FINISHED ... (L) JuJu ...vRs... SiNiS (W)...

[...yOuNg jU...]

Check In...

[SiNiS]

4 bars
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Thanks for accepting the call out!

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This is my Check!

[...yOuNg jU...]

like i told Goph.. i wont be on till tuesday.. so i'll drop then.. this gives us enough time to drop.. i know u got a few pending battles...

[...yOuNg jU...]

iz u ready??

[SiNiS]

Yo i'm ready if u wanna do this??

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[...yOuNg jU...]

i aint started.. but i'll work on it today.. i'll holla wen i'm ready

[SiNiS]

Rip'd to Smitherines, I'm Here to Clean Up! My Punches 'Land n' Defeat' like 'American Marines in Iwo Jima'
A Schedualed 'Diss-Apointment' n Dreamer! Ju wouldn't 'Live up to Expectt-Asains' 'Relocating to Hiroshima'
*expectations*

Bend Limbs like Stick Twigs when I Take Scipts n Dick Em! KingBrown thinks you might WiN? thats an Un-earned Dictum
How u get Sick Concepts when u Never Spit One? I'll Roast ya with Punches n 'Getcha More-Aloe' then a Sun Burn Victim
*Morale low*

His Label Wack is 'Stable' like a Confined Stall! My Drops will 'Hammer' Rymes, and leave JuJu's Lines 'Mauled'
When I Connect hits, Skullz 'PoP uP' like a 'Fly Ball'... Ju could Die Now! still No One 'Wood Care' like ' PinesaL '

Loosing to YOU..! Dude, I aint Haveing It! Ju will 'Buckle in my Pressence' like 'Opened Belts In Packages'
I'll make it Obvious, Against me your No Rappin Threat! when you're 'Out-Wit-Ted' like 'Rosavelt's Cabinet'
*Buckle in my pressents ... Out Witted*


M U R D E R

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[...yOuNg jU...]

Like 'Prostitutes During Earthquakes' This 'Whore’s-Shook-Fronting'... Cuz In Text I’m Like Shaq, and he’s only an 'Amateur' who measures Four-Foot-Something...
But I’m a 'PRO'... wit 'Views Of A Buddhist'... Quick to {Floor-A-SIN} Like The 'Amorphous-Substance'!!!!!!!!!!!!!
{Flourescin}

Sin’s a {Dirty-Trans-Vest…Tide!} like ‘Cross Dressers Laundering’ Tight… Pants-N-Rocked-Bra’s…
No need to Slant-His-Top-Brah… Cuz In this battle I’ll “Perform Something Stupid”… To Be {FRANK}… {SiN, NOT-RAW}!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
{Frank Sinatra}
http://www.lyricsfreak.com/f/frank+sinatra/something+stupid_20056436.html

My {Wraps, Thai-Sin} like ‘Sellin Mexican Food In Singapore’… Defeat-S… How he plans to ‘Throw Punches’ when I’ll ‘Rip SiNiS Arms Apart’ like my name was ‘Theseus’...
Don’t need 1 more bar, cuz this ‘Kid Was Dead From The Start’ like A ‘Deceased Fetus’!!!!!!!
{Raps-Tie-Sin}
http://www.mythweb.com/encyc/entries/sinis.html


FINISHER!!!!!!

{Bam, Bam}... Fuck {Pebbles} I got these {Flint-Stones} Destined-To-Trouble-You...
Iz like u got adopted by {Barney and Betty} the way ur {LEFT-IN-THE-RUBBLE-DUKE}!!!!!!!!!
Cuz {Ur-A-Null}, So {Turn-N-Come-Piss} is the only time u’ll see {S-Wit-A-W}!!!!!!!
{Urinal / Turnin-Compass / SW: South West}

[...yOuNg jU...]

VoTe uP.. pPL

[kingbrown]

you'll sum sleep doctors with this voting...crazy....

but I got your feed...decent battle....

