXN

[...yOuNg jU...]

Both are booted... so i guess i'll close this