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~Lady N~
11-02-2003, 07:46 PM
Hiding in hurt, no facing of fears
Yellin out to nothing but closed ears
Thoughts drenched in sweat of her mind
Hearts wrenched in loves never-ending time
Breaking chains as she finds herself free
Lasting remains, of her memories last plea
Numb to pain, no more agony,
Dumb to stupidity, now mentally reaching insanity
Slowly faster, now rapidly,
Fightin for nothing cause it all continues
Asking god for forgiveness, tho he refused
Lifes a game, but she withholds to loose
Health coverage, but soon not insured
Cause when pain attacks, there isn’t a cure
Suffrage is a disease, more deadly than cancer
Waking up in heaven, lifes meaning still unanswered
Searching for tha killer dat was always after her
No evidence, but dey aint givin up just yet
Investigations find, she’s her only suspect



~Suicide~

~Lady N~
11-02-2003, 10:25 PM
http://rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?p=21674&highlight=#21674
http://rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?p=22708#22708

~Lady N~
11-30-2003, 01:18 AM
i know i posted dis awhile ago, but i aint never got feedback so, i'm uppin for some, i'd appreciate it
~1~

MuZiKaLiTy
11-30-2003, 05:09 AM
wowwwwwwwww

it's deep i can really relate to ur wordz there..
i luved that:
Waking up in heaven, lifes meaning still unanswered
Searching for tha killer dat was always after her
No evidence, but dey aint givin up just yet
Investigations find, she’s her only suspect


couldnt have put it in better wordz...


-peace

...yOuNg jU...
12-03-2003, 11:09 AM
yea word, that was real deep.. it was very creative how u put it all out... i'm definitely feeling ya style... every word i felt... u got sum real talent... im hopping to see more of ur work... 1 luv

Juicy
12-03-2003, 03:27 PM
grl u dont know how in love i am with this poem coz i feell the same way....

~Lady N~
12-03-2003, 04:10 PM
Thanks everybody for the love

FlawlesS
12-05-2003, 07:14 AM
babygirl, that was crazy...much love to u...it was deep...
stay writin
peace