Sin
Rip'd to Smitherines, I'm Here to Clean Up! My Punches 'Land n' Defeat' like 'American Marines in Iwo Jima'
A Schedualed 'Diss-Apointment' n Dreamer! Ju wouldn't 'Live up to Expectt-Asains' 'Relocating to Hiroshima'
ok opener, meta works, not too complex tho. expect asians is good word association and wp, consistent theme. diss appointment was kinda funny, maybe coulda been cleaner, but effective for whole punch concept....multies nice here..
Bend Limbs like Stick Twigs when I Take Scipts n Dick Em! KingBrown thinks you might WiN? thats an Un-earned Dictum
How u get Sick Concepts when u Never Spit One? I'll Roast ya with Punches n 'Getcha More-Aloe' then a Sun Burn Victim
why u gotta name drop?...fucker...lolz...yeah ju can beat u...he has in the past, right?...anywayz...not really seein the weight of the personal attempt here, i'm just impressed with the vocab selection and that it made the multi hit. concept wise...i dunno...the second line i guess i see what u are implying- like he has a ghost writer or sumthin...but what's the diff between 'getting' sick concepts and 'spitting' here? how would u even know he has sick concepts unless he spits them...doesn't really make sense as a diss..wanted it to be cleaner....i feel like it was supposed to be some personal attempts, but they weren't setup or qualified well...ehh.. but despite all that, the wp flip with morale low is ridiculous...very nice and def effective...def strong finish to a questionable bar...
His Label Wack is 'Stable' like a Confined Stall! My Drops will 'Hammer' Rymes, and leave JuJu's Lines 'Mauled'
When I Connect hits, Skullz 'PoP uP' like a 'Fly Ball'... Ju could Die Now! still No One 'Wood Care' like ' PinesaL '
stable/confined stall is pretty simple for u, and the actual punch line is simple also, not real meta or similie..seemed fillerish...would care is sick tho...haven't seen that flip yet...creative and clean...nice punch on second homie...

Loosing to YOU..! Dude, I aint Haveing It! Ju will 'Buckle in my Pressence' like 'Opened Belts In Packages'
I'll make it Obvious, Against me your No Rappin Threat! when you're 'Out-Wit-Ted' like 'Rosavelt's Cabinet'
buckle...lol...solid wp similie, def effective, and out-witted is ridic...my fav of the verse...nice bar all around...fire...way to close strong


JU
Like 'Prostitutes During Earthquakes' This 'Whore’s-Shook-Fronting'... Cuz In Text I’m Like Shaq, and he’s only an 'Amateur' who measures Four-Foot-Something...
But I’m a 'PRO'... wit 'Views Of A Buddhist'... Quick to {Floor-A-SIN} Like The 'Amorphous-Substance'!!!!!!!!!!!!!
{Flourescin}
flow and multies typical ju style...clean, first line is not super deep or hard, but works aight as punch. second is clean wp punch, but i woulda qualified it with something a little more common. amorphous substance sounds like a dictionary def, not something u came up with , u feel me? it still works, but the vocab is almost seems outside your steez....
Sin’s a {Dirty-Trans-Vest…Tide!} like ‘Cross Dressers Laundering’ Tight… Pants-N-Rocked-Bra’s…
No need to Slant-His-Top-Brah… Cuz In this battle I’ll “Perform Something Stupid”… To Be {FRANK}… {SiN, NOT-RAW}!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
{Frank Sinatra}
dirty trans vest tide...this is creative no doubt, but the punch prolly coulda been harder.. kinda random to call him a tranny in this context...i think i just wanted sum better setup so it didn't seem just placed for the wp concept...but it actually does work and you did qualify it...it just doesn't resound as hard as it could of if it was setup a lil better. sin-not-raw is coo, but not the cleanest. its a real nice punch, which helps cuz of the slightly forced wp...but the creativity and punch weight hold this up...pretty coo....outside of the pronounciation the concept is fire....
My {Wraps, Thai-Sin} like ‘Sellin Mexican Food In Singapore’… Defeat-S… How he plans to ‘Throw Punches’ when I’ll ‘Rip SiNiS Arms Apart’ like my name was ‘Theseus’...
Don’t need 1 more bar, cuz this ‘Kid Was Dead From The Start’ like A ‘Deceased Fetus’!!!!!!!
{Raps-Tie-Sin}
not feelin wraps thai sin too much, just not that hard a concept despite the wp...but nice flip against his name at the end of the first line-kinda sux cuz i found that too a minute ago and was gonna flip it against him sumtime...but i ain't mad at u...lolz...creative ish...but dead from the start or dead giveaway or dead on arrival or dead on anything is kinda played mayne....feel like u didn't try too hard at the end here...
FINISHER!!!!!!
{Bam, Bam}... Fuck {Pebbles} I got these {Flint-Stones} Destined-To-Trouble-You...
Iz like u got adopted by {Barney and Betty} the way ur {LEFT-IN-THE-RUBBLE-DUKE}!!!!!!!!!
Cuz {Ur-A-Null}, So {Turn-N-Come-Piss} is the only time u’ll see {S-Wit-A-W}!!!!!!!
{Urinal / Turnin-Compass / SW: South West}
creative word association on first...no real punch at first, but but creative setup to second line...compass play is coo, but piss prolly isn't the best word in this context for the punch line, but the punch is aight- W/L plays are never fresh anymore, but this was setup well with compass...aight finisher...

