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[PLAYBOYBLAZE]

Her water has broken, the time has come,
husband's in a panic and family's feeling
numb. Completely unprepared and cannot
stop nature, they must follow the timeline
written by our creator. Labor sets in,
minutes from new life, husband's taking heat
given to him by his wife. He's on his way,
family can hear it through the walls, the cord
has been cut, a new life, so small.
He has finally arrived, driven by others
anticipation, grateful, I, as we hold a
relation. God has breathed air into his
lungs and love into his heart, gave him
beautiful blue eyes plus the boy's
extremely smart. The first of his
generation, the new future family padre
but first he must learn to clean his room
and wash his dirty laundry.

-peace

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[~Lady N~]

I thought it was clever. It's alot lighter and just an amusement poem. I liked how it told a story. Much love to u and keep on doin ur thing.

[FlawlesS]

definetly just something for amusement...but it was good...a sign of a great writer..bein able to tell a story..do ya thing son