Punches: Tie- sin was a little more direct with punch concepts- but ju was a lil more complex and put in some thought to his lines... both were talkin shit effectively tho...
Wordplay: Sin- both repped here pretty hard, but sin's plays were def cleaner...wood-care, outwitted, getcha morale low- very common ideas flipped into strong punches...
Multies: Tie
Personals: Ju -Ju's name plays were aight...and I like the flip with theseus.
Flow: Sin- shorter barz helped out here...strong and consistent


my vote= Sin

basically it came down to wordplay technique... Both were punchin, and had most of the basics down, but Sin's wp was just pieced better and made more effective punches. dead from the start also hurt ya verse ju- its only a 4 bar battle so u gotta limit the played concepts....

ultimately though, I almost think Ju tried too hard with the complexity here...'Amorphous-Substance' really through me off because it really seemed like a dictionary definition and def not a conversational phrase to qualify it....

unfortunate too, cuz honestly, I don't think sin put his best foot forward on this one... if a few of those concepts were slightly less forced, I would give this to ju in a second just because of creativity and complexity, but sin came hard enough with just enough consistency with his wp to edge this out....

KB

[...yOuNg jU...]

yes... a vote... thnx king... yea i looked at the amorpheous substance line after i dropped, n thought of a better way of flippin it... but thankz for the vote anywayz

1-0 Sin.. uppin

[obnoxious]

Rip'd to Smitherines, I'm Here to Clean Up! My Punches 'Land n' Defeat' like 'American Marines in Iwo Jima'
A Schedualed 'Diss-Apointment' n Dreamer! Ju wouldn't 'Live up to Expectt-Asains' 'Relocating to Hiroshima'
*expectations*

ok

Bend Limbs like Stick Twigs when I Take Scipts n Dick Em! KingBrown thinks you might WiN? thats an Un-earned Dictum
How u get Sick Concepts when u Never Spit One? I'll Roast ya with Punches n 'Getcha More-Aloe' then a Sun Burn Victim
*Moral low*

Morale doesnt sound like moral. This was a forced wordplay. Creative concept but forced execution.

Aloe
http://www.answers.com/aloe
click for pronounciation

Morale
http://www.answers.com/morale
click for pronounciation

Moral
http://www.answers.com/moral
click for pronounciation

nice multis - but ok/weak punch - creative intentions though


His Label Wack is 'Stable' like a Confined Stall! My Drops will 'Hammer' Rymes, and leave JuJu's Lines 'Mauled'
When I Connect hits, Skullz 'PoP uP' like a 'Fly Ball'... Ju could Die Now! still No One 'Wood Care' like ' PinesaL '

pinesol

nice

Loosing to YOU..! Dude, I aint Haveing It! Ju will 'Buckle in my Pressence' like 'Opened Belts In Packages'
I'll make it Obvious, Against me your No Rappin Threat! when you're 'Out-Wit-Ted' like 'Rosavelt's Cabinet'

forced, set up was cool but final line was forced .

Juju

Like 'Prostitutes During Earthquakes' This 'Whore’s-Shook-Fronting'... Cuz In Text I’m Like Shaq, and he’s only an 'Amateur' who measures Four-Foot-Something...
But I’m a 'PRO'... wit 'Views Of A Buddhist'... Quick to {Floor-A-SIN} Like The 'Amorphous-Substance'!!!!!!!!!!!!!
{Flourescin}

Forced, period, set up was cool but punch was forced:

http://www.answers.com/flourescence
click for pronounciation.

Sin’s a {Dirty-Trans-Vest…Tide!} like ‘Cross Dressers Laundering’ Tight… Pants-N-Rocked-Bra’s…
No need to Slant-His-Top-Brah… Cuz In this battle I’ll “Perform Something Stupid”… To Be {FRANK}… {SiN, NOT-RAW}!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok - it's Sin Nat Tra

My {Wraps, Thai-Sin} like ‘Sellin Mexican Food In Singapore’… Defeat-S… How he plans to ‘Throw Punches’ when I’ll ‘Rip SiNiS Arms Apart’ like my name was ‘Theseus’...
Don’t need 1 more bar, cuz this ‘Kid Was Dead From The Start’ like A ‘Deceased Fetus’!!!!!!!
{Raps-Tie-Sin}

the set up should have been your punch..... the last line was played..... cool bar overall

{Bam, Bam}... Fuck {Pebbles} I got these {Flint-Stones} Destined-To-Trouble-You...
Iz like u got adopted by {Barney and Betty} the way ur {LEFT-IN-THE-RUBBLE-DUKE}!!!!!!!!!
Cuz {Ur-A-Null}, So {Turn-N-Come-Piss} is the only time u’ll see {S-Wit-A-W}!!!!!!!
{Urinal / Turnin-Compass / SW: South West}

ok - not really creatively worded......urinal and turning compass phrases were abused, ridiculously forced........set up was ok, final punch was NO.

Multis = Juju
Flow = Sin
Creativity = Sin
Aggression = Juju
Punches = Sin
Nameflips = Juju
Personals = Sin
Metaphors = Sin
closer = Tie
opener = Juju
Wordplay = Tie

vote = Sinis

[SiNiS]

obnoxious..
i ment to spell morale in my explanations.. not moral, my bad, thats probably why it seemed forced.. its morale-low, not moral low.. sorry about that.. confused myself.. and you obviously! hope that helps you decide a winner.. LOL

and this bar?

I'll make it Obvious, Against me your No Rappin Threat! when you're 'Out-Wit-Ted' like 'Rosavelt's Cabinet'
^^
what was Forced?? that was dope.. dont see how its forced..? you are intitled to your opinion..

and whats up with the self created catagories in your vote? i found that interesting.. aggression?? this isn't audio, how can u Measure agression in a text battle!

we tied wordplay and Closer.. but for juju's closer you said,

ok - not really creatively worded......urinal and turning compass phrases were abused, ridiculously forced........set up was ok, final punch was NO.

??? how did we tie? can u explain..?

still, thanks for taking the time..

.


and KB...

When i said,
how you (get) sick concepts when you've never spit one..

i ment it as,
how you understand(get) sick concepts when you've never spit one..

depends on how you read it i guess..


thanks for voteing..




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[kingbrown]

^^^oh, ic....coo. its not the hardest punch concept tho, but its w/e...and out wit ted is not forced at all...i don't c what he was talkin about it bein forced...out witted/wit ted...come on..its the same syllables and consonant AND vowel sounds, with just a diff syllable stressed in each flip to give two completely different meanings...that is the cleanest wp can be, isn't it? interesting commentary...especially to a tie vote...

[obnoxious]

Sinis,


I know you meant morale. I wasnt confused. It's forced whether you meant to say morale, or moral, thats what I said. I know what I'm talking about. It's a plain matter of English grammar.

The word is pronounced in two syllables. The first syllable with Click Here (http://www.answers.com/morale). The last syllable with răl'. More however is pronounced môr, mōr and aloe is pronounced ăl'ō. Low is pronounced lō.

So why is morale low bar forced? 1. because the "mo" sound is wrong since you used more 2. because the răl sound is wrong because the r inflexion is missing. 3. because the lō sound is defficient of the l, when you say aloe. The ō is pronounced devoid of an l consonant which is necessary to make the low sound similarity.

and, You tied the closer because your wordplay was as forced for the final bar as his was but you both had decent setups and multis. Out with Ted doesnt really sound outwitted.

check the pronounciations:

out·wit (out-wĭt')

http://www.answers.com/outwit

with (wĭTH, wĭth)

http://www.answers.com/with

wĭTH doesnt sound like wĭt'. I would have though this is a matter of fact. If you want to disagree thats your perogative.

[...yOuNg jU...]

ok... here's where i don't agree... first... people from different places pronounce shit different... Raw for example... i have heard it pronounced, Rah.. Roh... it's hard to spell out.. but my point is, different parts of the country, even different hoods, blocks.. pronounce different... i understand that this is not audio... however, people should be a little open to the wordplays... more-aloe is straight genious... madd props sin.. n i aint trynna knock u ob... i'm just trynna get this point across cuz it's been buggin me, n ur not the first to bring it up either..

[SiNiS]

OK obnoxious,

Either you are upset that i K.O.'d you.. or b/c you miss pronuounced my Name as 'sign' in that battle and you got called out for it...

but It would seem that you dont believe in useing SLANG when ya write Text.. Thatz chill.. just try to use some imagination when reading others b/c humans are subjet to be products of there enviroment, and i talk like everyone else around me..
Thats all i can say..

cuz you are the only one taking what i wrote the way you did.. must be the the difference in the way we speak..

Good Battle Ju



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[obnoxious]

it has nothing to do with whether you Kod me, Id give you the same feed I give anyone else. I wouldn't have replied a second or third time, if you'd just accepted the vote without being overdefensive. I'll stop replying to this thread now. My votes arent malleable to influence, it's based on what I think, not what you think. Like it or leave it.

[...yOuNg jU...]

ummm.. so it's 1-0 Sin?.... lez get some votes

[...yOuNg jU...]

yo sin.. u ever been interviewd for the mag??

[SiNiS]

nah, why?

1-0 uppin


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[...yOuNg jU...]

well since Tox is booted.. n KMA no longer here... i wanna do the mag... so i was wondering if u'd like to get interviewed for the mag?

[SiiNiDE]

*Edited- This member has Read the Rules But Has Failed to Comply, So his Comments on this battle Have been removed, He didnt Vote either-Shoalin*

[Young_Ghost]

Both had great drops

Best Bars:

Sinis

His Label Wack is 'Stable' like a Confined Stall! My Drops will 'Hammer' Rymes, and leave JuJu's Lines 'Mauled'
When I Connect hits, Skullz 'PoP uP' like a 'Fly Ball'... Ju could Die Now! still No One 'Wood Care' like ' PinesaL

JuJu

Like 'Prostitutes During Earthquakes' This 'Whore’s-Shook-Fronting'... Cuz In Text I’m Like Shaq, and he’s only an 'Amateur' who measures Four-Foot-Something...
But I’m a 'PRO'... wit 'Views Of A Buddhist'... Quick to {Floor-A-SIN} Like The 'Amorphous-Substance'!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Flow: Sinis
Open: JuJu
Close: JuJu
Multies: JuJu
Punches: Sinis
Personals: Sinis
Enjoyment: Sinis

Overall: Sinis

Great battle for both, but i feel that Sinis came stonger

[obnoxious]

editted my vote, voted sin based on quality.

[bobbytang2]

both raps were absolutely shithouse
its the shittiest raps i have ever heard
seriously imagine putting that shit on audio
then stopping and explaining what it meant
a skilled rapper like me doesnt need to explain his words
they come out naturally and everyone understands it

go practice you losers
vote goes to bobbytang.
WORD EM UP!

[D-drunk]

I'm a phaggot, and so is Bobby.

[InViNcIbLe]

please ban those 2 idiots^^^^^^^^^6



p.s
sry for the freepost, jus had to say to ban dem


AhA...

[SiNiS]

still open..?



2-0


Vote Up!





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[InViNcIbLe]

holy shit da SINIS IS BACK


I can read da future LOL.

WELCUM BACKK
AhA...

[YouNgWuN]

don't take this shit personally but i VOTE FOR SINIS aiight he had a better diss

[[King_Mc]]

ya vote dont count since u cant vote in rd3 and u didnt explain ur vote..


flow...S
multies...J
punches...S
personals...S
wordplay/metaz...TIE
opener...J
closer...TIE
creativity... TIE
enjoyment...S

O/A---> SiNiS, thawt i'd vote, this had been open forever... good battle tho.. peace

[...yOuNg jU...]

imma close this.. SiNiS Wins..